Virman OS Mistake part 2 pg 6

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MaebyFunke

@MaebyFunke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

So you're back!

And about the update, how do you manage to write so many OS/FF..? This one's amazing! (I know I say this often, but I mean it). You've really focused on the common problem these days, I've seen one of my senior suffering this way. The quotes that you put are apt and are fantastic!

Man I missed reading something (say anything) for you. Looks like I'm gonna have a good feast now with the reading thing 😃!

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sreshta90

@sreshta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

woww another os frm u... its superb. im running out of words to describe ur work...i loved the feeling of manvi or it might be feeling of any other girl.. u alwys come up with new ideas nd i must appreciate u fr this OS... waiting fr part 2.. nd thanks fr PM😊

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

wow just another great os,
that is so true love make you blind, and when you open your eyes you find nothing😭
im sure he will realize his mistake, but will be late???
cant wait for the neyt part...

I got used to it, that you can only write great storys, so therefore 👏

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

This is awesome...i like manvis thoughts and situation after break up...i m sure virat will realise his mistake n he will come back to her...after all 1st love is not easy to forget...so cont soon

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Shabana0786

@Shabana0786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Interesting!!...Nice start..

Thanks for the pm..

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Loved it as usual
Beautifully written
Hope you continue it
And do pm me
And thanks for the pm

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nikki1211

@nikki1211

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

i loved this os...the way you conveyed maanvi's feelings...the way she was hurt and lost and confused and so angry...it felt very real...that is something i appreciate in all your OSs...as to how real virman are...despite virat being an ass you see people like thta in real life...also he did make things clear right from the beginning that he had no intentions of getting married...still...loved how maanvi tried to reason with him...that she is a girl and no matter how modern we are we still hav to face the society and that the society has double standards for a guy and a girl...everything in the os was bang on...brilliant...

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Krupaa

@forever_young

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Nisha 🤗

Another piece of beautiful work!
Loved this!!
Just Amazing!!
Loved the way you portrayed Maanvi's feelings..beautiful!
And song..was just apt for the update...as always!

Hmm...it says Part 1...meaning there is gonna be a Part 2?
Eeeks!! Can't wait!! xD

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..Gowri..

@..Gowri..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Always love reading you & this time isnt different! The start seems quite simple with the ill effects that a live in relation brings, But expecting a Nisha twist in the next chapter!😛