Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: Love_SA
read all in a go...loved itt..amazing writing and the story itself

Thank you, glad you liked reading it.

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Moi Back..will read and get back to you super soon ! :)

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serendipitylove

@serendipitylove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Hi😊

I just found your story! I have to say that it was amazing! So beautifully written...fabulously expressed flow of words!
I totally fall flat for arnav redemption ffs...They're my favourite genre of FFs...I'm sooo glad I could find another divine redemption ff! Its the one thing they completely messed up in the show...after all the cruelty he dished out to khushi we never got to gloat over a suffering arnav...I had always wanted Khushi to walk out...She didn't deserve what she went through...And i wanted arnav to have a painful repentance before a happy ending...That she shouldn't forgive him easily...he should be made to beg for it...he should earn it... I believe that the show started going downhill since then...
Anyway my money is on you to get what I've always wanted!!

Just one thing though..I'm confused as to whether arnav is convinced of khushi's innocence in the shyam matter... because in part 2, when he speaks to payal and she says "How do you possibly expect me to accept a relationship that was established at the cost of my innocent sister?" His response is "Innocent?
So why does he doubt her innocence? Is it because she concealed the shyam matter? I'm also confused as to arnav's real feelings for her now... His conversations with aakash and anjali suggest that he has not accepted his feelings for her till now. So is it guilt or is it love? Or is he only admitting to himself that he is in love?

Anyway, its been ages!!!! pleeeaaase update ASAP!!!!
Can't wait for the next part!
I have sent you a buddy request...please pm me when you update...
And please update soon!!

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penrith

@penrith

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

nice... now Asr is going to erupt like a volcano...

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Escapist
Moi Back..will read and get back to you super soon ! :)

Good to see you back. And the blog is all set up too. Drop me a PM when you are truly back.

Wb!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: vann
Update...update...update!

I know ... I know. I'm late with this update. I ended up writing for a FF that had been stuck for ages. Am back here now. SOON!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: serendipitylove
Hi😊

I just found your story! I have to say that it was amazing! So beautifully written...fabulously expressed flow of words!

I totally fall flat for arnav redemption ffs...They're my favourite genre of FFs...I'm sooo glad I could find another divine redemption ff! Its the one thing they completely messed up in the show...after all the cruelty he dished out to khushi we never got to gloat over a suffering arnav...I had always wanted Khushi to walk out...She didn't deserve what she went through...And i wanted arnav to have a painful repentance before a happy ending...That she shouldn't forgive him easily...he should be made to beg for it...he should earn it... I believe that the show started going downhill since then...
Anyway my money is on you to get what I've always wanted!!

Just one thing though..I'm confused as to whether arnav is convinced of khushi's innocence in the shyam matter... because in part 2, when he speaks to payal and she says "How do you possibly expect me to accept a relationship that was established at the cost of my innocent sister?" His response is "Innocent?
So why does he doubt her innocence? Is it because she concealed the shyam matter? I'm also confused as to arnav's real feelings for her now... His conversations with aakash and anjali suggest that he has not accepted his feelings for her till now. So is it guilt or is it love? Or is he only admitting to himself that he is in love?

Anyway, its been ages!!!! pleeeaaase update ASAP!!!!
Can't wait for the next part!
I have sent you a buddy request...please pm me when you update...
And please update soon!!

Hello Love!

First of all, welcome to the LB thread and Thank you for your wonderful comment, I love hearing from my readers.

Did you realise how long this last update was? It was nearly like three updates rolled into one ;) so I'm hoping my readers will forgive me for the delayed update this time around😳

@Red, we all wanted that, didn't we? And instead we got Masala Mama. Oh well, lets see how this goes here. Will try and make sure Chotte doesn't get an easy redemption in this one at least. Khushi has already walked out, and sent him divorce papers! She sure is giving it back.

About your doubt, its fair to say, Arnav is an enigma at this point. He is definitely struggling with his inner self. Guilt is not something easy to live with, so everyone who carries that burden has to find their own way with dealing with it.

Either that or I just love messing with your heads at times😆

Update should be soon.

cheers,

Aria

Edited by -Aria- - 12 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: penrith
nice... now Asr is going to erupt like a volcano...

Hey!

Thanks for your comment. But what good will that do him? An active volcano will only destroy things around it ...don't you agree?

cheers,

Aria

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vann

@vann

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

You know what I am really waiting for is the chef khushi, you showed us...an independent woman...that is another thing that We missed out in the show apart from the redemption, ofcourse

Edited by vann - 12 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

Wow this is a brilliant and mind blowing story, yet quite emotional.

Just read all the parts and each update was written exceptionally well.

Loved where you have started the story from and based it on the forced contract marriage.

Poor khushi had been through so much heart break, Arnav was so cruel to her after her marriage.

But I'm glad she left him, but does Arnav still think she is guilty or he is thinking that just to make himself feel less guilty after what he has put Khushi through.

Feeling sorry for Akash, but totally agree with Payal leaving, I'm glad she did it for khushi.

I'm so happy that khushi has done well for herself and she has become a chef.

So finally Anjali told Arnav she had known the reason for there marriage and she gave him the divorce papers that khushi left, Arnav was so anger.

Eager to read more, please continue soon.

You are an amazing writer.

Please PM when you next update please xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago