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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: the_breeze

This was sheer perfection... You have described all the emotions, hell even the atmosphere and the surroundings so beautifully that I could imagine everything in stark vivid detail... And for that you deserve a standing ovation from me 👏


The portrayal of Khushi's and Arnav's emotions from those turbulent times just made me so nostalgic that the entire update took me back in time to the point where this all happened in the show... Such is the power of your words...

I must say you have a wonderful job of giving perspective to the situation from different points of view, though what I am most happy about is the fact that you have shown us a stronger Khushi and for that I would love to give you a hug!! 😳

Anywho, please do continue soon and thanks for the PM!


@bold, thats something I always wanted to see on the show. Its nice to see so many people agree on that! 😳 We all love a strong Khushi who fights back, don't we?

Thank you for your words of appreciation, works as a great encouragement to keep writing more :) Guess I had to start at this point because this is where all the bitterness sort of sets in and esp. for this story where this is pretty much the starting point of the painful past in a way.

Will update at the regular time. Thanks again.

Cheers,
Aria


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupama.

It had to be this.the kind of present time you painted,it indicated that the past had to be too hurtful..so here it is..you've very well potrayed an arnav who is cruel..much..


Yep, the past had to be hurtful and it may possibly get worse! Lets see how that pans out eventually...

Thank you Anupama for commenting :)

Aria
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tinsel

What was in the envelope?Lots of suspense.Poor Khushi...Brilliant update


Any guesses? It will be revealed soon... and hopefully then everything comes together to make sense!

Thanks a lot Tinsel :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you KS :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story.
Read all 4 parts in one go.
Wondering what is the content of the envelope.
Continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow ur style of writing is amazing!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reshkn

all in one go...loved it...😊

so much suspense...going back and forth with the past n present...
...is he sorry???does he know the truth??the envelope???who called kushi...how did she end up becoming a chef...nd wat happened to payal-akash..???so much to unfold...i m excited to know more..


Everything will become clear as the FF takes shape. Will update soon at the regular time, stay tuned for more ;)

Thank you for your comment :)

Aria
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Samyxx

Oh.. Arnav will so regret it when he finds out..


And i want him to suffer, I dont want Khushi to forgive him...


As we see in the present day, he is suffering already!

Thanks Samyxx for commenting.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: allegro

Awesome story.

Read all 4 parts in one go.
Wondering what is the content of the envelope.
Continue soon. 😃


The contents will tumble out soon!! :D I'm surprised no one has taken a guess so far.
Will update at the regular time. Thank you for commenting Allegro :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zyanah

wow ur style of writing is amazing!


Aww...Thank you Zyanah :)

Aria

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