virman ss Rishthein pg16 uploaded

ab main itni aachi writer nahin hoon lekin try maaroonge and dropped her self on the floor crying

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Teekh kardiya ab edit bhi Kiya hai spelling errors ko correct Kiya hai

Meri Hindi itni aachi nahin hai kyun ke British citizen hoon lekin koshish Karoongi
If I make mistakes please forgive me

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It was beautiful...i just hope the same thing happens in the serial too! You have expressed their emotions so beautifuly that i was almost crying...its a realy mindblowing piece of work nd please do continue...pls pm me...

Sorry for the delay my uncle was critical
But he is much better now
Though the current track is different but i will continue
Hope you like it

Part 2

The windy breeze hit virman window and maanvi woke up
Without realising maanvi fell asleep on the corner of the bed clutching virat's photo in her hand

Maanvi's eyes were badly swollen with all the crying she couldn't properly open her eyes and let out more tears out of her puffy eyes

Maanvi went to the cupboard and chose a simple sari , her hands accidentally touched virat's top , and

M: virat !!! Kya haal kardiya tumne mera itni takleef Maine kabhi cancer me Nahin sahi thi

And started crying again , which made her eyes even worse , it looked like she was beaten badly in eyes

Maanvi took the sari and towel and went to the bathroom and got changed

She came out and looked in the mirror she didn't feel like dressing up

M : kyun sajooon jiske liya karna hain woh nahin

Maanvi tied her hair in a low pony , put her sindoor on and put the tub back on the table

Then there was a knock on the door

Maanvi opened the door it was viren

V : maanvi tumhari aankhien ko kya huwa and he cupped her face

M : kuch nahin bas aise

V : bas bohut hogaye maanvi

M : jeeju kya Baat hai

V : tumne kya Haal kardiya apna yeh meri saali nahin ho sakhthi itni kamzor

M : haalat aise mor par lehke aate hai

V : chalo mere saath khanna khaane ke liye

M : mann nahin hain jeeju aap chale jaye

V : chup.
And viren grabbed maanvi's hand and took her downstairs to the dining table

Everyone was sitting around the table when they saw maanvi they all got up including swamini who felt sorry for her in this state

J: mannu tumhari aankhien mannu and she caressed her face
mein doctor ko phone karthi hoon mannu and she cried
M : DI kuch nahin

Dadaji : maanvi beta sab kuch teekh ho jaaye ga ,

Pehle kuch khalena

Haan said vanshika

Everyone sat back on their seats and maanvi sat down

Jeevika piled her plate with food

Kc : aaj Tumhare liye Maine aloo parante banaye hai jeevika ne kaha aap ko pasand hai

Maanvi stared at the plate normally she would gobble the food in a second but she couldn't a tear dripped and fell on her fork

Maanvi wiped it before anyone saw it especially her DI

Maanvi eyes turned to the side and saw the empty chair , and flashbacks came in her mind when virat was sitting next to her whist eating
The first spoon of food given to him on the day of karwa chauth

She couldn't take it the pain of been away from him and got up , everyone looked at her and maanvi started crying and went running to her bedroom
Jeevika followed

Mannvi opened her bedroom and ...

I will continue hope you like it sorry at the starting of this part I didn't add virat but I wanted to focus on maanvi's pain

I'm back ek Baar Maine commitment kardi toh phir me HUD ki bhi nahin sunthi

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Toh kya naam doon part 2 ya part 3 short tha chalo part 3 dehthi hoon 😉


Part 3a

Maanvi opened the bedroom , and looked around she went to her draw and opened it and took out the key chain which virat gave during honeymoon

M : agar mein tumhari universe thi toh run mujhe akele nahin chorte

Jeevika entered the room and came close to maanvi

Maanvi couldn't control herself and hugged jeevika

M : DI mein kya karoon , HUD koh samalne ki koshish ki lekin dil nahin suntha

Jeevika cupped maanvi face
J : mannu meri pyaari bacchi bas, sab kuch teekh ho jaayega , tumhari DI hai woh tume aise haal nahin Dekh sakthi hai

Ab chalo virat ko milne , warna woh kya sochega ke mujhe bhool Gaye

Ab muskaro warna virat kya kahega meri phool si wife ka Dekh Baal nahin kartha

Maanvi gave a weak smile

Jeevika and maanvi went downstairs

J : viren ji chale

And jeevika took the tiffin from Tarun and held maanvi's hand

Maanvi stepped out the house and screamed

Jeevika and viren came running by her
J : mannu kya huwa
V : bolo

M : meri aankhien bright light me dukh rahin hain

Jeevika started crying , viren came bear and put his hand on her shoulder

V : jeevika HUD koh samalo

M : DI kuch nahin and she started rubbing her eyes

Jeevika grabbed her hand bas maanvi bohut aankhien bhigar DI ab chale doctor pehle phir police station

M : nahi DI mujhe abhi virat ko Milna hain baad mein time nahin Hoga

Viren : maanvi pehle doctor jaate hai koi eye drops dehdenge

M : nahin jiju meh chashme pehn loongi , and took them out of her purse and put them on

Khud teekh ho jaayenge chale

Jeevika : maanu kyun zidh pakri hai , virat se Milne ke baad phir hum jaayenge doctors lekin jaana hai warna maar khaogi


I will continue tomorrow I'm tired now hope you liked it
Sorry for writing less

This is getting so dam good plz cont soon and pm me

Thanx for all your compliments
So let's see where it leads

Part 3b
M: teekhe DI I promise ab chale

Maanvi jeevika and viren sat in the car ,
During the car journey maanvi was thinking , her Mind kept on asking questions

How will virat be ?
How will she control her emotions infront of him ?
Will she have a breakdown ?

But she had to be strong virat called her sherni

Maanvi was in her own mind when she heard jeevika calling
Mannu hum aagaye hai chalo


Maanvi looked around , and stepped outside , the only thing she wanted to do was run to virat and hug him tightly but how could she there would be a barrier the bars

They entered the police station , jeevika held maanvi's hand for support

Viren asked the police officer can we see virat . The police officer showed them the cell where virat was

Viren went first as he would be virat's lawyer he wanted his answers to his questions

Virat looked at viren
Vr: jhoot Kaha tumne , jhoot aaj pehli Baar mujhe takleef Huwi tumne jhoot kaha

V : bhai kya keh rahe ho
Vr : tum abhi bhi chote ho , kya tume dikhtha mujhe sachai malooom nahin hogi ke tum ne karan ko nahin Maare jeevika ne

V : bhabhi ne bataa diya

Vr: kya samajthe ho nahin Baat karunga Tumsa

V : bhai kya main apne saanne bhabhi ko jail me dekhsaktha , Maine apne devar hone ka farz nibhaaya

Vr : aur apni biwi ka tum ne nibhaaya

Virat never said anything he knew he was harsh to maanvi , but he wanted to protect both

V : maanvi ek sherni hai woh HUD ko samal payegi

Vr : accha toh dekho

Viren pointed towards maanvi and jeevika who were coming towards virat

Virat just stared at maanvi she looked plain , he couldn't see her eyes who were covered with sunglasses
Could this be his wife or is it someone else

J: virat and she started crying mujhe maaf kardo , mein bohat buri hoon , yeh sachai mujhe katal kadegi

V : bhabhi bas sab kuch teekh ho jayega

And he looked at maanvi yeh tumne sardi ke mausam chashme kyun pehna hai new fashion hai

Maanvi gave a blank expression , virat looked at her
Maanvi tum teekh ho
But there was no response

Vr : jeevika chale inko Baat karne do

Viren left maanvi and virat so they can talk

V : maanvi pehle tum yeh chashme utaaro

Virat rehne do

M: kuch nahin sirf aankhien mein kuch dal Gaya

V : nahin , paas aao

Virat took his arm out of barriers and took her sunglasses of he was shocked

V: yeh tumne aapni aankhien ko kya Kiya hai
Virat made a worried expression

M: kuch nahin itchy Thai is liye

V : phir jhoot tum bohat ro rahi ho isliye maanvi ,

M : nahin mein kyun aisa karoon

Virat looked at her he could see she was not in a state he left her before entered she looked lifeless
Tears started dripping from his eyes

V:maanvi mein jaantha hoon Maine tume rulaaya hai
bohat bura hoon main

M : haan bohat waaada diya tha suhaag raat mein mujhe zindagi Bhar ki khushiya dedoonga aur tumne toh rulaaya hai
I hate you

V : but I love you he gave a smile to her

M : itna sab kuch huwa hai aur tume muskarane hai

V : tum toh hamesha attack karne ki liye Tayaar ho meri jungle sherni

M : virat and she smiled

V : tumhari yeh muskrat ko dekhne ke liye Taras ga , ab har sazaaa sehloonga sazaaa mauth bhi


With the word death and sazaaa maanvi was shocked

M : kuch bhi bolte ho agar agli Baar tumne yeh lafas dubaara toh mujhse buraaa nahin Hoga

Virat looked at maanvi with affection , he she knew she loved him so much and so did he
He wanted to hug her tightly take all her pain away from her , he wanted to hold her but he couldn't he felt so helpless ,

Viren and jeevika both came

Vr : ab baate hogayi dil halka hogaya , chalo ab chalna hai

Maanvi looked at virat they have a eyelock
There eyes showed various emotions pain neglect love , they knew themselves their words they spoke to each other were less , their hearts wanted to say more
But time was less

Maanvi looked down and tears started falling
Virat grabbed maanvi's hand and said
Maanvi apna khyaal rakhna sab kuch teekh ho jaayega

Maanvi nodded her head for approval

V: ek smile dehdo toh me Aaram se yaha rehsakhoo

Jeevika looked at her devar and smiled he is such an angel , maanvi is so lucky to have him as her husband ,

J: chale
Vr : bas tum dono ek doosre ko dekho ge

Maanvi slightly blushed

But suddenly maanvi started feeling uneasy her head was spinning like it was on a roundabout

Before she knew what was wrong with her she fell on the hard ground and fainted in the police station infront of her husband jiju and DI

Well I hope you enjoy reading it , sorry for late update but have to do it through my phone as my computer is playing up

I understand so far my story is depressing but once this matter is solved it will be very romantic lol it will not be appropriate for under 18

Keep smiling and enjoy reading my os do leave comments it makes me happy and likes


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It is getting so interesting it was so natural better then the show
Plz cont soon

Continue soon because it is suprb. Plzz pm meee plzzz

Part 4a

Viren , virat and jeevika were shocked

J : mannu Jeevika screamed and fell on her knees calling an unconscious maanvi

V: maanvi virat screamed looking helpless

Vr: inspector paani please jaldi laoo

A police officer came with water and gave it to jeevika , who sprinkled it on maanvi's face

Before the inspector left virat called him

V: inspector please yeh cell kolo mujhe apni biwi ke paas. Jaana hai woh behosh hai , please

Inspector: kyun baagne ke liye , agar ithni kadar thi apni biwi tho katal kyun Kiya , hum nahin kar sakhthai

Jeevika carried on sprinkling water but maanvi's eyes weren't opening
Jeevika started panicking maanu aankhien kholo mannu

Virat looked helpless tears were dropping from his eyes . He started kicking the bars with anger
V: maanvi mere liye aankhien kholo
Still no response
Vr: hame abhi isi waqat maanvi ko hospital karna hai

Viren lifted up maanvi in his arms
Vr: hum chalte hai virat , mein tume bataadoonga doctor ne kya kaha
Ghabraao na maanvi ko kuch nahin Hoga

j: virat mujhe maaf kardo maaf kardo
Jeevika saying whilst crying

V: bhabhi kyun mujhe sharminda kar rahi hoon
Aap ki koi galti nahin hai sirf kismat
Bas maanvi ko hospital le jaao

Viren jeevika left the police station with an unconscious maanvi

Throughout the car journey jeevika kept calling maanvi's name , whilst viren was speeding his car to reach to the hospital

J : mein ghar me bataade doongi kya huwa

Jeevika rang vadhera mansion and let vanshika know what happened . The news spread to the whole family , and all of them were making their way to the hospital except tarun and sundar they had to clean the house
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Back to the story

In a couple of minutes they reached to the hospital.maanvi was rushed to see a doctor , and the doctor took her for an observation

At the police station virat was moving around , pacing around the whole cell thinking about maanvi . The flashbacks kept coming back of maanvi fainting.

He was worried , devastated , tears were falling from his eyes

V: mein maanvi ke layak nahin , maloom nahin kaise maanvi hai

And virat carried crying .

In hospital all the vadhera family came and asked where maanvi was , viren indicated in the room , whilst comforting jeevika who was in tears .

After a long wait the doctor came and announced that maanvi fainted because of overload of stress . Her blood pressure is low .
Uska Dekh Baal karna parega warna

Viren and jeevika said together warna

Doctor: warna woh depression mein chale jayegi

Everyone was shocked about the news .

Vanshika : hum puraa khyaal maanvi ka rakenge

Doctor : usko khush lakhna parega , aur mein dawai likhdoonga kharidine ke liye

Jeevika : mannu teekh ho jaayegi

Viren put his hand on her shoulder and said
Haan zuroor

J: kya mannu se milsakhthai hai

Doctor : haan

Jeevika , viren , vanshika , dadajee , kadamdri , inder chachu , swamini went running in the room where maanvi was

When they saw maanvi they were shocked