Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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sam_93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

loved the update!!!! awww "red nose" bechaari khushi...

btw m first!!😛

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Chochoo83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

he open that envelop n found divorce paper... i m wordless right now u worte each n every line beautifully ...anjalii is behaving so roudley though she kept that letter for whole 3 years... khushi too missed him red nose aww hope they will be together soon , is ajnali talking to ved???

thanx for pm dear

pls continue soon

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samarablog

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

I really did not expect this..
Loved the way you have been changing the times and moods of the story! Whiplash!

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vann

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Yay yay yay you updated!

And this one leaves me hankering for the next. Great stuff. So all relationships are in a tangled mess and only the return of khushi Kumari Gupta Singh raizada can sort them out. So far so good. But the real cliffhanger, she decided to do away with Singh raizada three years ago. And so did her sis Payal...raizada brothers in a bad shape. Great. repentant ASR is such a weakness...sigh. Will start stalking again tomorrow...

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reshkn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

awsome update...so kushi doesnt know payal had left aftr her...she has been far away from everything...and the envelope had divorse papers ...how would he react to that..??akash has been through hell...everything needs a clean up...very soon...!!!

the red nose...brought back memories ...!!!beautiful...!!!😊

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Mariam Khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Okay I'm super siked that you updated. Khushi doesn't know that Payal left Shantivaan. I really hope she calls home. I'm sure Ved will help her out with it