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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes i am ecstatic speed.
Friends, darlings, my readers here, I have a very a special person reading this FF.
SHYLA HERSELF 😃😭
She read the entire story in one sitting. I feel honoured and humbled that she liked it.
Jhum a big hug to u darling.
I tweeted her about u
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Posted: 12 years ago
I like that symbol she wants to engrave on the ring. Thoughtful of you Jaishree. It is such a brilliant ideal to engrave the initials of their names on the ring. So sweet. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats Jaya...as Shyla read and likedyour Just A Story .
And I am waiting for the day of engagement and the ring she asked Adrit to bought ...😉SO till then...
P.S. Oh I loved that part where her aunt constantly told her that she was no longer a girl. She was now a woman. And AdLa's interaction.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jayu nice update. The best thing is Sona has read your FF and she has tweeted most to you. She has loved reading your FF. That is the best compliment for you. Congrats. 🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
VALENTINE SPECIAL [ FOR JHUM]

Adrit disconnected, looked towards Vishak and winked.

Hope Tarun is doing what he is supposed to be doing bhiayya.

Relax Vish, I am sure the she will be here soon Adi grinned cheekily.

The two of them sat back in the large boat and waited.

Adrit leaned back, so that he was not in view when she came along and smiled a satisfied smile.

Shyla was still dreaming. Di di… DIII…

Dolhins…. The dolphins Tarun was telling her breathlessly.

Taru, slow down baby, what of the Dolhins.

By now the old aunts and others had perked up their ears.

Something is wrong… they are behaving strangely.

He got a suspicious look from Shyla,

Who told you that?

Viji Di,,

Viji?

Satya told her!!

Don't know who told Satya, he said quickly before he was questioned.

Shylu better go and see what is happening, her mother called out. The aunts nodded, go dear, you understand them better than anyone else, .

Tarun was tugging at her hand, come fast Di.

Adrit had managed to get a boat which had enough decorations to keep them hidden from her view.

NOW

He had promised Meena he will be really careful.

He watched her from the shadows ,

His heart filled with sorrow.

Her boat came to a halt some distance away.

He watched her, his heart filled with happiness.


NOW

Sorrow, because he had thought he had lost her.

Grief because she was so alone in her pain.

You are my celebration La.

My very breath calls your name.


NOW

LA, each second of the last two years I had only you in each breath that i drew.

I want to lift you in my arms and tell the whole world that I LOVE YOU LA.

NOW

I want to gather you in my arms and say EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE ALRIGHT LA.


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Posted: 12 years ago
HMMM... THINGS GET A LITTLE ... READ ON...

Shyla was looking at the calm sea for any sign of the Dolphins..

She climbed on to the edge to have a better look.

She tied her duppatta to her waist.

Adrit almost immediately knew what she was going to do.

La he called out, but in that split second of him calling and she hearing. She had already leaped into the deep waters of the sea.

Shyla heard his call just as she went into the waters.

Realization dawned.

TARUNNN and

She saw Vishak's come up from behind Adi

VISHAKKK'

I AM GOING TO KILL ALL OF THEM '.

She bobbed inside the water spluttering angrily.

Vishak grinned, Adrit tried not to.

He held his hand out to help her her into the boat.

Bhaiyya, ALL THE BEST whispered Vishak as he quickly leaped into Shyla's boat.

Vishak,No you wont, Don't you dare take my boat.

Byeee, he waved... as he started the motor, even as Shyla glared at him angrily.

He was gone in a few seconds, leaving a very cold, wet and disgruntled Shyla and one Happy, VERY HAPPY Dr.A.


She continued to swim in the water, ignoring him totally.

Common sweetheart, you will catch a cold.

Not talking to you Dr.A

You can sit inside the boat and not talk to Dr. A.

She stuck her tongue out at him.

He looked down at her in the water...

Ok then I am going to eat up the Gold round wala all by myself, he opened one as he spoke and made a show of eating it.

She almost gulped down a whole mouthful of sea water.

Dr.A.. stop teasing.

Teasing? He asked poker faced.

He was popping in the third one, when she held up her hand.

He pulled her up

She climbed in, and straight into him

She shivered as she dripped all over shirt.

I am still not talking to you, her voice shaking.

His fingers moved the wet hair from her face, catching a drop of water as it slid down her cheeks.

She looked up her lips slightly open, innocently inviting.

All his intentions went for a toss.

His lips came down to capture its softness.

He tasted salt as he held her lower lips between his, pulling her wet body closer to him.

She felt little tingles run down her spine.

His tongue brushed against just the tip of hers.

His kiss deepened..his fingers pressed the small of her back...

A shiver ran through her, her fingers grabbed his shirt..

He groaned , hugging her and cursing himself for losing control.

LA LA you drive me crazy my Little Princess.

She stood within his embrace trembling, not sure from cold or the kiss.

He quickly removed his denim jacket and pulled it around her.

You make do things, that I should not be doing, his words warm.

She was too shaken to say anything, instead she went on her tip toes and murmered I LOVE YOU Adi and bit down hard on his ear lobe.

Ouch ' you minx, momentarily letting go of her, which was enough for her to make an escape.

I thought you were on your way Dr. A, she was breathlessly asking him.

You think I would leave without meeting you?

She grinned a happy grin and nodded.

Come here, he ordered.

No, you still have that glint in your eyes.

Glint? making a puppy face at her, I will be good, trying on an innocent look.

La come here angel, his soft voice was melting her resistance.

The boat gently rocked, as she walked into his arms.

He pulled the jacket closer around her as the breeze blew, she rested her head on his shoulders, his hand spanned her tiny waist holding her against him. Her hair was curling as it dried, he twirled it between his fingers,

Have I told you how beautiful you eyes are?

They are beautiful because they are looking at you Adi, lifting his palm she placed her lips on it.

Have to get you into some dry clothes La, don't want you falling sick when I am not there.

She promptly sneezed.

She grinned.

Sneezed again.

Since you are going away, Papa will have to call Doctor Satya..

Satya, now who is that?

He is the one who used to come over before you. Very handsome and really good with ankles also.

You deserve a slap for that Princess..

Pulling his jacket together, she looked at him with her large lovely eyes which was all brimming with tears.

LA!!!! What...?I did not mean that' silly girl'.

Don't go . shaking her head.

LA, baby, lifting her into him, placing small kisses on her forehead. I will back soon.

Really soon?

Really really really soon.

Her finger curled around his rudraksh, she sniffed, you did not give me the round gold wala?

I have to compete with chocolates for you love?

She nodded, sniffed

Aatichhooo.


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing hope sona reads this n know how we think of moharika I mean adrit n Shyla. Damn u such an awesome writer hats off to you:)
Edited by pritash05 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update jai😳😳loved it😛😳surely a double valentine treat😛waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww nice treat..and this doc..seriously ..despo😛..superb valentine treat..plz tweet the link to sona..i wish she reads
sometimes some of your words are new to me ..i understand it gradually..okk now a deep kiss ..don't know how this doc will spen this 6 months
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Posted: 12 years ago
i doubt if she is going to find the time to read. Yesterday i was lucky. just a few of us were tweeting .. so she read the tweets about shyla and also read the FF. I will post the link. but i dont expect her to read it

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