Virman OS Mistake part 2 pg 6

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

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What a heartbreaking update, nisha 💔 So much sadness and heartbreaking to read about Virat childhood.

Virat has to pick up his mind and his ego...

I hope to read more of this wonderful story soon and Nisha an other wonderful job done!

Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago

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Geminimanna

@Geminimanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

hi, i like it very much. you have a strong story and it has a potential to be a powerful SS or FF. So i insist that you continue. i am in love with your writing Nisha, you are such blessed person. And A BIG THANK YOU for your PM consisting all your recent work. i am indeed THANKFUL.😆

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deepika03

@deepika03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

good one :) that explained virat's behavior...i wish fr a happy ending though

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Shabana0786

@Shabana0786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Aww!!...a sad childhood for Virat..

Lovely part..

Thanks for the pm..

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

you should feinitly continue,
say only how much comments you need i will write 😊, make it longer pleasee,
i have a feeling this will be another blockbuster from you, so continue soon

thanks for pm

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Suarez

@Suarez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Ohhh no..it definitely cannot be complete !! I love happy ending !! Virman should be together !!
It's too sad when they are apart !!
Looking forwaard for the next part !!
Tc :)

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Jannat

@Jannat94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

hey it was so sad
virat past was horrible
u are amazing Nisha
waiting 4 ur next part

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Nice update. .virat's past was horrible..going through so much in such age is not easy..from his past it is justified dat he didnt want to marry as he dont trust in relatns. .plz continue to make virat realize dat every relatn is not like dat n start believing in marriage. .plz dont end in nxt part. cont soon n thanks 4 pm

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Hooria

@hooriaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Hawww why isnt it completed
Complete it asap
Loved it poor virat suffered alot
Hate parents like virat's
Fabulous
Update Soon And PM Me Please
Thanksz x