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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

I just read all four chapters!!!

Thus story is really good

Please pm me when you update

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SARA

@saara76

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Waiting for next interesting Precap: Shyam caught in the act…. by whom???

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arshimohabbat

@arshimohabbat

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

nyc update!!!!😊

i really gt irritated wit shyam n feel'g a lot very bad 4 khushi...

am really disturbed...dnt wry it shws dat ur style of wrt'g dark is really gud..

dats y evn aftr knw'g its jus a ff it affects me a lot

cn i req u sumthg pls ...i may seem rude bt pls

i knw its a dark story bt pls at sum point add sum gud twists...

nw i rembr d twist on SR ws supr...i least xpected dat

go ahead dear...wait'g 4 d nxt update

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: arshimohabbat
nyc update!!!!😊
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i really gt irritated wit shyam n feel'g a lot very bad 4 khushi...

am really disturbed...dnt wry it shws dat ur style of wrt'g dark is really gud..
dats y evn aftr knw'g its jus a ff it affects me a lot

cn i req u sumthg pls ...i may seem rude bt pls

i knw its a dark story bt pls at sum point add sum gud twists...

nw i rembr d twist on SR ws supr...i least xpected dat

go ahead dear...wait'g 4 d nxt update

Firstly thnks for reading dis ff dear...means a lot to us...i'm glad u will follow dis ff nd apprecaiate d fact dat it dark...

Hmmm constructive crititsm is alwys welcome...u dnt need to say sorry...we can understnd u're predicament as well...nd i'm sure arthi will be all ears...

Nd ya d SAHUGRAT TWIST WAS D BST CHAPTR TILL DATE!!!! Hehe

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annab

@annab

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Hi , I liked the concept Of ur story...I'm always a fan of dark stories...I hate shyams character...he is absolutely disgusting...i really hp tht arnav help khushi frm his clutches...hp u continue soon..thanx...

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pm2rose

@pm2rose

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

so arnav and khushi have a common past ..would love to know about it soon ..this shyam is a creap ..hate him ..well written ..waiting for the next part

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annab

@annab

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

hi,when ru updating?? hp v get one soon..plsss😊

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aysh05

@aysh05

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Ewww please get rid of gross shyam

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Priti

@Drishuluv

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

(had already apologize in detail in dmc)but again sorry, arghhh i hate tht b****d how can some one go so low?? bt wht else we can expect from tht evil spirit? bt thnks tht u had not plan anyyhng more thn tht i was actually holding my breath while reading tht part .poor khushi she dont evn knw wht happn with her & wht more going to hppn with her😭 & buaji may be i hate u more thn tht shyam😡

thnx for pm & i thnk u r gonna make us cry more on upcoming updates r n't u??? so waiting for next one...dnt knw will b on time or not but pls o pm me