JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
yar plz try to update in small span..coz ur updates r small..so its really hard to wait long
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Super attempt Jaya. Waiting to read more. Do update soon. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: jayvenk



Hehe Yukthi I have give her a name SHYLA... [ psst look up the meaning of shyla]😉

i am trying to build the story so that u can use ur own imagination as to who they are.

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Sorry hope i am not getting on ur nerves dear 😲


no no ofcoarse not! you have instead involved us soo much in the story that i keep waiting for a pm named UPDATED by you all the time!!

hmmm...pretty interesting name...😆
Edited by Yukthi. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Jaya I am trying very hard from yesterday to be critical to your poems but I can't. I simply love your poetic style and the dream of Shyla took me to her dream too. Please carry on. I have no words to praise you. You are very genius so I bow you.Please do update soon. I will be waiting for your PM.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice going Jaishree. I did not know u had this added talent. Waiting for ur next update. Liked the name Shyla😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Hey Jaya I am trying very hard from yesterday to be critical to your poems but I can't. I simply love your poetic style and the dream of Shyla took me to her dream too. Please carry on. I have no words to praise you. You are very genius so I bow you.Please do update soon. I will be waiting for your PM.😃



U have no idea how much those words mean to me MR 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Oonagh

Nice going Jaishree. I did not know u had this added talent. Waiting for ur next update. Liked the name Shyla😊



I was inspired by so many of them writing .. Thought why not one about the two people i adore so much.
thank u thank u
I feel so encouraged
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

NANDAN

Nandan got the milk ready for the coffee and put the eggs to boil.

He knew what exactly his master wanted . It never changed . Two hard boiled eggs , a Huge pot of Hot , strong coffee, One toast with a dollop of butter and the Morning newspaper.

He had been serving the same breakfast for years. He had lost count of the time he had spent serving his master.

He stirred the sugar into the coffee, frowned knowing that it was going to be a long day.

They had to drive for at least 4 hours.

Nandu' he heard the call and hurried to load the tray.

His master was a stickler for neatness.

The Newspaper was neatly folder. The eggs in their holders. The coffee pot properly covered and the toast placed on a small side plate.

He walked quickly towards the room, his feet echoing in the almost empty house.

He knocked and entered the exquisitely furnished room.

A warm aroma wafted from the incense sticks that seemed to be always burning in the room. It reminded him of being in a temple.

He found his master standing near one of the windows. He did not disturb him.

He walked quietly and went to place the tray on the large wooden desk.

He saw a photo frame in the place where he normally placed the tray.

He picked it up and turned it. He felt a catch in his throat.

Sadness filled his eyes .

He looked down at his master and his mistress looking deep into each other's eyes.

Will ❤️ you always Adrit''..Shyla It was written across

Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
okk so here ends poet and starts writer..nandan..only nandi none else..hehe the breakfast is exactly the same..and photo frame of shyla...shyla and adrit were together once..no they are parted..why its d mystery

ohh so so interesting
Edited by Kadamvari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow so nice. But if possible please be poetic . I love your poems as well as writing. Nandan seems Adrit's loyal companion rather servant.

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