Virman OS Mistake part 2 pg 6

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Cintila

@Cintila

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

wow nisha ! This part was really amazing. Poor virat now his actions are justified. He's been through soo much !! Loved the update. 👏

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Wonderful update ⭐️.. Very emotional.. Loved it.. I was feeling sad for Manvi in the first update.. but after reading Virat's pov I cant blame him any more.. Childhood memories really have the biggest impact in one's life.. and it must be difficult for Virat to get rid of his bad childhood memories.. " an orphan with parents ".. Loved the way you have described his past, his fears, his loneliness.. and now Manvi is gone, leaving him behind with all those haunting memories.. Im really eager to know whats gonna happen next.. The song is perfect for the update.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Take care 😊

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Great update...it was too emotional.. 😭 ...poor virat feeling bad for him..first i thougt virat was so selfish...but now i can't blame him anymore...bad memories of childhood really influenced on a person...loved the way u described the emotions nisha ...heath touching update...continue soon...thank u so much for the upcoming pm.. 😊

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Dina

@-DeeNaa-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

This part was so AWWW saaaddd u better get manvi and viraat together thn end this! Or else ur dead!! :P No no bt seriously I love the idea its very different do finish it up nicely plsss

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Emotional Update...! like the way u have written Virats past and the turmoil he has gone through...quite acceptable..one must keep their past aside and move on..but then preaching is easy as u have mentioned...do continue Nisha...love all ur stories..⭐️!

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archiekini

@archiekini

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Pleaseee continue...this was very emotional...

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Its amazing...virats back story was quite sad...understand manvis POV...but d best thing which i loved most is beauty of ur writting skill...hats off to u for that..cont soon