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Patrarekha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz post it today..i will die
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk


U do? It is ready was thinking of posting tomorrow.. 😳
simply loved ur siggy with the new white outfit da.. simply awesome 🥳


yes i do no prob if it is for 2morow waiting for sumthin is quite interesting😳oh Kad goin to kill me😆my new siggy is the 1st video in which i saw this handsome hunk called Mohit as Agantuk
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Posted: 12 years ago

HAPPINESS AND THEN AN "OH NO"

[first of two updates]

He sent a message to Naren . 'I PROPOSED'

Grinning, he awaited for reaction.

I PROPOSED, Naren read.

HE PROPOSED!!!

What the...

HE PROPOSED, looking at Ridhi.

HE PROPOSED??? OMG OMG OMG

Naren was already dialing

What do you mean, YOU PROPOSED??

Well I did, he said with satisfaction.

I thought the YES was for... Oh well forget that, what did Shyla say?

Hmmm, well..

Well what Adi, was it an YES ?

He laughed, I think so.

YOU THINK?

She said I am the brain wala doc, so I am supposed to know what her answer will be!

Aaah nice way to say YES.

There was a silence, as they felt each other's happiness.


As Shyla turned the corner, a speeding tourist bike lost balance, skidded straight towards her.

Trying to jump out of the way, she fell down a slope.

[THERE GOES MY RECORD, AND NO FAULT OF MINE]

She was bruised, sprained and bleeding from various places before she came to a halt.

Ouch, ouch ouch... she was in pain.

Adrit had driven back was just sitting down for a cup of coffee, he saw Vishak running and calling to him

What happened Vishak.

Di.. Di… was all he could get out as he gasped for breath.

Slow down Vishak,

Di is hurt really bad.

Adrit did not need to hear any further.

He put down his coffee mug,

Come, he said to Vishak.

Where is she, as they neared her house?

Down the slope, over there.

Slope?

Adrit looked at where Shyla had fallen, thinking of ways to bring her up.

Di, Vishak shouted before Adrit could stop him

Shyla opened her eyes,

[DR.A, I MUST BE HALLUCINATING]

She tried to sit up.

NO, he shouted, don't move.

From the way she had fallen, she might have broken something.

[OK HE IS REAL, IF HE LAUGHS I WILL KILL HIM]


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
LET'S PLAY DOCTOR PATIENT

With the help of a few neighbours, they moved her inside the house.

Mala was in tears.

Shyla was in pain.

Adrit took over.

He made her as comfortable as possible.

Aunty I will need some hot water, need to clean her wounds before I can examine her.

Her ankle was swelling up fast.

La he whispered when mala left the room,

She opened her eyes, saw a grin trying not to make an appearance.

Don't you grin Dr. A..

He went all serious, where is it hurting ?

Everywhere she said, her eyes filling with tears.

Shhh… .. rubbing her forehead, relaxing her.

Mala brought the hot water.

Aunty can you please close the door he said, too many curious neighbours.

He gently wiped her badly scrapped and bleeding elbows, and knees.

Her eyes remained closed with pain.

[HE WAS A DOCTOR, YET HE COULD NOT BEAR TO SEE HER THIS WAY]

La I am going to examine you ankle, it will hurt.

She nodded, bracing herself.

He gently touched her ankle.

Wiggles you toes La..

NO, I won't, it hurts she said.

La, just give it a try please.

I have to know if it is fractured or sprained.

After a few seconds she wiggled it.

He sighed, not a fracture, but he needed to be sure.

He slowly rotated her ankle, causing her to wince and tears flowed.

Just a sprain he said.

JUST!!!

He came and sat next to her, leaning across to wipe her tears.

Thanks he said.

THANKS??

Ya got an excuse to be near you, he said with satisfaction.

She hit him with a pillow and cried some more for effect.

I hate doctors she announced to him.

I am getting all the vibes of hate, he pinched her cheeks.

[IN SPITE OF HIS LIGHTHEARTED BANTER, ALL HE WANTED WAS TO TAKE HER AWAY WITH HIM, KEEP HER SAFE]

Nandu had come in with his kit.

Going to give you a shot to help you sleep.

NO.

I promise it won't hurt a bit.

Big grey eyes looked pained.

Trust me he said.

She lifted her arm and screwed her eyes shut.

You can open your eyes, its over.

I can never hurt you La.

Soon she fell into deep sleep.

He sat watching her..

He had elevated her ankle. He applied Ice and then bandaged it.

He would have sat there till she woke up, but he felt it might not be appropriate.

He left some instructions and medicines with Mala.

I will come around in the evening to check on her he said.


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Posted: 12 years ago
^^^^ Oooh La La...

I now suspect did La really sprain her ankle or was it just an excuse for Dr Ad to...😉...you know what...touch her everywhere... 😉 😉 😉

And you know what...I don't think he really gave her the injection either. 😳

And the medicines...they must have been only vitamin tablets...😆


Edited by varaali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lolz varaali,,, u can take it anyway u want hahaha



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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Jaya Awesome updates...👍🏼
Jab bhi yeh ankhein khule...
Main dekhoon sirf tumhe.
Chot mein katrayoon toh chahoon tumhe...
Zindagi ab meri amanat hai tumhari...
Issko samhalna hai abse sirf tumhe.



Teri har dard,har taqleef...
deti hai mujhe hazar guna zyada taqleef.
Tere dard se murjhaya chehra...
dekh nahi payoonga main...
Abse tujhe anch ayein...
Yeh hone nahi doonga main.

Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Adrit wanted the door closed.. to avoid the neighbours..??
Nah...!! He just needed some personal privacy...😆

Btw from Brain-wala Dr.. Adrit became a Haddi-wala Dr...!! 😆

This time Shyla got badly hurt...!! 😕
And Adrit will take full Fayada of it...!! His doctor degree ka full paisa vasool...!! 😆😆

Very Nice Jaya...!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sia, All doctor will have the knowledge to check for fractures.
Right now he is in shyla little town more as a GP rather than a Brain doc.
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb updates loved it.

Edited by dhwani. - 12 years ago

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