JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rucha123

just started reading dis awesome story of yours i must say dis story is so beautifully written every single word so describing
:) im just in love wiv da way you write da words you use so interesting
do continue n try pm me :)


Hi rucha thanks for stopping by. And the appreciation is a real booster,😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u surprising for visiting and liking love loads. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jayshree your story and writing we love. Next update is awaited from you. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
The writing style is very classy Jaya. Turning out to be a very good read. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya "THEY" are so lovely🤗
Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thankyou Umakaruna, surprising, Limraina, mrmrfrevr, jayvenk, foram.
for appreciating guys😊 Love you all...

And Jay please dearu continue soon 'cause we all are dying to read...
And sorry for low attendance😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here are a few more lines which I wrote when I was away_

~GIFTS FOR YOU~

I hold out my hands to you
One hand slowly unfolds
Revealing to you, the key of my heart.
My other hand holds the password to my soul.
These two gifts I place in your hand
Along with the third gift.
The one that bounds the other two together.
This gift is my trust.
These three gifts I give to you
My heart, my soul, my trust.
As I place my hand over top of your's
Listen, as I mean to say "I love you"
I turn and walk away.
Now you hold all I gave in your hand,
The choice is your's.

| Krsna |
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Posted: 12 years ago
jaya its being punishment for me to wait..pls have mercy
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Posted: 12 years ago
AdLa

The Chief extended a file.

A brief history of all the patients Doctor he said.

Please call me Adrit, a dimple showed up .

The file was taken and placed unopened on the table.

Chief looked up questioningly.

I like to get to know them myself.

But their names… the chief looked confused.

I will find it out myself , he grinned.

Shall we go? Again the dimple …

How about a cup of coffee?

A slight hesitation at the temptation.

But the chair moved and a gesture towards the door , and the chief understood.

Both of them walked briskly towards the community room.

She looked towards the door,

She could hear the foot steps.

The door swung open .

She sat up.

He glanced around the room.

She watched.

Something stirred within her heart.

She looked at him.

Why was she finding it difficult to breath.

He looked at the neatly dressed nurses and smiled.

Then his eyes moved from one chair to another.

Slow , deliberate, reassuring.

His eyes were warm.

First he had to make them all feel secure.

Her palms were sweaty.

She could not take her gaze away from him.

Did she know him?

She tried to move the veil that was hanging heavily on her memories.

His eyes at last rested on her.

She looked at his smile.

Her mind tried to connect.

He felt strangely uneasy.

He wanted to move the next patient.

His eyes did not want to!!

He felt pain deep inside him.

Who is she?

The surgical mask covered most of her face.

A scar from her forehead, across her eyes was all that was visible.

He forced himself to move to the next patient.

He glanced again at her.

Her eyes, dark from surgeries were still beautiful.

Who was he??

Her mind felt tortured.

She felt pain deep inside her,

She wanted to call out!!!

The sounds stopped in her throat.

It was two years since she had spoken.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya awesome👏...but one question...which thing bonds us with our partners?? Our physical beauty(beautiful face, attractive figure etc) or our inner beauty(intelligence, good nature etc.)? If both of them will leave us for some unfortunate reason then how can our partners recognize us? I have seen it in somewhere where husband refused his wife because of her sudden uglyness and amnesia and he moved on ...
That is why I asked this because I found something similar situation here too.😭

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