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Arthi

@ar_art

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: Sindhuramakrish
a totally different approach and the plot is nice. the updates are quite understandable and interesting.

thank you yaar...

😳😊

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#642

awesome updates

what a coincidence

they all are so close still so far

wish arnav gets khushi back to what she was

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#643

how can Arnav ignores that khushi's sister name is payal and the girl who is Akash's secretary is payal gupta..

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852464

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#644

Awesome Update...

Loved it...😊

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AdventureAwaits

@AdventureAwaits

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#645

awesome dear

arnav and khushi are getting closer

and maan saw finally geet with shiyam

jealousy alarm...

i want to know how their relation envelop

what is maan's plan???

waiting for next and thanx for pm

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#646

Finally some progress ...look out shyam ur days will soon be numbered
So payal saw shyam
Arnav has realised khushi was forced into this state he knows she has a sister payal n he is starting to fall head over heels for her
Gotta say love when hes jealous its so entertaining
Wonder who will find khushi first payal or maan
Whats maan planning now with geet I wonder he was well pis*ed seeing her with Shyam but what does he expect after all hes done to her she'd be running behind him trying to get his attention ...there's making her jealous n going way to far n hes way passed that now
Anyways loving this story more n more espec now Arnav is nice to khushi n is taking care of her
Wonder what his reaction will be though once he finds out shes in an illegal marriage with Shyam hope he sees truth n doesnt try to blame khushi again
Anyways thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soo

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ZakiZ

@ZakiZ

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: ar_art

you'll know that soon but need to wait for Arnav to know yaar... picture abhi baki hai...😆😃

well, i m eagerly waiting to find out!!😃

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ZakiZ

@ZakiZ

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#648

now Arnav is trying to find Khushi's sister... will he realize it is Payal? i m waiting to find out.. loved this

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imli95

@imli95

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#649

heya...i read the story after a long tym..was absent fromI F from november last year...was like real busy..😡

aate hi i searched for your story...read from 16 to 20 part in one go...really amazing ..👍🏼.

i was really sad to observe less likes then the previous one...but i really think u should write more ...its been a month since last update...

the really good thing that happened in the story was that arnav realised khushi is innocent.😃..i love khushi in this story sooo much...soo soo soo innocent...just love her...😆😊😉

the scene in rehave where khushi was craving drugs was amazing...it seems so real...very nicely written...👏

i love the maneet story too...i wonder if armaan is anything related to arnav or did he do smthing wrong to him or smthing...😕

i love more of arshi scene especially coz khushi is soo cute,,after writing it m gonna read them once again...😳

watever is happening to buaji was really amazing...i never even thought u would have her end like this..the gunda leader's english was amazing...even the chela's were amazing..👏.⭐️🤣

n finally she saw watever khushi had experienced through her own eyes...that part was of such intelligent...👏👍🏼

for garima on the other hand is on guilt trip...n i hope she meets khushi one day n khushi excepts her mother...

n for payal...m soo happy she is getting courageous...i really hoped arnav would ask more question about her sis...n join sm dots noticing the same as khushi's sister...😕

i really want u to update soon...m waiting eagerly...

nn sorry for not commenting previously n making ur likes less...😕

now plzzz update...i really like this ff of urs...⭐️

n keep ur updating pace fast.😃😛..just a advise...😳