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Posted: 12 years ago
Jayshree the eyes wanting to know but the heart already knows. She too knows in her subconscious mind though she has been in trauma for a long time. This has been the best update so far. I can see in my mind's eye when the dimpled doctor examines this patient he knows so well in his heart to be his very own heartbeat Shyla. Cannot wait to read the next one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
So you have decided to kill everyone naa...🤢

You are sooo...❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
really interesting & mind-blowing upd...mysterious too...bt thrilling is the fragrance of ur story-I know😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.
Vaise sab ne tareef me itna kuch kaha ki tareef ke liye mere pas koi word bacha hi nai.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaishree the dimpled doctor's eyes meeting the eyes of the patient. What will happen when he does checkup on her. There will be some very intense moments between them. When he tocuhes her his heart will know that it is his Shyla😃
Edited by edna16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
STEPPING BACK A FEW YEARS...
Kenny G played his saxophone softly.
Adrit looked through his schedule.
He had to visit the local teacher, Mr. Himant
He had to get familiar with small town people and Mr. Himant seemed to be the connecting point.
A man whose thinking was way ahead of his time.
He paused, listening to the notes that seemed to glide straight into his heart.
The brick house was small but comfortable.
He looked around, mentally making notes about a few changes he will have to make before he can use it as a clinic also.
Mr. Himant had promised he could use one of the class rooms temporarily.
Adrit wanted to get started as quickly as possible.
Nandu came in, car is ready he said,
I think I will walk Nandu, want to get to know this little place.
He stepped on the road, then decided to jog towards Mr. Himant's place.



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vx6xsCNS3nI[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome. So now to flashback. Kenny G song very apt. Jayshree good going and keep going. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
again shory..i decided i will comment after 3-4 updates so that it seems to me single long update..u keep me flying in air and then land like a brick with every ud😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

again shory..i decided i will comment after 3-4 updates so that it seems to me single long update..u keep me flying in air and then land like a brick with every ud😭



U did not like this update 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk



U did not like this update 😭



i said u made me flying in the air..does that mean i didn't like ur ud??😲

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