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Posted: 12 years ago
Hate when he has to go leaving her alone... Can't bear that.. Its even worse than now😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

SUNDAY READS.
TWO BODIES, ONE SOUL


Adrit had his hand around her shoulders as she motored the boat back to the docks.

For this situation I have a good song to sing "Badlengi rituein aada/par main rahoongi sada...issi tarha tere bahon mein bahein daal ke/ har lamha...har pal..."

He felt a pleasant sensation as her head bobbed against him as she sneezed, sneezed some more and sniffed..

What kind of sensation? Can I ask Dr.A? May be " Goriya main tere sang zindagi beetayoonga/ rab se yeh maine wada kiya..."

She could feel him grinning even without looking.

aww..."Kahe pada peeche/ jane de Bairi..."

Dont you grin achchooo... Dr. A, It is all be... achchooo.. because achchooo of you she grumbled.

Aww..my Shylu fell ill. She is caught by cold. And everything is Dr.A's fault.😆 AM I right Shylu??

Her nose had gone a lovely shade of red... she sniffed..

Wow...evern mine becomes red too when I sniff and sneeze.😆So no problem...

A pristine white handkerchief was put on her nose.

Handkercheif?? "Pehle bimaar karte hai phir dawa karte hai/Kaise Doctor hai aap kaise aap ilaaj karte hai?"

Blow he commanded..

Wow...I have heard a song somewhere...DOn't remeber the song but these words are come out by themselves after reading this situation..."Tu zakhm de/ Marham bhi aake tu lagai/Zakhm pe bhi mujhko pyar ayein..."

Ewww Dr. A, I don't.... and sneezed into it... Now I will have to keep this, taking the hanky from him and blowing into it.

Aww my sweet baby...

He moved to stand behind her, her hair blew gently into his face.

She moved back to rest against him.

Words were no longer needed.

The silence was filled with love.

Well again some lines from a song" Reh reh ke dil mera/ tham sa gaya/ chhuke mujhe tu ne / jab yeh kahan/ goriya main tere sang zindagi beetayoonga/ rab se maine wada kiya/ Sanson ne bandhi hai/ Dor piya/ tohre liye humra dhadke jiya..."

...

Tarun and Vishak waved as they neared.

Brats, all the three of you, lifting her head back wards, her neck arched to look at him.

Which three are Brats Shyla??😆😉

He could see the tip of her red nose, her eyelashes long and black fluttered.

Wow...

Cupping her neck, he placed a kiss on her forehead.

Hai main toh mar jawa...iss sardi zukam se Dr. A.

She sneezed, he frowned, he did not want her falling sick.

You must be careful Dr.A from next time.

Vishak secured the boat when they reached.

Adrit got off and lifted her out.

Her cheeks were flushed, eyes watery and nose now a bright shade of red.

Oh No! This is definitely flue...I found every symptoms of Shyla matched. God...

Common angel, we better get you home quick, he pulled the jacket tighter around her.

Naren's grey fortuner stopped as they walked on to the road.

What did you do to her demanded Ridhi as she stepped out??

Last time she was sobbing and this time .... Awww come here Shylu, Naren held her against him ..what did this big bad Dr.A do to you, he asked teasingly.

She launched into details in between a series of sneezes.

But Satya will take good care,

Satya is my class mate, Tarun was whispering to him.

Really!!

I am sure Satya will take good care of you Doll said Adrit as he grabbed her back, she stood with her hand around his waist.

We should get going Adi, may be we should just take her along,

Vishak, Tarun, take you Di back safely, don't want the aunts getting suspicious, Ridhi was instructing the boys.

Wow...Vishak and Tarun are very caring😆 ...and so is Dr.A🤣

Naren was getting back into the car, Adi, get in, we have a really long drive.

Adrit moved towards the car, her small hand tightened around his and he felt her other hand clutching his shirt as if restraining. He groaned inwardly.

Her lips were smiling, but her eyes said something else.

He gently rubbed her hand with his thumb, comfortingly.

He bent his head, I will be back soon pumpkin he said, his lips brushing her ears.

She sneezed, grey eyes watered.

He hugged her knowing they were tears. He hated leaving her.

He kissed her fingers as he settled inside the car.

Shylu, Adrit will be back so soon, you wont even have time to miss him darling, Ridhi comforted her.

She stood watching till the car turned the corner.

He felt tightness in his throat as she disappeared from view.

@Red a song..." na jao Saiyaan/Chhuda ke baiyan/ Kasam tumhari / main ro padungi/ ro padungi..."😭



Great update Jaya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh poor Shylu with cold and her achooo was damn cute...i could actually imgine the whole scenario..lovely update😳😳..So what happens next..can't wait for the next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u all for reading darlings love every one of u for all the encouragements suggestions poems sketches that you all post making the story even more beatuiful.




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Posted: 12 years ago
i think this story will need second thread ..coz the story actually just started and its almost 100 pages
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jhum... I think we need to make a fan page for this story...😎
I actually have a fan fiction of ADLA in my mind😉
Edited by krsna_R - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: krsna_R

Aru ji... I think we need to make a fan page for this story...😎

I actually have a fan fiction ADLA in my mind😉



oh u too want to write a moharika fanfic?? plz carry on ..there is a fan club on facebook on a fan fic of indiaforums called Prithvi..on rajat tokas and mugdha chapekar..we can make one on AdLa too

but if you want to write plz write on Moharika ..coz they are the source of adla

and i am jhum..not aru
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Posted: 12 years ago
mrmrfrevr ji...
That song is Rehna tu from Delhi 6, Zakhm bhi tu de, marham bhi tu hi lagaye, zakhm pe bhi mujhe pyar aaye...

You are quite musical... I'm loving it !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shorry 😃 Aru ji... I mean Jhum ji..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
krish this is a fan fiction sweety u want an FF for adla!!!!!!!
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sona did not read this update I think she did not mention anything. But tht is ok,, she is being smothered with so much love. the followers have just shot up and she is interacting so much with all of them.
Amazing. and awesomeness.

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