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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wrong time dude cont soon plz loving ur story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maha Episode Part 15

Part 2

Maanvi opened the letter and it said

Meri Pyaari Maanvi

Tume Patha hain , tum hamesha shikayat yeh karthi thi ke main tumhare liye letter nahin likh thi , iss liye aaj maine likha hain .
Jaanthi ho kyun tume Jeevika Mannu kehthi hain , kyun ke main tume kehthi thi.

Tumhari har waqat yaad aathi hai , tumhari choti choti si sharaarate , tumhare chote chote haath , agar koi majboori nahin hothi toh mein tume kabhi akela nahin chorthi

tum apna khyaal rakhna, parahin mein dhyaan dena , meri laadli

Mannuxxx

Maanvi folded the letter , and started crying Mamma , she opened another letter.

Maanvi

Suna hain ke tum bimaar hogayi , tum apna khyaal kyun nahin lakthi meine tumhare liye ek pyaara sweater bheja tha , tum woh pehno , maine apne haathon se siraa tha , khud dehthi lekin Biji ne mujhe , kuch nahin , apni dawayian lehthi roho , aur shararat kam karo

Maanvi , folded the letter , and put it back in the box ,
she thought why did her Mamma written that she could not come because of Biji . Maanvi looked around in the box , to see if she can find something to give a clue , and there she found a letter addressing Biji

Maanvi knew it did not belong to her , but she had to read it , she wanted to know the truth .She opened the letter , and started reading.

Biji

Mein aap ko kitni baar bataao ke maine tumhare beta ki katal nahin hoon . Us raat mein uske saath bhi nahin. Mere par kyun badla leh rahin hoon , apne phool si bachiyon se door rakh ke. Mein Marjaaongi , Mujhe apni betiyoun ke paas jaana hain . Aap mujhe aisi sazaa kyun deh rahin hoon .Mein galat nahin hoon , nahin hoon.

Maanvi read the letter , and fell in the floor crying ,ithna bara jhoot , Biji ne Mamma ko khud hamse door kiya , kabhi bhi hame bataya nahin woh kyun nahin aathi .
Maanvi picked up the letters , and made her way to Biji , she was fuming with anger. She felt betrayed and hurt from her own grandmother.

Biji looked at Maanvi , and Smiled

B: Beta chain milgaya

J: Mannu tum teekh ho , tum rorahi kyun

V: Maanvi kya huwa, tumhare haath mein kya hain

VR: Maanvi kuch bolo na

Maanvi couldnt take the anger anymore , as she wanted answers

M: Biji maanvi said in a loud voice , everyone was shocked , as they never seen Maanvi this angry before

B: Maanvi tum chilaa rahin kyun

M:
dhokha kiya , jhoot bolo , kyun aap ne aisa kiya , aap ne toh mera dil thor diya ,

B: Maine kya kiya

J: Mannu tum aisi baat kyn kar rahin ho Biji se , Maafi Mango

M: Biji , yeh letters , Maanvi showed the letters to Biji ,
aap ne kyun chupaye , kyun aap ne kaha ke Mamma ne kyun nahin bheje , jhoot , aap ki wajah se aap ne hamari Mamma se door rakha

Eveeryone was shocked

J: Mannu ,tum kya keh rahin ho , saaf saaf se bataao

M: Biji bataayegi .

Maanvi went by Biji ,who was completely numb , tears were falling from her cheeks , Maanvi tugged her arm

Bolo na , kyun yeh letters chupaye

B: Tumhari Maa ne mera beta cheena mujhse , toh us ko yeh dikhane ke liye maine kiya tha , ke kaise lagtha hain , kaise lagtha hain ke baccho se door hoke

M: jhoot , Maanvi was crying whilst talking .
Mamma ne pappa ko nahin door kiya , pappa ne khud mamma ko dhoor kiya , us ne takhleef di thi , ek aur aurat ke piche baag gaye the , lekin Mamma ne kuch nahin kahan , sirf hamari dekh baal ki

J: Biji kya yeh sach hain

B: nahin , mera beta nahin kar sakhtha

M: joh , aap ne kiya usko mein kabhi nahin maaf karoongi

J: Mannu kya keh rahin ho , Biji hame kabhi dhuk nahin dekhsakhthi

B: Maanvi meri baath suno , tumhari maa galat thi , sharab pithi thi , tum agar us ke paas reh tho woh tumhara kaisa haal rakhthi , yeh main keh bhi nahin keh sakhthi.

M: MERI MAMMA aise nahin hain ,

B: Maanvi

M: mat lo , mera naam , aaj se isi waqat se aap ki Maanvi aap ke liye marchuki hain ,

everyone was shocked

Suddenly , Maanvi started to scream , as her stomach was aching, Virat came running forward and held her

AHHHRRHAHHHRR

V: Maanvi tum teekh ho

M: Main teekh ho , mujhe ghar lehke jao ,yahan mein reh nahin sakhthi ,

V: Maanvi tum kya keh rahin ho , tumhari tabiyat teekh nahin ,mein doctor bulaatha hoon ,

Virat was about to go , when Maanvi grabbed his hand

M: Nahin , mujhe ghar le chalo

Vr: Virat Maanvi koh ghar leh ke chalo , abhi Maanvi bohat ghusse mein hain

V: lekin bhai

Virat takes Maanvi to the car , everyone comes out to wave bye. Biji falls on the chair and starts crying

J: Biji aap mat roye , Maanvi aise keh rahin hai , thora time dehdo khud waapis aajaye gi

B: kya tume mujh par bharosa hain

j: Haan , aap toh kabhi hamara bhura nahin chaaogin

in the car

Maanvi screams in pain again and holds Virat hand tightly

V: Chalo tume hospital leh chaloon

M: Virat mein teekh hoon ,sirf kuch zyaada kah liya tha

V: CHUP , chup , bas bohat hogaya , ek lafas bhi nahin nikalogi mooh se samaji , ab meri baat manogi , hospital chalogi .


Virat took Maanvi to the hospital , and the doctor did Maanv's check up

Virat was waiting anxiously , thinking that what is the problem .

After a couple of minutes the doctor came , and annouced the reason why Maanvi was in Pain

Doctor : Congratulations Aap ki Wife Pregnant hain


😃


that's the end of Maha episode , I hope you enjoyed it , please write comments

thank you

so you should have guessed the reason why I made Jeevika pregnant ,because I wanted both sisters to be pregnant at same time .



Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Atlasttt manvii iss pregnant yohooo awsom update plzzz update soon i cnt wait to see viratz reaction
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ayehaye mannu is pregnant thts awesome news 😃
Loved the new twist bt wanna knw who is actually speaking the truth..
And must say u are getting better nd better with ur writing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
i am so happy that Maanvi is pregnent update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg maanvi pregnant 😊
But it means now no more hot scenes 😔 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Thank you for all your comments I really appreciate the'.
It is a honour to write , and receive such great comments , I am glad my writing is improving.

Lol , hot scenes are limited now , but koshish Karoongi , that I will use them later on my other ss,

I had to make maanvi pregnant lol warna yushna would have killed me .

Only messing

I will update as soon as possible 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tht was really weird ...'i had to make manvi pregnant ...'😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kulsum_vish

tht was really weird ...'i had to make manvi pregnant ...'😉

TRUE Weird
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😃NOTE


sorry I will not be update for a while , because my sister is getting married , so I am busy with wedding preparations

Once everything is done I will double update 😭
Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago

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