JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
😊@Jaya not at all Jaya...you and thoughts are very beautiful and mesmerizing.Love you 🤗
by the way how much older you Jaya??? Should I call you Didi or Aunty then???😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nahiii no didi aunty . 🤔
Jaya is fine.
Oh age is just a number dear. I stopped growing after i touched 19 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow thats cool. Okay no didi no aunty only Jaya and in case Google Mata(when needed)🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful poem...& the part is so nice👍🏼...liked it with full heart👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok first of all katti with u.
Coz u didnt pmd me dis ff.
And realy ur ff is so mesmerising, cn actualy imagine two souls madly in luv with each other.
and do pm me varna hamesha k liye katti katti.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

Ok first of all katti with u.
Coz u didnt pmd me dis ff.
And realy ur ff is so mesmerising, cn actualy imagine two souls madly in luv with each other.
and do pm me varna hamesha k liye katti katti.


Oye Kya foru Katti. 😭
Check ur scraps. I sent u the link the first time itself.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i read it last night but then was not in a position to comment...the whole night i kept on dreaming your part..gozz i was shivering remembering ur lines and imagining moharika ☺️..gosh cv's do read this

even still m in trance...but i am feeling desperate to get more...getting goose bumps...

now ud soon 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
SHYLA

She reluctantly gave Meena her paper and pencil.

It was time to go the community room.

The new doctor was here, there were excited whispers.

"So handsome" , "wow" ,

Shyla was wheeled into a large beautiful room.

The scent of flowers filled the air.

She looked at the other patients and acknowledged them with a slight nod.

She was nervous.

Her fingers were interlocked tightly, her knuckles were white.

Meena patted her head gently. "Relax"

Shyla took a deep breath and waited.


ADRIT

He stepped out of the car.

The large stone building was magnificent.

He turned to gather his laptop and felt a painful tug at his heart.

Peeking out from beneath the cushion was a white handkerchief.

The embroidered A was perfect.

He felt a sting behind his eye lids.







Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
Patrarekha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
have you decided to kill me out of anxiety??😕..u ended it here??😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Their encounter is going to be electric when that happens. Their feeling are so profound. Adrit and Shyla their love is so deep am still not able to catch my breath. Please continue Jaya. Loving it.

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