Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: ag0502
Amazing
Arnav that i knew is arrogant, ruthness, angry man but never disloyal to khushi even on their halted marriage.
So, hopefully arnav not with other woman this time too
Do continue
Thank you

Hi there, I agree with you on that. Let's see how it pans out here in this FF ;)

Will continue soon, Thank you for your comment AG :)

Cheers,

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: sam_93
great update!!! can't wait to read ahead!! btw thanks for the pm!!!

Will update soon. Thank you for your comment Sam :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: neverbefore
A very powerful chapter. I love Khushi's spirit. You've also portrayed Arnav's confusion so well. Loved it

Not fair! I just realised that we still don't know what's in the envelope from the last chapter!! 😛

Ha! the envelope😆 Soon!!

Glad to know you enjoyed reading the update. Thank you for your comment NB :)

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: truptscool
Superb..

Thank you :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: harsha577
Blast from the past was good !!

Please update soon about the envelope

Glad you liked the blast from the past, more on the envelope soon ;)

Thanks Harsha for your comment :)

Aria

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

aria u write amazingly...😊

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

This was sheer perfection... You have described all the emotions, hell even the atmosphere and the surroundings so beautifully that I could imagine everything in stark vivid detail... And for that you deserve a standing ovation from me 👏

The portrayal of Khushi's and Arnav's emotions from those turbulent times just made me so nostalgic that the entire update took me back in time to the point where this all happened in the show... Such is the power of your words...

I must say you have a wonderful job of giving perspective to the situation from different points of view, though what I am most happy about is the fact that you have shown us a stronger Khushi and for that I would love to give you a hug!! 😳

Anywho, please do continue soon and thanks for the PM!

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

It had to be this.the kind of present time you painted,it indicated that the past had to be too hurtful..so here it is..you've very well potrayed an arnav who is cruel..much..