JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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SHE

Her gown, a deep pink moved and flowed like water. She felt his fingers holding her tight and safe. She danced freely. Her cheeks were flushed , her heart soared , her feet almost lifted of the dance floor.

They moved around the dance floor. Others stepped back , as they floated around.

Her beautiful eyes from behind the mask looked up, she wanted to see his face!!!!

She tried to see , but could not , the lights were dimmed ,

and suddenly his fingers were gone,

No… No… Not again…. She thought..

Her eyes searched desperately in the dim light… near the door he stood, looking at her ..

Her arms stretched she ran towards him… he seemed to be moving away .. she ran , her legs were becoming heavy , her moments slow , she still ran, her hand out stretched.. reaching for his mask...

Her hands grasped it..

He stood still allowing her to remove it.

Shyla…….. shyla . …….

He slowly started dissolving……She struggled to keep her eyes closed. She did not want it to end.

Shyla …..,Shyla… Now the voice was almost inside her ears.

She opened her eyes.

The dream again!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
WOW jaya...its awesome!!! 🤗
one of those intense love stories where even 1 minute of distraction makes you scratch your head till the end!!😆
i was already biting my nails while reading this!!! 😆
lovvved it!! 🤗
please do update fast!!...cant bear the suspense!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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but whats this...it is her dream...mujhe ye HE aur SHE ki jagah sirf mohit aur sona ka face aa rahan hain!!! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
oh he n she in dance floor.. she soo wanted to look the face behind the mask but for her diappointment its a DREAM sounds soo romantic dont make us wait for long update it soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Yukthi.

but whats this...it is her dream...mujhe ye HE aur SHE ki jagah sirf mohit aur sona ka face aa rahan hain!!! 😆



Hehe Yukthi I have give her a name SHYLA... [ psst look up the meaning of shyla]😉

i am trying to build the story so that u can use ur own imagination as to who they are.

😆
Sorry hope i am not getting on ur nerves dear 😲

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
very much different style jaya ..without any detail i am very much into the story..ur writing style is poetic..and inspired from foreign styles which don't believe in description rather expressing inner thoughts..but this he and she should b only and only moharika otherwise i will get a major heart attack😆

shyla very apt name for sona
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aru_86

very much different style jaya ..without any detail i am very much into the story..ur writing style is poetic..and inspired from foreign styles which don't believe in description rather expressing inner thoughts..but this he and she should b only and only moharika otherwise i will get a major heart attack😆

shyla very apt name for sona


Thank u so much aru .
I love reading poetry.
I did not start out writing that way, but looks like it is turning out to be a little poetic 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i love poetic style story..but a very slight difference between poetry and story must b maintained
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Wow Jaya u are a mystery story teller indeed. Building on the suspense nicely. U can make a very good writer. Keep going. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Limraina

Wow Jaya u are a mystery story teller indeed. Building on the suspense nicely. U can make a very good writer. Keep going. 👍🏼


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Yes i love to go 😲 myself lolz...


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