JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
checked 2 updates at a stretch so that i can feel that it is lengthy one 😆 seriously Jay its high time you should give us quite bigger update atleast for their 1st meeting plzzz😳im re reading..re reading...n rereading still not get enough of reading last 2 chapters...*FINGERS CROSSED*for 1st encounter of AdLa
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Posted: 12 years ago
really nice...upd soon...interesting⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!! Jaya you please keep updating and till then please allow me ing
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Posted: 12 years ago
A teaser . Is it going to be a Maha Milan ????
[ PLEASE RIGHT CLICK AND VIEW IMAGE A LITTLE BETTER]

Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!! It is really very pure, divine and electrifying. I am again going to dip in these beautiful thoughts and ing.
And Jaya you are my sweet ❤️.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
jaya darling i luv u... u r such a sweetheart
read the last two updates just now... sorry😔 was busy with my work
luved it to the core...n luved u even more❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
and I need your permission...
can I post one poem for AdLa?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Wow!! It is really very pure, divine and electrifying. I am again going to dip in these beautiful thoughts and ing.
And Jaya you are my sweet ❤️.🤗


dream on rimi 😛🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
krish u dont need permission. Please do post 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its myAdLa fanfiction 😉

Adrit to Shyla-

Wo tera muskuranaa
Baat baat pe nazrein churanaa
Teri aankhon ki wo mastiyaan
Tere hothon ki badmaashiyaan
Sab ghhaayal karti hain mujhe...

Wo teri gustaakhiyaan
Fir mujhe manaana
Mujhise maafi maangne ke liye
Mere hi kaan pakadna
Main naa maanu toh
Mujhe baahon me kas ke roknaa,
Fir main kuch galat kahoon
Aur tera mujhe toknaa
Pyaar bhari nazron se
Aankho ke kono se dekhna...
Wo mera "jaan" kehte hi pighal jaana
Meri baahon mein tera simat jaana
Main kisi aur ka na ho jaau
Is baat se tadapna
Kisi aur ke sath meri tasveer dekh kar bhadakna
Aur mere manaane par maan jaana
Sab deewana banata hai mujhe...

Tere pairon ko chhune se vanchit rakhna
Tera wo paayal dekh kar chaunkna
Fir mere pyaar ki khatir use pehan'na
Surma lekar mere saamne aana
Mujhe pasand hai isiliye
Mere hi saamne kaajal lagaana
Nahi bhoola hun kuchh bhi
Sab yaad hai mujhe...

Andhera hote hi
Darr ke mujhse lipat jaana
Main saath hun humesha
Ye jaante hue bhi pushti karna
Fir mere kaandhe pe sir rakhke sona,
Kabhi main teri god me sir rakhu
Toh tere mulaayam haathon se
Mere maathe ko sehlana
Main ek pal ke liye bhi ojhhal hou
Toh teri dhadkano ka badhhnaa
Fir mere seene se lagte hi
Kaanch ki tarah tootnaa,
Mujhise meri shikaayatein karna
Sab deewana banata hai mujhe...

Jalti hui lau ki tarah mujhpe girna
Apne hothon se mere labon ko chhunaa
Teri saanson ka wo raftaar pakadnaa
Aur fir haule se aankhein khol kar mujhe dekhnaa,
Dheemi se aawaz mein mera kuchh kehna
Aur tera sharmaana
Fir moum ki tarah
Meri aagosh mein pighaal jana
Main apni baajuon mein uthaau jab
Tera bewajah manaa karna
Aur fir khud hi baahein failaakar
Meri aankhon mein jhhaanknaa
Meri panaahon merin sote hue
Tera wo beparwaah jaagna
Sab sataata hai mujhe...
Aur fir pyaar ho jaata hai mujhe...

| Krsna |
Edited by krsna_R - 12 years ago

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