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haafizah1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: niasharma6

hope you feel better.
whe yu do plzzz update

Thank you sweetie

Feel much better now , overdosed paracetamol , will update soon

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yushna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Great part:-):-) take care dear and update soon:-)

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haafizah1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

😊 Part 14

On 14th part already can't believe it

Let me start ,

The driver took the vadhera's family to rishikesh , maanvi and jeevika were still asleep

Viren rang home to let them know they were going to beeji house
Dadajee gave them permission to stay for a week , as it been ages since the sisters went .

Once they reached beeji house , virat tried to wake up maanvi , whilst viren woke up jeevika

They both got up , and rubbed their eyes

M: Ghar Aagaya

V: haan

J: chalo phir

They got out of car and were shocked , jeevika's and maanvi's mouth were opened

Vr: toh kaisa laga

J: mein , hum, thank you viren ji

V: maanvi tume kaisa lagaa

M: bohat accha virat ,

Maanvi hugged virat and kissed him on cheek , virat got embarrassed, and smiled at maanvi

Vr: kya Baat hai , yeh romance room mein Karo, chalo

J: haan

Viren slowly opened the door , and all of them listened to the conversations been held in the house . The house residents didn't realise the door was slight open as they were to busy with chores.

Inside the rishikesh house bari beeja was sitting on her usual cot

And dabbu was eating mitai

Chacchu reading newspaper

Beeji peeling potatoes

Aur chacchi moaning about back pain

Bb: yeh ghar kitna soona hai , churail ki yaad aarahi

B: kya Baat hai beeji , maanvi ki mujhe bhi yaad aarahi hai aur jeevika bhi. Kitna arsa hogaya unse mile .

D: ab maar bhi kitne din nahin kahin DI se

Cc(stands for chachi) haan mujhe toh koi help karne ke liye nahin.

Ch(stands for chachu) pinky ji tume toh sirf bahana chahiye kaam se chutkara karne se

Cc: beeji dekho na kya madan ke raha

Beeji smiled

Bb: Baat toh sahin

By the door entrance , maanvi looked at viren, virat and jeevika and gave an eye expression indicating let's go inside

M: chale 1,2,3

They opened the door and said surprise together

Everyone was shocked ,

B: aap sab ,

Cc: jeevika, maanvi meri betiyaan

D: di's

Bb: churail

Ch: virat , viren , jeevika , maanvi tum

Beeji , dabbu , chacchu , chachi came towards them , and were smiling

B: andar aao, kaise aana huwa

Vr: beeji darasal Humne socha kitne din hogaye Hume mile, toh loh aagaye

Ch: bohut aacha Kiya

Cc: haan

D: DI aap jaante nahin Maine aap dono ko kitna miss Kiya

M: ab aagaye na , aur badi beeji ke kangan Lene ke liye

Bb: chup har waqat mere kangan

Everyone laughed

J: hum bhi aap sab ko miss bohat Kiya

They all hugged each other and went to their rooms to get freshened up for dinner.

Virman room

Virat came towards maanvi who was fastening her dori. He held her hand and said

V: choro mein kar dehtha hoon

Maanvi smiled , and her cheeks blushed

Virat tied her dori , and kissed her cheeks

M: thank you virat , tum ne itna accha surprise diya ke main Bataan bhi na sakhthi

V: you welcome,
virat cupped her face

M: chale

They made their way to the dining table, everyone was waiting for them

D: toh bataao kaisa trip tha

They had conversations related to their trip , and finished their dinner , and made their own ways to their rooms

Virman room

M: chale so jaate hai , main bohat thak gayi

V: main bhi

They both lied in the bed cuddled themselves with each other , and went to sleep.

The beautiful breeze , and light came through maanvi's window , she got up and stared at the window .

M: kitne dino baad yeh nazaare Dekh rahin hoon , abhi bhi kitne pyaara hai
Maanvi said to herself

She didn't realise two arms circled her waist, and pulled her tight towards him

V: good morning

M: good morning

V: kya Dekh rahin hoon

M: yaadein, is ghar ke har pal joh guzare hain um pal ko mehsoos kar rahin hoon

V: accha, aur mere pal

Virat nuzzled her neck

M: woh toh mein bhool jaathi hoon

Virat left maanvi , and gave a fake angry expression

V: mein toh sirf mazak kar rahin thi

Virat ignored her

M: sorry , woh pal mere dil mein hain

Virat looked at maanvi who had hands on her ears with her sad face on

She looked cute and virat smiled, they both pulled themselves in a tight hug

Once they were ready they made their way to the dining table to have their breakfast . They ate their breakfast

M: DI chale hum Ganga gaat jaaye

J: haan chalo

They got up and made their way to the door when virat ., viren stopped them , hum bhi chalenge, they said in unison

They all smiled and made their way to Ganga gaat

Precap: maanvi breakdown

I hope this part was not boring
This is starting to new revelations
As jeevika and maanvi's past is revealed which virat and viren are unaware about 😊

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

wow am enjoying reading yur fab updates...they jst make me smile 😊👏👍🏼
wats the past ..pls pls update soon ...really excited to knw and plz do pm me 😊

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haafizah1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Sooo sorry 100 times sorry billion times sorry I supposed to upload daily but it is really difficult. This is because , on my computer it doesn't let me login to the forum , and it only works on the phone . If I make a new Id then I will be back to newbie , so I update from my phone ,which takes long time .

I will try my best,

Sorry 😭

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haafizah1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

part 14b

well my computer is been nice to me and has given me the opportunity to use it so here goes the next part

if it carries on been nice i will send mitaai over

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chalo back to the part

they reached Ganga Gaat maanvi and jeevika went running towards the steps , and went down.

v: aaram se maanvi gir jaaogi

m: kuch nahin hoga

vr: jeevika samal ke

J: haan viren ji

Maanvi and Jeevika went by Ganga Gaat and viren and virat followed

M: hell , mummy pappa aaj mein kitni khush hoon jaanthe ho kyun , kyun ke mein kitne arso ke baad aap dono ko mil rahi hoon , jab mein pichli baar aayi thi toh mujhe cancer tha , aur ab meine Cancer ke saath jang jeeth gayin hoon. aur uske saath meri ab shaadi bhi hogayi , aur mein ab di ke saath bohat kareeb hogayi hoon devrani joh uski ban gayi hoon

J; haan mummy pappa , kitno dino baad mein bhi mili hoon , aur itni khushi hain ke mein bataa bhi nahin sakhthi .

mummy pappa aaj aap ke dono damaad bhi aaye hai , joh hamare hameshe khyaal rakhthe hain

M: sach mein mummy pappa bohat lucky hain

Vr: sali sahiba hum bhi lucky hai, aap jesi saali aur jeevika jaisi patni mili hain

V: ek dum correct maanvi jaisi wife aur , jeevika jaisi bhaibi

maanvi then lit the diya , and put it in the holy water , and let it drift away

Maanvi started crying

Jeevika hugged Maanvi

J: Mannu kya huwa hain

Maanvi let go of jeevika and looked at Ganga Gaat

M: mummy papa , joh kami hai woh sirf aap ki , aap jaanthe nahin kitni takhleef hothi ke aap dono hum se ddor hai . Mummy aap ne toh mujhe promise kiya tha, ke hamesha saath meri hongi , lekin raaste mein aapne hamara haath chor diya.

viren and virat had tears in their eyes , seeing an emotional maanvi.

jeevika cupped maanvi's face and wiped her tears

J: hain pagli , tume kya lagtha hai , tum akeli ho , hum tumare saath hai , muppy pappa bhi hain, hame mehsoos karthe hai , aur dil mein hamere hai, unka aashiward toh hamesha hamere saath hain.

kyun tension leh rahin hoon

maanvi smiled

M: di

and maanvi hugged jeevika , who also had tears in her eyes.

Vr: kya ab hamere aanson bahaane ka iraada hain

J: nahin viren ji

M: nahin jiju , lokh kya sochenge ek lawyer ke aankh main aansoon

V: agar aap milchuke hain toh ghar chale , jaanthe ho kyun ke biji hamara intizaar kar rahin hain

M: haan mein toh bhool gayi , jaldi chale warne biji hame chorigi nahin

all of them made their way back to the house

biji : ganga gaat se aagaye ho

V: haan biji

B; chalo acchi baath hai , yahan aao

viren, virat , jeevika and maanvi followed Biji to her room

On her bed there was lots of gifts

B : yeh sab aap ke , aur chandigar ke har sadasiya ke liye

Vr: Biji inki kya zururat hain , aap ka aashiward hamare liye kaafi hain

V: bhai teekh keh raha hain ,

B: mein apne bacho ke liye haridrahin hoon , isse ke kya problem hain

Jeevika and Maanvi hugged Biji

Thank you they both said

B: aap sab thora time ke liye aaram karlo

Maanvi and Virat went to their room whilst Jeevika and Viren went to their room.

VIRIKA ROOM

Vr: jeevika mein ek phone call karne ke liye jaa raha hoon

J: Teekhe viren ji , mein change karthi hoon tan takh

Jeevika went to the bathroom , and started to feel uneasy , and started to vomit.

J: yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain

Jeevika washed her face , but still she was feeling unwell , and started to feel dizzy , jeevika felt weak , but she still opened the door , and made her way in the room.

Viren came back in the room , and looked at Jeevika who was about to faint. he went running by her to ask what the matter was , before he knew it she fainted.

V: jeevika kya huwa , Jeevika aankhien kholo

Hearing Viren's voice they all made their way into the room . Everyone was shocked. Viren put Jeevika gently on the bed , and Virat called the doctor . Maanvi went by Jeevika and held her hand . Beeji was praying in worry , as no one knew what happened to Jeevika .

Shortly the doctor arrived and checked Jeevika

Vr: doctor meri patni teekh hai

BB: Jeevika koh kuch nahin huwa

M; di kaisi hain

doctor : aap koh pareshaan hone ki zuroorat nahin yeh toh khush kabri hai , Jeevika pregnant hain , Maa bani waali hain.

Everyone smiled , and Maanvi hugged jeevika , who was blushing

M: Chutki waapas aarahin hain

V: congratulations bhai aur bhabhi

b: Mubarak ho

Doctor : yeh medicines hain joh aap ko haridni hain , apna khyal rakhna Mrs. Vadhera

BB; Dabbu jah ke mitaai leh ke aao , yeh toh bohat khushi ki baat hain

B; mein zara chandigarh mein khabar deh doon

Vr: nahin biji , hum waha khud denge

B: chalo teekhe phir

After hearing the happiness , they all gave Jeevika the opportunity to relax, and made their ways to their own room .

VIRMAN ROOM

M: Virat aaj mein itni khush hoon

V: woh toh hain

M: Virat mein is baar Di ko koi kaam nahin kardoongi , kyun ke pichli baar ,Meri wajah se Jeevika ne apna baby koh diya

V: haan , zuroor

virat and maanvi hugged

well that's the end , i know it had less virman scenes , but there is a reason why i made jeevika pregnant, you will find out very shortly for next part

till then take care 😃

Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago

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yushna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

It was fab update but want manvi to be preg:-) update soon plzz

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

wats the reason haan pls update soon :)

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haafizah1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Aaj ki taazi taazi Khabar aaj maha episode will be updated with two dhamakas

Iss liye mein aap sab ko maha episode promo bataaongi

I hope you enjoy it

😆 MAHA EPISODE PROMO

Maanvi to Beeji

Beeji aaj issi waqat Maanvi Vadhera aap ke liye marchuki hain. Hameshe ke liye

Aur

Doosra dhamaka update mein maloom ho jaayega

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haafizah1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Maha episode Part 15

Part 1

It was next morning , the choudary family as well as Jeevika , Viren , Virat and Maanvi had ate their breakfast , and were lazying around in the room , chatting all sorts of things .

Virat and Maanvi were teasing Jeevika and Viren

M: ab toh di ki lottery nikal gayi , jiju toh di par pyaar hi pyaar barsaayenge

Jeevika blushed , and so did Viren.

V: baat toh sahin keh rahin hai partner , bhai toh bhabhi ka 24-7 khyaal rakhenge

BB: Kyun nahin rakhega , aakhir papa bane wala hain

Viren carressed his hair

M: Kya baat hain , suna tha sirf larkiyan sharmathi hain , jiju ko dekh kar puri soch badal gayin

everyone started laughing

J: chup karo maanvi

M: Kya di , aap koh toh khush hona chahiye jiju ab tumhara khyaal rakh raha hain

VR: chalo , choro yeh baat jeevika tum ne apni dawaail lee hain

Maanvi and Virat both said ohohooh together

M: kithni lucky ho di ke jiju aap ka kithna khyaal rakhraha hain , mera husband mujhe bhool gaya hain , kehthe sahin hai shaadi ke baad insaan badal jaatha hain

V; haan haan , mein tume bhooka rakh tha hoon , ab tum teekh raakh ho , tumhara kaam hain meri dekh baal karne ke liye , aur waise bhi jaise bhai ab bhabhi ka khyaal rakh raha hain , aise mein ab nahin kar sakhtha

M: kyun ?

V: kyun ke tum pregnant nahin ho

Maanvi cheeks went red

M: Chup karo , aive kuch kehthe ho

VR: Baath toh sahin hain , ab hume tum banaado chachu jjald se

Virat and Maanvi both got embarrased

J: Haiyen haiyen , dekho bacchu ab kaun sharmatha hain , ab tum dono ko shaadi la licence milgaya

Everyone started laughing

V: bhabhi abhi hum khud young hain , bacche toh door ki baat hain

Viren and Jeevika smiled , and both said accha .

Biji called Maanvi , who was sitting right opposite her with Jeevika .

Biji : Maanvi mujhe tume kuch dena hain

M: kya beeji , haan yaad aaya aap ne phone mein kahan tha keh aap ko mujhe kuch dena hain, Kya ?

B: woh tum ne kuch kohdiya , girgaya tha toh meine samal keh lakhdiya

M: kya , aap meri chain ke bhare mein baat nahin kar rahin

B: haan

M: thank you Biji , so much woh meri favourite chain hain , kaha rakhi hain , mein leh ke aathi hoon

B: woh mere almari mein hain .

Biji gave Maanvi the keys , and Maanvi went to go Biji's room to get her chain.
She opened the cupboard and was searching when a box fell on the floor , and the box opened with letters addressing Maanvi on it .

Maanvi bent down and looked at the letters ,

M: Yeh toh mere liye maine kabhi pare nahin , yeh toh Mamma ki handwriting hain, Biji ne chuppa ke rakhe

Maanvi opened the letter

😉

chalo that's the end of this part I will continue as soon as possible

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