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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Part 10b

Yakeen nahin hotha part 10 thak me pohanchgi ,
Ab jald jald se part 11 bhi shuru hojaayega


Thanks for all your cooperation

Ab let's start

Before they knew it they reached their destination
Maanvi was sleeping on virat's shoulder , and jeevika was sleeping on viren's shoulder.
Both of the brothers seeing their wives sleeping .

Vr: virat aagaye chale , jeevika utho

Jeevika's eyes woke up automatically

V: utho maanvi aagaye

Maanvi wakes up , outside it Is pitch black

Vr: jeevika , virat , maanvi samal ke aana bahar andhera hai

Jeevika comes out , and so does viren , virat comes out and then jeevika

They make their way to the hotel , and on the way maanvi's foot slips and is about to fall when virat catches her , and have a eyelock

Viren and jeevika stare at them and smile
Jeevika coughs

Vr: virat mere bhai sirf chabiya Lene ki dheri phir apne room mein romance Karlo

Maanvi blushes

V: bhai aap bhi na

They get their keys , and make their ways to their rooms with luggage .

Viren , jeevika kal milenge they saw to virat and maanvi , and go to their room which is next door .

Maanvi enters her room

M: yeh toh bohat sundar hai , aur view bhi accha hai , maanvi goes closer to the window

Virat comes behind maanvi , and puts his arm around maanvi's neck and turns her around

V: ab tumhara view itna accha hai , aur much dekhne ka mann nahin , virat smirks

Maanvi blushes

M: virat mein toh sone jaa rahin hoon , bohat raat ho chuki hai

V : mujhe chor ke

Virat grabs maanvi arm , maanvi pulls her arm out of his hand , and goes to get her nightgown from the bag , and goes to the washroom to get changed .

Virat starts searching in his bag

Virat talks to himself

Jaldi virat beta dhoondo maanvi ke aane se pehle

Milgaya

Maanvi comes out the washroom , and virat smiles at maanvi

Virat puts the ... Underneath the duvet and comes towards maanvi

V: aajao maanvi


😃


Well that's the end of part 10

I hope you liked it

Kya virat chupaa raha hai maanvi se

To found out tune in


And last but not least , thanks for reading this
Love you guys each and all

And big great hug and kiss from me to each and every of you 😆
Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Its was short nd sweet :-)
Par virat chupa kya raha hai ??
pls jaldi update karo sabar nai hota ..:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Lolzzz wt was virattt hiding? Soch galt jaga jatii hai:-P:-P it was real gud but manvi ko gira kar pair ma fracture hi dila daiti lolzzz update soon:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Part 11a

Kyun ke woh short update tha iss liye yeh update long Hoga

Let's continue

M: yeh duvet itna upar kyun hai , iss me kya hai

V: kuch Tumhare liye

M: mere liye
Maanvi smiles and goes to the duvet and picks it up is shocked to see

A

Watermelon Yaani tarbooj

M: kya virat yeh mere liye ,
Maanvi gets agitated

Duffer , chep , ulooo , kounchoo and starts hitting him on his chest

Yeh kya mazak hai tarbooj , Maine socha kuch romantic hoga , lekin nahin tarbooj is ka main fruit salad banaoongi
Agar Lena tha toh kitchen main rakhna tha

Cook dikhthi hoon main

Dekho virat jiju toh kitne romantic hai , aur tum tarbooj leke laate ho

And moves away

Virat grabs her hand , and pulls her towards him

V: kitna time hogaya hai tumhari Bhak Bhak sune , hamesha tawaar nikalke ready to attack
Tum ne toh sahi dekha. Bhi nahin aur mujh lar chilaarahi

Virat gives the watermelon to maanvi and says

Kholo isko

Maanvi takes it from his hand and opens it , and is shocked to see a empty watermelon
, and in the corner is a locket with
I love you maanvi written on it

Maanvi is speechless

M: virat mein ... Mein and takes the locket out

I'm sorry , really sorry , itna sweet aur accha gift kabhi no hosakhtha

And stares at him

Virat I love you


Virat comes forward and cups her face

V: koi Baat Nahin , chote chote shehro mein aisa hi hotha seorita

And kisses on her forehead , maanvi smiles

Virat takes the locket from her hand , and turns maanvi , so her back is leaning on virat's chest
Virat slowly moves his hair on the side , and puts the locket on for her.

Maanvi blushes

V: yeh tum hamesha pehna yeh hamari pyaar ki nishaani hai

Maanvi turns around and looks at virat

M: thank you , bohat sundar hai

V: you welcome

Maanvi then does something which virat unexpected
She slowly puts her arm around virat's neck and leans herself on him and kisses his lips.

Virat smirks and then responds back , and have a passionate kiss, maanvi puts her hands through virat's hair , and virat starts moving his hands around maanvi's back.


Virat lifts maanvi and takes her to the bed , they both lie down on it .

Virat kisses maanvi's neck and maanvi blushes . They both kiss each other and cuddle themselves and the night fades away .


Next morning , maanvi wakes up and sees herself cuddling virat . Maanvi smiles , and traces her finger on virat's face and kisses on a cheek

Virat's eye opens and smirks at maanvi

V: yeh chaand kaha se nikala , aaj romantic mood main hoon


M: kyun nahin ho itna sa loving husband hai mera

V: accha

Virat pulls maanvi down in the bed and covers maanvi and himself with the blanket

M: virat tum bhi chalo , utho
hum gua mein hai , DI Aur jiju wait kar rahe honge Abhi hame jaana hai

maanvi gets ready and makes her way to virika room


Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: yushna

Lolzzz wt was virattt hiding? Soch galt jaga jatii hai:-P:-P it was real gud but manvi ko gira kar pair ma fracture hi dila daiti lolzzz update soon:-)




Fikr mat karna maanvi ko baad me injury karwadoongi
Kyun ke abhi toh gua aaye hai toh

ghoomna Choomna Hoga
Masti dhamaal Hoga
Emotional atchyaar hoga
Comedy hoga
Rona dhona bhi Hoga
😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
I am sorry I couldn't upload daily due to some problems

However , I am back to action

Hopefully I will update regular


So we start from 11b

Maanvi knocked on virika's door

Jeevika opened the door

M: good morning DI , aap Tayaar hai , jiju kaha hain

J: good morning mannu , viren ji washroom main hai

Viren comes out from the washroom and sees maanvi

Vr: hello meri pyaari saali Sahiba ,

M: hello jiju , aap Tayaar haj ,

Vr: haan lekin virat kahan hai

Virat comes aswell

V: mein yaha hoon bhai , good morning bhabi

J: good morning devar ji

M: ab agar formalities hatham ho chuki hai toh hum kuch khalen , mujhe bohat buukh lagi hai

V: haan bhooki sherni ko bhook nahin lagegi , toh aur kya karegi ,
Sirf khane ke baare me sochthi hi
Agar aisa chalege mujhe chakki magane paregi

M: virat , waaah jaise tum nahin kuch khaate

Maanvi goes near virat and grabs his neck

V: maanvi aaahhh

Jeevika comes forward and grabs maanvi , and pulls her away

Vr: tum dono mauka chahiye larne ke liye


They all laughed , and went downstairs to the breakfast room , and had there breakfast together , and made there way out of the hotel .


M: chale ghoomne pehle kahan jaayien

J: hum goa museum chalen suna hain wahan , pehle zamane ki zindagi hai

M: DI museum hello , hum Chandigarh se museum dekhne ke liye aaye , phir toh waapis jaaye aur dadaji ko pichli life ke baare me bataye

Viren laughed ,

M: Baat toh sahin

Jeevika glared at viren

Vr: Maine kab kaha , jahan jao hume toh sirf dekhna hai

V: maanvi tume disco jaane hain na

M: virat idea bad nahin lekin baad mein

Vr: ek minute maine leaflet liye tha

Viren takes the leaflet out from his bag

Vr: hum avarlam waterfalls jaate hai , wahan ka khoobsurat nazara dekhne ge


They all agreed and made there way to the waterfalls

When they all reached there , they were astonished with the beautiful waterfall
The greenery land , it was an amazing sight

Virat , and viren decided to separate here for a while ,and explore the lovely destination with there wife

Viren held jeevika's hand and took it to the other side ,where the grass was

Whilst virat took maanvi to the waterfall


M: virat kya Kar rahe ho , hum bheekh jaayenge

V: toh


M: virat tabiyat kharab ho jaayegi


V: kaisi Baat kar rahe ho partner , saath mein hain


Virat pushes maanvi in the waterfall

M: virat
maanvi screams , and starts shivering

Virat comes in , and grabs maanvi's hand

V: waterfall mein bheegne ka mazaa bhi kuch aur hai

Virat turns maanvi around and starts nuzzling her neck

maanvi blushes , and pushes virat and comes away from the waterfall

Virat stares at her , and can visibly see her wife's curves , her beautiful petite figure and smiles

Maanvi realises virat is staring at her , and comes forward and hits virat on his head
And runs

V: maanvi , mein ab tume nahin choruunga

Virat runs after maanvi

M: tum mujhe catch nahin kar sakhthe hai

V: accha aisi Baat hai , toh ab dehko


Virat runs fast , and grabs maanvi they both loose their balance and fall on the ground , and roll over Together , and stop with virat on top of maanvi

They have an eyelock

V: yeh toh cricket match ka jaise haal hogaya

M: utho


V: nahin , iss Baar main nahin chor sakhtha

Virat holds maanvi's hand and entangles them with his , and comes towards her , maanvi closes her hair

Virat kisses maanvi's cheeks and virat kisses her forehead

M: virat

V: hmmm

M: I love you

Virat smiles

V: I love you to

And they hug each other , tangled together on the ground , enjoying the moment

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J: viren ji hum chalna chahiye , warna raat ho jaayegi

Vr: kya zuroorat hai , thora aur time spend kar lenge

J: aap bhi na , mannu aur virat wait kar rahe honge

Jeevika pushes viren , and make their way to maanvi and virat

On the other hand maanvi and virat are on the floor still hugging each other

I hope you liked it

Precap : maanvi drunk


😉 Hope I didn't bore you
Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Wooi mai kaho dt where did u vanished? Atlast you back eb jaldi updates do oky i wanna c a drunk manvi soon and it was a fun part really liked it:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I hope everyone is well

Part 12a

M: virat utho Hume jaana Hoga

V: nahin , yahan teekh hai

Maanvi tries to push virat but he is too strong for her

V: maanvi rehne do

M: virat raat ho jayegi , utho

Finally she convinces virat and get up

M: chale DI aur jiju ko doonde

Vr: maanvi hum yaha hain

Virat and maanvi turn around to see jeevika and viren infront of them

J: chale wapas hotel , kuch khanne ke liye

V: nahin abhi nahin bhabi Hume mahindra club chale , wahan delicious food hotha hai

J: virat club nahin hum kaise jaaa sakhthe hai

M: haan virat club ko Rehn de

V: kyun , aap ko dar lagtha hai when virat and bhai is here no need to fear

Whilst saying that virat holds on to viren's shoulder

Vr: haan chale

M: jiju aap par toh Yakeen hai lekin virat , uspe nahin , jisko cockroach se dar lagtha gain woh kya karsakhtha hai

Jeevika and viren start laughing

V: haan jaise tum nahin darthi , dedh futiyaan

M: tumne mujhe kya kahan , mein abhi tume teekh karthi hoon

J: bas bhi Karo chalo

They all made the way in the mahindra club , and sat down on the eating tables to choose food , the waiter is writing the order

M: mein toh , rajma khaongi

V: mein toh bhindi aloo khaaonga

Vr: mein toh wahin khaaonga joh jeevika khaaogi

Jeevika blushes

M: kya Baat hai kisike pathi Khud decide karthe hai ,aur kisike patni ka choice khaate hai

Whilst saying that maanvi glares at virat

V: maanvi tume sirf larna pasand hai

J: choro , mein toh palak paneer khaaongi

V: chalo teekhe

Waiter get

Ek rajma plate
Ek bhindi aloo with roti
Do palak paneer
Aur drinks


J: mein toh orange juice

M: main bhi

Vr: mein toh apple juice peeonga

V: ok waiter

Do orange juice

Ek apple juice

Aur ek orange juice with vodka

That's it

The waiter leaves to get the order

M: virat tum sharab peeoge

V: thori thori Chalthi hain

M: virat tum nahin peesakthe hain

V: nahin peeonga main

M: nahin

V: haan

Vr: maanvi peenedo kuch nahin Hoga

M: chalo teekhe jiju ke kehne pe tum drink kar sakthe ho

Whilst waiting for the food they looked around the club
On the other side was a dj with music getting played , and lots of people dancing to the music . They had spotlights and they kept flashing

The food came , and they started eating , once they finished the food the juice came , everyone took their glasses and started drinking it


Once they finished maanvi
started laughing

Jeevika , viren , virat looked at her

J: mannu tum has kyun rahin ho

Maanvi carried on laughing

V: maanvi tume kya huwa

Vr : maanvi tum teekh ho

M: virat tume patha hai

Tumhare paas do aankhien hain
Do do kand hain

V: maanvi sab ke hothe hai

M: lekin Tumhare paas do do naak bhi hain

Maanvi started laughing

Virat picked his juice and smelled it
yeh toh sirf orange juice hai , maanvi neh toh mera juice peegayi hai

Maanvi carried on laughing

J: ab kya karenge

Vr: yeh poocho maanvi ab kya karegi

Maanvi stands up
For her the room is going around

M: virat pakro pakro

Virat stands up and holds maanvi right arm

M: mere koi nahin room ko ghoom rahin hai

V: mein room ko kaise pakroo

M: woh tho hai

And starts laughing

Jeevika holds maanvi

J: chalo maanvi ghar chalthe hai

M: nahin DI , mein toh enjoy Karoongi


And stands on the table

M: dhinka chinka dhinka chinka maanvi starts dancing

Virat , viren and jeevika look at maaanvi

I hope it was interesting
Take care
😉
Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
It was so gud. Manvi drunk lolzzz plzzz update soon:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Too good dear
chalo episode me to manvi drunk nahi mila par yaha to sahi
dear continue with manvi drunk and cute virman romance.
But pls continue soon

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