JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
I like the photo of the girl on cycle you have posted on that update😆..Good filmy way of making hero heroine meet the first time aur pehli mulakat mein hi donno mein pyaar ho jata hai...Stuff dreams are made off.

Adrit meeting Shyla after years and knowing her instantly from his heart is still my favorite.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
well a mushy meeting was always going to happen.
Hope i dont write anything more mushy 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm...long upd👍🏼...the cycle part is really touching😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Jaya...loving to go to flashback with "Them"
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jayshree nice update mushiness is good I want more. Your getting nicely into it. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Points to be noted: Words within brackets [ ] are those When shyla is talking to herself

I have used the name Mala from Kanchanamala who is Goddess Meenakshi's mother.

Tarun as you all know is another name for Ganesh and Vishak is another name for Karthikeya

She felt his eyes following her.
There was this urge to turn back.
I am sure he must be laughing..
The rear view mirror told her he was not !!
She watched him, He was new around here.
He was tall,, very tall
His clothes suggested he was from the city.
Handsome too. She soon lost sight of him .. but her thoughts lingered
Who is he..
she wondered.
Shyla...
Her wondering thoughts stopped...
Oh Ho...
Braced herself for a lecture...
Her mother was looking at her,
What happened??
I fell!!!!
Again??

She nodded, looking at her toes.

[Have to get some new nail polish,]

Shyla look at me,

Eggs??

Tomatoes and bread?

Hmmm ehhh…..

Speak up shylu….

Well, I hit this guy,

I fell on the tomatoes and the br………

You what?? Ma interrupted!!

Hope he is not hurt.

[she is concerned about him!!!!]

That's it, from next time you are going to go walking, no more cycling around .

An announcement that she had heard a dozen times.

She grinned.

Stop grinning shylu, go get cleaned up and you look like a mess.

She ran up and hugged her mom.

Love you ma.

Love you to darling, ma said lovingly.

Mala looked adoringly at her daughter. She wished she would be more careful.

Kaaki … she turned and smiled at Tarun and Vishak. Yes yes breakfast is ready.

There was excited chattering and running to the small table that was set in the verandah,

Where is Di? They shouted. She is changing, She fell again.

There was loud laughter from the two brats. "She fell again"

As Mala brought in the Hot Poha , curds and fruits, she found a handsome young man walking in through the small wooden gate.

Mala quickly set everything on the table and walked towards the stranger.

Namaste, he said. I am here to meet Mr. Himant, trying to put the lady at ease.

Oh Ok, you must be the Doctor. Please do come in. Breakfast is also ready.

Please do come in.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Heart is pumping hard the next meeting has come soon enough. Shyla will be for another shock when she come to have breakfast and I can see the dimpled doctor stifle a smile when he sees her shocked reaction and wondering what the hell is he doing her. Next update come soon. 👍🏼
Patrarekha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm so its the family introduction time hmm..something symbolic here don't know exact what..seems like shyla is liking adrit in very 1st sight..apna dimpled doc hai hi aisa..but is adrit liking her at first sight..waiting to see
poha..i love poha...
ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...cant control my anticipation..i loved it! please do update quickly!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superlike.
Lovd there first meet.
I too wishd... Janedo. And nw time for the second meet.
Superb jaya

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