Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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allegro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Awesome update.

Loved it.

Continue soon.

Thanks for the PM. 😃

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Hi A!

Revealing the layers one by one in every part. Khushi and Ved conversation is insightful giving a partial view of Khushi post separation. I was so sure that it will be some small letter from Khushi to Arnav, but why will you allow to rest; you give us the shock of divorce papers. Hmmm. I am so eager to know in full how did they come to this state of so much hurt and pain. I know I will have to wait a little lot more to get it all out from you.

Go on.

PS: No, I don't want Pablo's frequency of updates here. I want soon. Yeah, very soon. 😊

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vann

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: -Aria-

Hey Vann, so how was the surprise?😛 Hope you liked it ;)
@bold, yes it does seem so, doesn't it? But the thing is she has no clue as of now.
Repentant ASR would have been a delight to see on the show, pity they skipped it. Oh well, we can dream on here...

Stalking so soon? Someone told me, this update is almost like three updates in one if you by how many words it has...😆 I was planning to take a longish breakkk after this update😆

Great surprise! I am glad that khushi has no clue, otherwise being khushi she would probably have rushed back to set things right, at least for her sis. For me the story is not complete without a repentant ASR. Thanks to ff writers for making him grovel and grovel. :-)

So, Take your longish break and be back soon. Would be waiting for the next!

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greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

I just stumbled upon your FF, today!
The title of your story caught me.. but couldn't understand its significance,though.
(Liquorice is a black coloured candy.. If its burning, then what can be inferred from that ? *I've become a tubelight, maybe!! *

A fat envelope containing Divorce Papers! Truly unexpected..

Past revelations were great.. Why won't Arnav admit that he misses his wife, terribly? Too Stubborn, huh?

Payal is a treat to read.. And a younger Payaash in the making. Wow!

I just hope Lavanya is a cameo here!

If Anjali cannot do something constructive to mend up Khushi and Arnav's lives, then atleast she should not ruin Arnav's life either by constantly coaxing him to "move on" .
I'm really annoyed with Anjali. It's time, she gives up her irritating habits of meddling with other people's lives.

Just out of an itching curiosity, Is Ved seeing Anjali ? ;)

P.s. - I've sent you a buddy request. I'll be glad if you can PM me. :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: one-direction
LOVED THE UPDATE

Thanks a lot :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: allegro
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM. 😃

Thanks a lot Allegro :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: rspbarke
love them all

Thanks rspbarke :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Hi A!

Revealing the layers one by one in every part. Khushi and Ved conversation is insightful giving a partial view of Khushi post separation. I was so sure that it will be some small letter from Khushi to Arnav, but why will you allow to rest; you give us the shock of divorce papers. Hmmm. I am so eager to know in full how did they come to this state of so much hurt and pain. I know I will have to wait a little lot more to get it all out from you.

Go on.

PS: No, I don't want Pablo's frequency of updates here. I want soon. Yeah, very soon. 😊

Hi Prasanthi,

You watching anything thesedays?

lol yeah, no worries, Pablo's kind update frequency takes some doing. I can't believe its going to be almost four years soon. I hope to wrap it up soon, with two updates max. 😆

Why did you think there would be a letter there? I know a lot of you guys were expecting that but KKG works in weird ways. As you wrote, one layer at a time...and by the time we get to the end, it should all add up and make sense.

Thanks a lot for commenting. Will get started on the next update soon.