Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

I just found u r ff...nd i m completely hooked on it...
Luved the way u took over the story...
M very proud of payal nd khushi for maintaining their stance...
Nd the last update was brilliant...
Very eager for next update nd cont soon

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: laksh65
awesome great chapter, self respected khushi gave a taste of his own medicine to mighty ASR.
thanks for pm cont soon the next chapter.

Hey, glad you enjoyed reading about this Khushi who gives back as she gets! We all love a repenting ASR, don't we?

You are welcome for the PM, will continue at the regular time. Thanks a lot for commenting Laksh :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: soaringskies
aria...your words bring emotions alive... plz update more often...and u write amazingly...😊

Thank you for the compliment SS :)

This update was like three in one, so technically this makes up for the delayed update ;) 😆

Will update at the regular time.

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casker

@casker

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Kushi and Anjali contact each other. Arnav still thinks Kushi is at fault. 😕😕

Kushi is in India or any other place. Shyam is still there. If not then who is using Anjali's card. 😕😕

So many questions not clear about anything.

But i love your writing. pls update regularly.

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TheFictionFreak

@TheFictionFreak

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Just came across this story..
Amazingly written 👏

Edited by swetha_ch - 12 years ago

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Wow!! all your updates are so very impactful..the scenes just refuse to leave my head..I love this story and the way you present it. kudos to you..wish you find time to update this more frequently..

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inajnar

@inajnar

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Der se hi sahi...but it was an intense update...

Loved it !!

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Aria you finally updated! :| :P

its getting interesting by every chapter. Khushi s convo with Ved was quite insightful as her state of mind.

Many questions still are around but i will wait for the story.
So those were divorce papers..hmm!