JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF]

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Kadamvari
omg jaya😲

everyone is writing poem for your story??..u r the first ff writer ever i met in this case...i am taking a few credit here..😉

now ud soon..its hard to wait

all credits to u only aru for making me write 🤗

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Paramita Ray

@DeewaniRimi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Jaya, Krsna and Umakaruna you guys make me just crazy with your romantic and passionate thoughts. I am spell bounded by your each words. Now I visualize every moments which are very beautifully but passionately described you.
I have no no words to say anything to praise you. So again allow me to dip in these ings.

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sweetsandhya

@sweetsandhya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Guys am completely stunned by the words feelings and passion felt by all of you. Superb contributions by Uma. Loving how this whole story is shaping up. Next update is awaited eagerly from you Jay. Am in some dreamland.

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

THEY
She Fidgeted with her fingers.
He Walked into the Hospice looking like he owned the place.
She fiddled with her tresses.
His deep "Good Morning" instantly put the Chief at ease.
She adjusted her duppatta for the Nth time.
His strong handshake suggested a powerful personality.
She felt butterflies taking off in her stomach.
He Smiled and the Chief knew all the patients were going to have a great day.
She wanted to run.
He knew he wanted to stay.

Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

ohh god aur kitna intezar

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.FairyDust.

@.FairyDust.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

awesome jaya!
atlast the meeting is to take place!!!
how excited am i!!

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hemavidz

@hemavidz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

so have to wait quite a long for nxt update huh😉i knw its worth waiting till then let us all enjoy in our AdLa dreamland

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Riti

@-Reeti-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Jayuuu... Superb sweety. 👏. <3 sholly 4 being late... 😛

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Nishajos

@Nishajos

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

The first meeting is going to be nerve wrecking. Adrit and Shyla are madly in love with each other still living in the past. Te reunion is going to be cracking. 😃

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...ChammakChallo...

@.ChammakChallo.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#170

just started reading dis awesome story of yours i must say dis story is so beautifully written every single word so describing
:) im just in love wiv da way you write da words you use so interesting
do continue n try pm me :)