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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omggg i cant believe thiss!! AWESOME OS! I love ur workkk!!!! I Swear I wrote a looonggg message last night and my laptops charge got over and it shutdown! I wrote it again and this time an error occurred! :S But am sure u knw am in love with ur stories! Plsss cont this 1 fast and dnt tell me it doesn't have another part!!! U cant leave us hanging like this! AM gona torture u if u torture me like this with such an ending! :P
DiNa! ;) <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice start dear...i wish you will make it into an ff šŸ˜› update asap plz...i wonder how u come up with such varied versions of the same relationship and in such different settings too...kudos to u dear šŸ‘
Edited by deepika03 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
I am reading all ur works from ur index...

Every work of urs is so different from the other and every work a masterpiece..

You really are an amazing writer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
WOW the song is so right for this story Hum Tum

The story is different and a eye opener, one day the whole world is around the one you love, then you wake up all of a sudden and you wonder what is life all about. It is always the women that have to look at the whole picture?

Maanvi as woken up but will she be able to carry on without virat, only time will tell and how determined she is not to go back to the old ways?

thanks for the pm please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
awww emotional update
U write so well Nisha, u portray manvi's emotions so beautiful
Keep Rocking dear
Thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Recap: Manvi left the house because Virat doesn't want to marry her.
How cliche was this, a guy and a girl fall in love, girl gives everything to the guy and in the end the guy leaves her. Isn't this a common story? Shouldn't every girl in the planet be wary by now? Like every other girl she too believed that she was special for him and he would get married to her someday.Don't give everything to a guy before he puts a ring on your finger. She was the biggest preacher of this, yet here she was today on the verge of losing that last bit of self-respect.

PART 2

The biggest mistake of his life was to let her walk away. The one thing that meant the most to him was gone, leaving him behind with the shadows of his past. She was the one that taught him how to live. She made him happy and unknowingly helped him get over his past. The pain that was deep buried in his heart was creeping up to the surface again. With Manvi, the only antidote for his pain long gone, he helplessly sat on the floor. The memories he'd rather forget found their way to him again.

Flashback

A ten year old Virat stood in the doorway of his room listening to his parents fight. They were screaming at each other, calling each other names, breaking utensils and picture frames. He ran to his room and shut the door but he could still hear them. He covered his ears in an attempt to drown the noise; he could still hear each word.

This happened almost every night. They were always looking for a reason to fight, to abuse one another. In their attempt to make other's life hell, their only child Virat was long forgotten.

Since childhood Virat always wondered why his parents got married if they hated each other so much. Over five years of quarrels and another year of divorce battle, his parents finally separated. He was sent to a boarding school because neither his dad nor his mom wanted to take his responsibility; both of them wanted to enjoy their new found 'freedom.' Hence he was sent away.

He spent most of his days in his school. Even during holidays- Christmas or Thanksgiving or Diwali or Holi he didn't go home instead he went to his friend's house. He didn't have a house to go to. Richest kid in school but when it came to family, he was the poorest. That was Virat Singh Vadhera's childhood; an orphan with parents.

His dad remarried and got divorced again and his mom had several flings. Virat hated going to either of their places and the few times that he went, he always encountered something that would leave him hurt for days. As he got older he stopped visiting both of his parents and they too got busy with their lives. The only things that he received without any delay were checks from both of them. Perhaps they felt guilty for abandoning him so to account for their absence in his life they spent extravagantly on him, sending him loads of money and expensive presents.

His dad, a business tycoon and his mom, one of the best lawyers in India and Virat was their only child. He had everything that money could buy but he craved for affection. He lived in a shell and no one ever knew the real Virat. His friends had a different picture of him in their head. According to them, Virat was the funny, flirty, cool, extrovert guy but no one knew the real him. They didn't know that he didn't take anything seriously in life because that was the only way for him to stay sane. They didn't know that he had insomnia and that he took sleeping pills to fall asleep. They called him a stud because he moved on from girl to girl but they didn't know that he was scared of relationships; he didn't want to witness another broken home.

Everything changed when he met her. He didn't have to pretend to be happy anymore; he was genuinely happy. He didn't have to hide his true feelings inside humor, there was no point to it; she saw through it all. The faade he put up for the world didn't work with her. She saw through him, he didn't know how but she did.

She believed in relationship, commitment and he didn't, small things made her happy whereas he had never been truly happy. Yet they fell for each other. Their story was right out of a Hollywood or a Bollywood movie- guy hurt and broken, girl fun loving and happy, they meet and fall in love. That is exactly what happened with them. They didn't fall for each other right away though. It started with hatred then friendship then finally love.

Virat who never believed in relationship started believing in it. She lightened up his world and he wanted nothing more than her. It took him lot of courage to ask her to move in with him; he'd seen too many failed relationships in his life but he wanted to be with her. After she moved in with him he realized it was probably the best decision of his life. Like an angel she took all of his pain away.

With Manvi next to him, he did not need sleeping pills to fall asleep. Soon she became the reason behind his existence and he hers.

SONG:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vLl1NDwMJps

It is not complete. Depending on the comments I will decide whether to end it in the next part or make it longer. 😃 PMs not sent out yet.



Edited by nisha33 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Really nice!! Pls dont finish it in next part abruptly...
If possible pls write abt their past in both POV n then future
Edited by qwerty012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
horrible virats past.. i felt like crying.. taking sleeping pills to sleep at very small age shows how much he gt distrubd... he is right in his point not believing in marriage.. waiting to read wats cuming next... do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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At last u updated dis... Love the way u potrayed his Past.. and why he is scared of commitments and how Manvi changed his life... Awesome... loved it... ā¤ļø
And wanna read Manvi's POV also... nd want happy ending for dis os... Puleaseee... šŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...again i saw it before ur pm...back to back updates...i like it...mmm...coming to this update...virat's past is emotional ha...an orphan with parents...very sad one...i felt bad for those...this type of situations only make us realize parents value in our life...after reading first part i felt bad for manvi...but it is now justified from virat's side...hey dont end it...make it longgg...good song...but i dont like it much...shorter note ha...keep updating and take care nishu...
Edited by madhavichowdary - 12 years ago

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