Virman OS Mistake part 2 pg 6

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preetipc

@preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Loved it.Complex human relationships and the pain it gives when one is not ready to step forward from his stand and give the relationship a identity for the society breaks the other person's heart who loves him more than anything .wow, u explained it all beautifully .Loved it and pls continue .Thanks for the pm😊

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Suarez

@Suarez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Wow...this was awesome !!! Beautifully written !
Virman can be separated !!:(
My personal opinion...both are right in there place!!
Why do i feel there must be a reason y Virat doesnt want to get married !!
U hv to continue this!! Wanna knw what Virat will do to bring back his lady love!!!
It's an amzing concept !!
Do continue plzzz!!
n thnks 4 d pm !!
Take care:))

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Aysha

@aysha1989

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

That was beautiful... Loved everything about it...
Thank you 😊

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS⭐️.. Emotional one..I really liked the way you started it.. The begining was beautiful.. The way you described Maanvi's pain, her disappointment is just great.. Flashback part was also beautifully written.. Mostly in your stories Virat is always a perfect guy.. just flawless..Someone who can do anything for his lady love..But here Virat is totally different.. He is not perfect.. He doesnt believe in commitment.. He is not willing to fulfil her only wish, not yet..On the other hand Maanvi always believed that one day they would get married just like any other girl.. Very heart touching👏.. You are an amazing writer.. You portrayed each and every emotion beautifully👏... Loved it to the core.. The song is perfect for the update as always..Will be waiting for the next part.. I really want to know whats gonna happen next.. and about your note well you deserved a break after your exams..It was much needed..Wasn't it?? Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Kiara_rocks

@Kiara_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Fab concept ...plz continue soon ...

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MadhuChowdary

@MadhuChowdary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

hey nish...u r back with another story...good...but have some mercy on ur other works na...update those also...u partied...hangover...u r sounding like...ummm...i dont know like whom...but not like nish...lol...

new story...brilliant one...virat also loves her...but whats the problem...like u said may be this is a guy thing...i loved this new story...plz this time continue soon...and what a wonder...where is my perfect virat from ur stories...this time he is not perfect...which is a drastic change from ur other stories...and here comes our philosopher with new quote which i liked Don't give everything to a guy before he puts a ring on your finger...i missed ur quotes and ur updates...thanks for the pm and take care...

song...it is a sad one which suits this update...i like both the versions...sad and happy...

Edited by madhavichowdary - 12 years ago

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-GayathriK-

@-GayathriK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Wow that awesome!!

Loved it!!

Continue soon.

And plz pm me😃

Edited by gsrocks - 12 years ago

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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Amazing

Beautifully written

Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

*res

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It must have been heartbreaking for Maanvi to realize that her dream is destroyed, that even those values she stood for also shattered.

It is a different kind of story, but good for change.

Great job and thx for the pm 😊

Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Awesme update dear. .i want you to continue dis os to see d changes in virat n how he wil start to believe in marriage n virman wil b together again. .so plz cont soon n pm me