JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF]

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: varaali
Awesome.

Will 'he and 'she' become 'we'?

Actually even i dont know 😆

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Gopiii

@Gopiii

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Jaya loving your thought process. The lead is very good. Looking forward to a fabulous writeup from u ahead. 👏

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Limraina
Jaya loving your thought process. The lead is very good. Looking forward to a fabulous writeup from u ahead. 👏

Thank you thank u ..
Will try and keep up with ur expectations 😳

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

jaya i became fond of ur writing style..so different..and there is suspense hmm..he came in a palace of village..and remembering something..and she is crying..hmm there is some connection surely..update soon

and omg dimple?? love it..

Edited by aru_86 - 12 years ago

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

😊Very beautiful poems on She and He. I love the both and want to read more. And your style of writing is very different from others which also make "Just A Story" different. Please do PM me whenever you update😊.
And a question actually two 1. why She is sad? and 2 why He is disturbed?

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr
😊Very beautiful poems on She and He. I love the both and want to read more. And your style of writing is very different from others which also make "Just A Story" different. Please do PM me whenever you update😊.
And a question actually two 1. why She is sad? and 2 why He is disturbed?

hI dear thank u for checking out my story.
I have sent u a friends request.
Questions will be answered as the story progresses.
I have not done even namkaran also.
Hoping I am able to write as good as so many here.
Please do be critical 😃