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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hemaDaganKhian

if you have VM req for our AdLa pls let me knw lets do the magic with Moharika pics😉


me me me me requesting for one
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Posted: 12 years ago
This update was enthralling. Naren is the guy for the situation get to it as quickly as possible. Everybody needs a friend like him especially for people like Adrit who are shy by nature. But i liked it when Adrit took the initiative of texting Shyla and letting her know that he has feelings for her. She is still too young but very ready to fall in love. Next update will be exciting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
let me know Dr.A's age too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk


me me me me requesting for one


i'm waiting😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
The text interaction between Adrit and Shyla was very sweet. love this couple. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
THEY FIND EACH OTHER
[REPUBLIC DAY SPECIAL]

Mobile in class Shylu?

Her father was not sure whether to get angry or smile at his loving daughter who was truthfully telling him what had happened in class.

Who was messaging you?

Dr.A

Adrit?

Himant looked towards Mala.

A worried expression came over both their faces.

Dr.Adrit was a wonderful person, but a big time Doctor, a man from the city.

He looked at Shylu.

Still had the innocence of a child.

She could easily get hurt.


Adrit and Nandu reached rather late in the night. They had got held up because of a road block.

Will meet her when she goes on her morning Dolphin Rendezvous.


He stood on the small wooden platform watching her get the boat ready.

Shyla jumped and nearly let go of the boat when she heard the familiar voice.

GOOD MORNING.

She turned around.

He stood there looking at her.

What are you doing here?

Nice welcome Shyla..

Na na I meant weren't you in Mumbai?

Well I am here!!!

Would love to see the Dolphins, he said, walking towards the boat, not giving her much time to think.

Her palms were sweating,

Talking and messaging on the phone was one thing, but this...

She felt nervous.

He had already settled inside the boat.

She had no choice, but to get in and start the Motor.

Soon she was speeding towards Dolphin point.

He watched her with half closed eyes.

For someone who kept tripping and falling on solid land, she was steady as a rock on a moving, rocking boat.

Her knuckles were white as she clutched the throttle.

Shyla don't be nervous, I just want to talk to you, He voice was warm and comforting.

She cut the engine, and turned , and found herself looking at the rudrasksh that hung around his neck.

He placed both his hands on either side imprisoning her.

She felt her breath catch.

His fingers tucked back a stray wisp hair behind her ears.

He looked into two pools of grey.

They looked back into his.

I... she started nervously.

He smiled .

[HIS DIMPLES WERE DEEPER THIS CLOSE]

He ran his knuckles on her now deepening pink cheeks.

She gasped and tried to step back.

Dr.A, I am scared... she trailed .


Me too, he said.

That brought a smile on her lips.

You too?

Her nervousness beginning to melt.

La ..

He held her chin between his fingers,

and lifted her face,

Her palm came up to push away from him, instead it rested on his chest.

You have no idea how much I missed you the last few days.

She looked at him her lips slightly parted..

Me too she whispered..

They stood together in an embrace.

The breeze blew around them, the Dolphins whistled from a distance.

The sun rose slowly..

Time seemed to stand still.

The boat rocked as a large wave went below it. Bringing them back to earth.

Dr. A, I '. We' .

La.. We what? Confused that we don't know each other, and yet'..?

How did you' ..Oh ok.. Brain Doc..

Come on, he said,

Settling her down on the seat.

Let's get to know each other.

If that is what is worrying you.

He was more teasing than serious.

She pouted at him.

What do you want to know? He asked.

Well, all I know is you are a doctor, brain wala.

He grinned at the expression.

He launched off

Lost both my parents long back,

Wanted to study medicine since child hood, to understand the human brain.

I don't socialize much,

I don't drink, I love aloo in any form.

I am a fitness freak.

I love my work.

And right now, sitting with a woman, who is rocking, falling, throwing things into my comfortable stable life.

She glared at him, hummmp she went.

She could not hold the angry look for long,

It is a miracle I have not caused you any serious damage.

Of course you have, You have caused serious damage to my heart, he said, looking serious,


She burst out laughing,

He watched her laugh,

He kneel down ,took her palm within his.

La..

Will you fill every day of my life with this beautiful sound?

Her eyes said yes,

Her lips said. Pa and Ma'..

Shyla I need to know your answer before I talk to them.

He looked into her eyes anxiously.

A mischievous smile played on her lips.

She leaned forward to whisper into his ears.

You are Brain wala Doc, you tell me, what my answer is going to be.

You brat'and before he could do anything, she had moved to the far end of the boat.

He made a move to follow her.,

NO Dr. A you won't, it's time we get back, the sun can fry us.

What? No kiss ?

NO NO. no as she blushed to the roots.

Ok letting you off this time.

Next time won't be this easy, he threatened sweetly.

They reached the docking platform.

He held his hand out as she got off.

She put hers into his.

He held it tightly.

[I AM NEVER LETTING IT GO LA]

She allowed her hand to remain in his as they walked towards his car. It felt right.

Come with me for a drive..

No Dr. A Ma will be waiting.

He grazed her cheeks with his thumb,

Naren and Ridhi are driving in tomorrow, We will come together to meet you parents.

His voice held a promise,

There was Trust in her smile.

Now run off, don't fall he called out, as she began to walk.

She grinned.

He waited till she disappeared round the corner.

He sat behind the wheel.

[GOING TO CATCH YOU EVERY TIME YOU FALL]

Naren chose the correct time to call.

He simply said YES to the question that was not asked.

Naren and Ridhi sat holding each other, feeling absolutely wonderful.

Oh damn , they heard Adrit.

What happened?

I forgot to give her the Gold round wala. He laughed out loud.

Ya right, Adi you just needed an excuse to meet her again.

But then, he had to meet her even earlier than he thought.


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
im gonna 1st comment on this ud
what an ud they confessed their love did they😲yes FINALLY they did😆k call me shameless when tat nxt time will come which Adi mentioned😉im just gonna dream abt tat nxt time n☺️☺️☺️until somebody pat from my behind😆
Edited by hemaDaganKhian - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb updates Jaya👏👏Both are awesome.

Kyun main sochta hoon tumhe...
Sayad chahta hoon tumhe...
Tumse baat karne ko bekarar main...
tumhara sath paneko bechain main.
Tum ho mera woh sukun...
Jo kho gayi thi barso pehle..
Par ab na jane doonga tumhe.
Apne paas band ke rakhoonga tumhe.
Dil jaan se chahoonga tumhe...


Chahon mujhe itna...
Na rahe koi sikwe-gile.
Chahon mujhe itna...
Ki kabhi bhi aur na chah sako kisiko siwaye mere.
Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super duper bumper like. Gosh that was amazing the most chaste way of proposing a woman where u don't literally blurt it out and both said yes. Lovely update Jay. This was the sweetest update Dr. A looking for a kiss on an unlikely date that was fast for him too but next meeting will be super exciting. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
What ?? No kiss..?? 😆

Ok.. From msging...directly to proposal...!! 😲
For a serious thinker guy like Adrit... that was pretty fast...!! 😆

Loved the glimpse of father-daughter bonding...

Very nice.. Jaya...!! 😊



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