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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg that was so aussum
Hope maanvi hot hojaye 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lolz mannu is drunk 😉
nw its gonna be real fun ...plzz update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 12b

J:mannu neeche aao

M: nahin DI , ek Baar Maine commitment kardi toh phir Khud ki bhi nahin sunthi

V: agar tum aise karogi , toh main tume Khud neeche utharoonga

Virat holds maanvi from the waist and puts her down

M: virat main tume katal kardoongi

Maanvi makes her hands into a gun shape , and pretends shooting at virat

M: pichkaao pichkaao

Vr: maanvi tum chalo

M: nahin

And stomps her feet on the ground

M: mein dance Karoongi

And makes her way to the dance floor


Before viren , virat and jeevika could stop maanvi , she went over to the dance floor , all of them followed her , looked between the crowds but they couldn't see her.


J: mannu kaha ho tum

V: maanvi

J: us ne toh peebhi hain

Vr: hume usse jald jald dhoondna parega


Whilst they were looking for her the lights went off

And what virat, viren and jeevika heard they got shocked .

M: agar ghana Sunna Hai toh mera sunno

Virat, viren , jeevika all said together

maanvi !!!

Then maanvi sang

Fevikol song from dabbanng 2
m.youtube.com/watch?client=mv-google&gl=GB&hl=en-GB&v=mOCc49wZAfg



She does the exactly same dance movements like kareena in the song

First the spotlight came on maanvi , who was facing backwards to the audience on stage

Virat's mouth opened he was gobsmacked

Maanvi had a backless black blouse on

maanvi put her hands through her hair and said
Hai haai haai

Angarayian lehthi hoon mein roz roz , uff

( maanvi waves her arm whilst saying the words )

Angarayian lehthi hoon mein roz roz,


Maanvi turns around

Virat is shocked

Maanvi is wearing a short sleeved black see through sari , with her hair fully open , she has got dark black eye liner on, with a little bit of pink blusher on her cheeks


Virat's mouth wide opens and is continuously staring at maanvi . He is mesmerised by her beauty .

Vr: virat mooh band Karlo makki andar guz jaayegi

J: yeh maanu kya kar Rahi hain

Jeevika is about to make her way to the stage ,but viren holds her hand

Vr: jeevika rehne do , agar tum roko gi, tume maloom nahin ke maanvi phir kya karegi , maanvi khosh mein nahin hain , jab Khud takh jaayegi toh wapas aaajayegi

J: yeh toh mein keh rahi hoon , maanvi hosh mein Nahin hain


V: bhabhi sahin ke raha hain

Ooha ooha ki awaaz aathi hai roar roar se

(Maanvi puts her hands on a chest , then , on the mouth )

Mein toh chaloo is kardar , ke Mach jaayegi yeh ghazal, hosh waale bhi madhosh aaye hai nazar

( maanvi makes step movements, men start following her and dancing as well)

Virat is getting angry and jealous

Viren looks at him and smiles

Vr: kya huwa bhai

V: mein abhi unke hadiyaa thoroonga , unn ki kaisi majal maanvi ke aas paas aane ke liye


Virat makes his way to the stage and pushes the men away , and moves to maanvi

Virat grabs maanvi hand

V: bas bohat hogaya chalo ghar chalthe hain

M: nahin
Maanvi pushes virat


Mere foto ko

Mere foto ko seene se yaar chipkaale saiyan fevikol se

Virat just staring her , maanvi comes near him trails her fingers on virat's face , and wiggles her hips , and hits her hips on virat , virat moves aside ,

Maanvi starts laughing
, maanvi comes near virat , and puts her finger on virat's chin


M: kya kar lege ho tum , maanvi says it in a romantic way


Virat gets mesmerised by her beauty , and is staring


Fevikol se fevikol se
Mein kab se ready hoon Tayaar pataale saiyan missed call se


maanvi does the original song dance steps for this part

Virat is staring at her


Then , whilst maanvi is dancing a man comes up to her , and holds her hand

M: kaun ho tum , choro mujhe

Man: hey sexy aaj raat mere saath


Virat becomes furiously angry and goes to the man and starts beating him badly

Whilst beating him , a crowd emerges around them

V: tumhari jurat kaisi hain meri wife ke baare mein aisi Baat karne


Man: maaf kardo


V: mein tume nahin choroonga

Viren jeevika also come to the scene

Viren grabs virat

Vr: choro usse

V: bhai aap jaan thai nahi ke usne kya Kiya

vr: virat mujhe maloom hai chalo , ab nahin karega

Virat gives him a hard kick , and goes to maanvi who is sitting on the floor

Jeevika , viren also follow

J: mannu ghar chale

M: DI mujhe ulthi aarahi hai

Maanvi covers her mouth with her hand

Vr: jeevika maanvi ko toilets mein le jao,
iss ne sharab peeh hai iski waja se
J: haan viren ji

Jeevika takes maanvj to the toilet ,
Maanvi vomits , jeevika comforts her

Once maanvi has finished, jeevika takes her out to where viren, virat is

V: chalo


They make their way outside , on the side there is a bridge , underneath the bridge is a lake

Maanvi goes there and starts crying and falls on the floor

Virat goes running to her


That's the end of the part I hope you liked it

Precap : virman bed romance




😆
Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Part 13a

I am back again , aaj kal show mein virika ke scenes chal rahe hai , virman ke scenes dekhne ke liye main taras gayi

But why fear when haafizah is here
Jab tak meri imagination Chalegi
Tab tak story progress karegi

😆

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Accha , bura , advice joh bhi lekin dehna kyun ke aapke bhina meri stories adhoore hai


Even agar silent readers ho like toh kar sakhthe ho 😃
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Mujhe khushi milegi , dil se ,

But without doubt there are some friends that comment ,like and you know who they are
joh message aap ko dehsakhthi ho woh hai
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Anyway dictation hatam ho chuki hai ab story shuru Karoongi


Part 13a

Virat Went running towards maanvi , and sat on the floor with her

Jeevika is about to go , when viren stops her

Vr: kyun kabab ki Hadi ban rahi ho , thora time spend Karwaane do

J: aap bhi na viren ji , mein kaha kabab ki Hadi hoon , maanvi ro rahi hain

Vr: virat hai na samalne ke liye

Viren rings virat

V: bhai aap phone kyun kar rahe ho

Vr: virat tum teekh ho kitne din hogaye tum se Baat nahin ki

V: accha

Vr: jahan tum ho wahan mausam kaisa hai

V: bhai baraf re rahi hai

Vr: chalo , hum waapis jaa raha hai , jaha garmi hai

V: teekh hai bhai

Vr: maanvi ka khyaal rakhna

V: okay


Jeevika and viren leave

Virat cups maanvi's face

V: maanvi tum ro kyun rahin hain

M: mujhe mujhe mamma papa ki yaad aarahi hai

Virat hugs maanvi and rubs her back gently

V: maanvi tumare mamma papa hamesha tere paas hain

M: nahin jhoot zinda nahin hai, unno ne Hume choro , bhala kyun apni beti ko akele chore

Maanvi carries on crying

V: tum akeli kaha ho

Virat holds maanvi hand


V: main hoon na , zindagi ke liye , sirf Tumhare liye
Tumhara husband

Maanvi tilts her head

M: sacchi

V: muuchi

M: lekin tum toh mujhe daat Thai ho , loko ko maar Thai ho

Virat smiles at maanvi's innocence

V: joh Tumhare paas aathe hai , unke saath aisa karta hoon main

M: kyun ?

V: kyun ke mein tum se bohat pyaar kartha hoon

M: toh teekhe mein akeli nahin hoon

And jumps up, she is about to run somewhere else ,when virat grabs her

M: virat choro na

V: nahin ab nahin


Virat lifts maanvi in his arms and takes her to the hotel

And then in her room , and puts her on the bed

Virat closes the door and goes to get changed , when he comes back he sees maanvi standing by the mirror , trying to unhook her blouse piece, but is struggling

M: agar mujhe maloom hotha ke yeh blouse banane waale kaun hotha , toh mein us ka khoon pee jaathi ha

Virat admires his wife antics then laughs , virat comes close to maanvi and hugs her behind her waist


M: virat tum ,toh cricket kene waale Thai

V: maanvi meine kab kaha

Virat smirks

Lekin cricket match khel sakthe hai hamare beech

Maanvi turns around and puts her arms around virat's neck

M: accha aise


Maanvi brings her lips towards virat's face and kisses his left cheek

Virat is astonished

Virat pulls maanvi from her waist more closer to him , so both of them can smell , hear , feel each other's breath

M: virat

V: haan

M: virat I love you , tum mujhe kabhi akele nahin chor na

V: sochoonga ,

Virat teases her

Maanvi moves away from virat and goes and stands on top of the stool , which is next to the bed

V: maanvi neeche aao

M: nahin main suicide Karoongi , kuuidin Karoongi , agar agar

Virat comes near maanvi

V: kya


M: agar tum mujhe aapna na banaale

Whilst maanvi is saying this maanvi's stool is moving , maanvi looses balance , when virat grabs maanvi , and fall on the bed together
Maanvi is on top of virat

Maanvi caresses virat's hair and brings herself closer to virat and kisses his eyes

Virat smiles

Maanvi brings her lips to virat's and both of their lips connect like magnet , and a passionate kiss is emerged

Virat moves his hands on maanvi's back and unhooks maanvi's blouse

M: virat , tum mujhe kitna pyaar kar Thai ho

Virat rolls over on the side and kisses maanvi's neck and says

V: pyaar Bataan thai nahin , dikhaa Thai hai

Maanvi blushes

Virat rolls on maanvi On top

M: virat kya kar rahe ho

V: virat puts his hand on maanvi's mouth

V: sshshshshshshsh , joh sirf mera haq hai

virat pulls off maanvi's blouse , and opens maanvi's sari pleats

In couple of seconds maanvi is laying naked infront of virat

Virat sits up remove his shirt amd is trousers and positions himself on top of maanvi
Virat kisses maanvi neck , lips passionately

Virat goes down to maanvi's stomach , and licks it , he then places wet kisses on stomach , maanvi holds the bed sheet

M: virat mujhe sardi lag rahi hai

V: abhi nahin lage ki


Virat hugs maanvi tightly , he then kisses her neck , maanvi puts her fingers through virat's hair


Virat gets his left arm , and pulls the blanket on top of each other, he then starts to kiss maanvi's hair and her ear lobe, he bites it slightly maanvi moans

Maanvi kisses virat's chest


Virat turns maanvi around , and positions himself in between maanvi's legs

V: maanvi Tayaar ho

M: haan

V: dard hogaa

M: virat tum joh bhi mere saath Karo mujhe puura aitebaar hain , Tumhare meri body par
puura haq hai

Virat smiles and they make love , and have ...
😳 ( woh bhi , ab kaise kahoon , main bohat sharif hoon )

They kiss till their lips are swollen , they take action until their legs can't take the pain
And fall asleep in each other arms 😆


I hope you enjoyed it


Precap : surprise visit to rishikesh planned by the vadhera brothers
For vadhera bahus

Take care
Love you all 😉
Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
2 part update
song too good dear
and virmaan romance shyyy but amazing dear
continue soon with lott of romance and fun
continueee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Thank you for commenting

I will continue 😆

Don't worry i will try to make it to the best of my standards 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Suuper hot :-):-) really amazing
Tooo good..
Virman romance cha gai ho
Update soon plzz:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Aww both where aussumum yaar and this one was hot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 13b


Maanvi opened her eyes gently and saw virat sitting next to her.

V: good morning

Virat stroked maanvi's hair and smiled

M: virat mera sar mein bohat dard ho raha hain

V: woh toh hona tha kyun ke tum toh drunk thi

M: kya Baat kar rahe ho , mein aur sharaab na munkin


V: ab drama choro coffee peelo relief Hoga

Virat gives maanvi the coffee , maanvi takes it from his hand

M: yeh tum ne banayi hai

V: haan sirf Tumhare liye

Maanvi smiled

M: how sweet mera pati itna accha hogaya

V: woh toh mein pehla tha lekin tum ne kabhi dyaan Kiya


Virat came close to maanvi

M: haan haan

V: maanvi tume kuch yaad hain kal raat kya huwa tha

maanvi thought and few of the incidents came in her mind , maanvi dancing , virat hitting the men , and their night.

She blushed the thoughts of last night . Without doubt it was one of the most beautiful night she could ever have . It has been many times they made love , but this time it was more different , there was plenty of passion , energy and devotion in it .

M: sirf ke dance kar rahi thi , Aur kuch haas nahin


V: Waise ek Baat tume kehni thi kaafi sexy lag rahin thi dance kar rahi thi , aur sari main
Sach mein agar tume unn gundo se bachaana nahin tha, toh mein tume wahan se utaake aur

Maanvi blushed her cheeks went bright red

M: aur

V: aur main

M: kya

Each time virat said aur he came closer to maanvi's face

M: bataaona

V: aur main

Virat kissed her lips , firstly maanvi was shocked , but then she did respond

In a minute time they broke the kiss

V: yeh kartha

M: sab ke saamne?

V: haan

M: bohat shararithi hogaye

V: woh toh mein hoon

Virat's eyes moved to his watch and jumped up


V: ab chalo , jaldi aaj hamare paas sirf aaj ka din uske baad waapas jaana hai

M: haan chalo mujhe toh gifts bhi Lene hai , sab ke liye ,


Virat leaves and maanvi gets ready they both get together , including viren and jeevika to go to the Shops to buy gifts

Whilst jeevika and maanvi were in the shops ,viren and virat waited outside .

V: bhai yeh ladkiyon ki shopping hamesha lafre hothe hain , nikale ka naam nahin karthi

Vr: haan virat , lekin yeh sab ka khyaal rakhthi hain , sab ke liye gifts haridrahi hain

V: haan bhai

Vr: Hume kuch karna chahiye apni wives ke liye

V: sahin keh rahe ho , lekin kya

Virat and viren walked up and down the mall for ideas , then suddenly virat said

V: bhai mujhe idea milgaya

Vr:kya

V: kyun na hum inko rishikesh kare


Vr: not bad idea


Maanvi and jeevika came back with lots and lots of bags

Vr: kya tum dono ko shops ko lootne ka iraada tha

M: haan jiju

J: haan viren ji

V: chale waapas

They all sat in the car , and waved bye to goa and made their journey

On the way jeevika and maanvi fell asleep

Vr: driver ghari ko right lelo

Driver: sir yeh Chandigarh ka raasta nahin hain

V: hum jaan Thai hain

Vr: hume rishikesh jaana hai


Driver : okay sir

Viren and virat both smiled and looked at their wives


Sorry for shortupdate , but I am feeling unwell , I tried uploading how much i could 😭

Precap : Ganga gaat Milan


Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
hope you feel better.
whe yu do plzzz update

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