JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally caught up with all the chap..so far...Very nice.. story going on...Jaya...!!
I like ur writing..its easy..simple to read...but very impactful...😊
Second meeting was a good one...😆
Shyla reminds me of Bella.. of twilight series.. with all her stumbling...falling...😆
Her self talks are funny...😆
Btw does this clumsiness/carelessness become the cause of her future accident ?? 😕
Wondering if Shyla will be the one to show Adrit around the town.. if yes.. then he can say Bye-Bye to his bones...!! 😆😆

Do continue...Jaya..
And if u do PM's ..do add me to ur list...!! Thanks...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaishree so nice the way Shyla landed on Adrit's lap. Hayee wish to see something like that on screen with Moharika.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u chand
ARu , ur wishes are my command lolz
Sia thank u dear for stopping by to read. I have sent a friends request so that I cam PM u.
sandy . hmm moharika that way.. well U have ur imagination working .
Work it away 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
OH NO

The sun was setting into the calm sea.

He was falling in love with this quaint, quiet place.

Lunch at Mr. Himant's simple and delicious.

[THANK GOD GREY EYES WAS NOT AROUND]

Everything was planned out with Mr. Himant.

All he needed was someone who will help him in the clinic.

Mr.Himant had promised he will look for someone.

A sudden frown creased his forehead.

What if he sends Shyla!!!!!

Well if he did, I will have to buy an armour and a helmet.

Shyla sat in her favorite spot beneath the shade of the tall trees, her bare feet digging into the sand,

A drawing pad was already filled with eyes, lips, nose.

She glanced down to turn the page, and made a face,

[WHY WAS SHE DRAWING HIM? ]

She quickly shut the book and walked back home.

Her father smiled at her as she entered.

Shylu , you will have to help the Doctor for a few days, will you be able to do that?

[OH NO]

What?

[NO WAY]

You heard me!

[NO NO NO]

Hmmm ,

Shylu, Yes or No

[ NO]

Yes.. [ SHE NEVER COULD SAY NO TO HER PARENTS]

So that is settled then, I will inform Adrit that you will be helping him out.

[HE IS GOING TO BE SAYING HIS PRAYERS]


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Posted: 12 years ago
NOW

Shyla's fingers clenched and unclenched,

She looked up at Meena, her eyes were distraught.

Meena did not know what to do, but she excused herself and decided to wheel Shyla away to her room.

[ NO MEENA I WANT TO STAY]

Adrit watched a little concerned as the Girl with those pained eyes was wheeled away.

But he did not question, he will be talking to each one of them soon.

He sat talking to the Chief about his schedule.

I will want to talk to the Patients individually , can I start soon after lunch?

Sure Adrit. I will make all the arrangements.

Some of them are not very comfortable talking to strangers, so they might come in with their attendants or Nurse.

That is perfectly fine. I completely understand.

I would like to start with the girl who was wheeled off, can you please find out if she is ok and ready to meet me?

Done, Dr. Adrit. I will let Meena know about this.


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Posted: 12 years ago
This meeting will be something. Super update. Looking forward eagerly. 😃
Patrarekha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
butterflies glittering in my stomach...ud soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow 👏 double blast! 😆
by the way...i guess she cant talk yet right???😕
u mentioned it in the ud where he saw her... so u cant expect a proper convo between them...
i REALLY really hope that that mask is off and adrit sees AND recognizes her...please!
gr8 ud jaya its really gripping! 🤗
i am soo soo sorry that i wasnt able to comment on the previous few uds as i was really busy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Let the buttterflies take flight aru.
@Yukthi no problems dear. You took the time to read it and I am so happy.
Thank u dears 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
OK..I thought Shyla will show him around..but she will be his assistant...!! That's being even closer..!! 😆
I m scared for Adrit.. he is the only Dr.. in the town..!! 😆
Dr. meeting his patient finally..!! Hmmm..!!

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