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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: yushna

Wowww your story is really fab.. show da video to virat as well nd plzz aj hi update kardo next bhi cant wait



Tumhari wish ko kabool kardi baaligaith

Thank you yaar for comments 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: copypaste




Waiting for virman re union



Don't worry jald Hoga 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Very well written! Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Part 7b

Everyone was shocked looking at the video

Pc : you honour mr viren vadhera ne Baat sahi Kahin hai ,
raaz bohat kulenge , katal virat vadhera nahin hai bar kal jeevika vadhera

Everyone stared at jeevika

Vr: mere mooakhtha yeh bhool gaye ke jaiswal ne bhi goli chilaayi thi , aur your honour suboot ke usne maara hai yeh report

Viren gives it to the judge ,

Your honour yeh wohi gun he ke jis ke paas virat ke thi , aur police ne kabza ki thi

Video se saaf dikhtha hai ke virat waha tha bhi nahin , aur fingerprints toh sirf me jaiswal ke hai , aur virat ke .

Woh issliye ke joh gun karan ki thi jaiswal ne change kardi thi , aur wohi gun virat ne uthaayahi thi ,

Pc: gun change woh bhi saamne yeh kaise ho sakhtha

Vr: mr mahesh chopra maanvi and jeevika shock me Thai, aur jaiswal wohi fayda utaake gun ko swap kardi

Jaiswal was getting tensed

Pc : accha lekin your honour mrs jeevika vadhera bhi gun fire kiye thi

Vr: haan jeevika vadhera goli chilaayi thi lekin woh goli uss vase me hit ki , aur woh bullet iss bullet se bohat alag hai

Viren showed the two bullets and nodded his head

Vr: That's it all my your honour

Everyone was sitting down and waited for the judges verdict

Jeevika was praying for everything to be better

The judge finished writing on the report , the court room was quite ,

Judge : sab gawaao aur suboote ke baad , meine faisala Kiya hai , ke virat vadhera , aur jeevika vadhera ko ba Izzat Bari honge

Aur mr jaiswal ko umar kehd ki sazaaa hogi karan shekhawat ka katal karne ke liye

And hit the hammer ,

The police arrested jaiswal and took him away

Virat , inder chachu , viren and jeevika were smiling

The police inspector opened virat's handcuffs , virat stepped out the witness box

And came towards viren, jeevika and inder

Thank you ,

And was about to run , and viren called him

Vr: mere bhai gale nahin mileo ge , itni jaldi ghar jaane ke liye , and smiled

V : bhai baad me miloonga , mujhe maanvi ke paas jaana hai ,
And started running


Ic: virat rukho , agar pairon se ghar jaaoge toh kal subho pochege

And laughed , and showed him car keys

V: agar mera bas hotha toh ur ke jaao
chachu
Vr: haain kya baat hai

Virat took the car keys and went out

In the court room jeevika hugged inder chachu and viren

Vr : chale hum bhi

And they also made their way home


Virat was driving fast
Maanvi me aarahoon , aur kabhi tumse door nahin honga. And was smiling


Oof that was a hard work next part the awaited Milan ab khushiya start

Enjoy take care , do leave comments keep smiling




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Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Haww u stop at this point haww haww plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Awww mza agaya really likha haiii wow fit ti dono updates love ya to dear tmnay meri request pori ki thankyou thankyou next pat keliye em gng nutzz abi sayy hi update soon hafizahh
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Part 8a

Dikhtha hai aaj yaar tum sab mujhe maar daloge likhwa likhwa kar

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Koi baat nahin , Waise bhi me enjoy karthi hoon likhne ke liye

😉

Chalo ab baate kam action zyaada

Virat's car stopped outside the vadhera mansion
Everyone in the house was awaiting for the verdict

Virat came our from his car , and made his way by the front of the door

He looked at his house and smiled ,

Ab wapas aagaye mein ,

Virat entered the house , and everyone was staring at him

Mein raha hogaya hoon mein , meine katal bhi nahin Kiya jaiswal ne Kiya tha

Everyone smiled included swamini , she was upset that her son was killed , but was glad virat did not kill her

They all came running towards and hugged him

Dadajee: hum jaante Thai ke tum aisi ghatiya harkat karoge ,

Vanshika : virat beta tum jaante bhi nahin aaj kitni khushi mili hai tume wapas dekhne ke liye

Virat was happy meeting his family , but who he wanted to meet was not infront of him , he wanted maanvi , his crave for maanvi was killing him.

Swamini bua : virat mujhe maaf kardena ke tume meine bohat bura kaha tha , lekin mujhe Maloom nahin tha ke tumne karan ka katal nahin kiye
and started crying

V: kaisi Baat kar rahe ho bua , aap teekh thi , lekin fikr mat karna jaiswal ko kari si Kari se sazaa milegi and hugged swamini

Kambari chachi: virat Tumhare bina yeh ghar kitna suuna tha , ab tum aagaye toh khushiya khushiya hi Hongi

Shlok : virat bhai congratulations

And virat smiled

Viren , under and jeevika also entered ,

Dadajee went towards viren and inder

Dadajee : aaj tum dono ne mujhe bohat khush Kiya hai , tum dono is ghar ke lawyer ho is baat ka garv hai
Itna Mushkil case tumne jeeth la

And hugged them

Vr: dadajee yeh case hum kabhi bhi jeeth nahin paathe maanvi ke video ke bhigaar

Everyone's smile vanished and remembered maanvi's condition

V: mein jaa raha hoon maanvi ko Milne ke liye

J: haan tum jaao , kya patha tume Dekh kar teekh ho jaaye

And started crying , viren put his hand on her shoulder for comfort

Virat opened his room door and was
shocked


That's the end enjoy

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Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
I hope your enjoying my ss do leave comments thank you 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Part 8b

The awaited Milan ,
Yeh duriyaa lag thi hai sitam
Aagosh mein barloon sanam

Chalo socha thori si shayaari karloon
Kya jaatha hai

Let's get back

Virat was shocked , maanvi was lying on her bed fast asleep , she was really pale and weak

Virat went running towards maanvi , and sat beside her , he grabbed her hand and start kissing it continuously

Maanvi main waapas aagaya hoon Tumhare paas , Tumhare liye and tears started falling

Meine tume bohat takleef DI ab har takleef ka main bera payi karoonga

Ek Baar mera naam Kaho

Maanvi's fingers started moving , and she slowly opened her small eyes , and looked at virat
Tears dripped down her rosy cheek

Virat witnessed it and quickly wiped it ,
Ab yeh kabhi nahin aayenge , bohat rulaya tume he carressed her cheek

Maanvi bolo na , Tumhare liye dorr ke aaoon main

Maanvi slowly opened her mouth , she joined her lips together , and finally spoke

virat she said

Virat smiled and kissed her forehead

Maanvi got up from her bed and started crying

Virat tum sach main aagaye , Tumhare bina mera kya haal hogaya

Virat

V: shssshhh bas rona mat, mujhe sab kuch pataa hai , and wiped her tears with hands

And hugged her tightly

M: virat I love you , she said that whilst crying

V: I love you to , Maine kya kaha rona matt warna waapas jaaoonga

Hearing that maanvi released herself from the hug , and got up from the bed , and went by the window

Downstairs everyone was sitting down , dadajee stood up

dadajee : aap sab sone ke liye , raat hone waali hain

Everyone nodded for agreement

Swamini bua : bauji mujhe aapse zuroori Baat karni hai

Dadajee : chalo swamini beta and they left

Everyone made it to their rooms

In jeevika viren's room


J: viren ji main jaa rahi hoon mannu ko Milne ke liye jab se waapis aayi hoon mili nahin

And was about to leave viren grabbed her hand

Vr: kal jaana aaj yeh dono ko Baat karne do ,

J: viren ji lekin maanvi ki haalat

Vr: kyun fikr karthi hoon fm virat aagaya ab maanvi bhi teekh ho jaayegi , ab so jaao

Back to virman room

Maanvi was by the window

Virat came towards her

V: mein toh mazak kar raha tha

Maanvi turned and started hitting virat on his chest

M: kya samaj thai ho , aisi Baat karna
Tumne dekha haal hogaya tha , lekin ab tumne door hone ki Baat karoge toh main
Mar...

Before maanvi completed the sentence virat put his hand on maanvi's mouth

V: dubara aisi Baat mat karna , main jaantha hoon ke, I am sorry ( and put his hands on his ears , maanvi smiled )
Tumhare bina meri har raat kaise Mushkil se Kati
Tumhare liye taras tha main ,

M: virat , mujhse kabhi door Nahin jaana

And they hugged again , both closed their eyes , and were enjoying the moment

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But then , maanvi pushed virat away from her

M: virat tumne bataya nahin tum raha kaise huwe

Kahin DI nahin , maanvi was really tensed

Virat held maanvi 's hand and took her by the bed and sat down and told the full story Of what happened in the court


That's it the night is long toh kal virman ka romance Hoga

I know maanvi got better straight away , but I did not want to extend it , our cv's are here to extend tracks
Toh

Don't worry all emotions pain will be brought in next parts, of the pain they went through during separation

Enjoy reading it
I am off to bed night night everyone love you all

Do write back




Sorry yaar har part different length samaj nahin aata kahan stop karne ke liye 😉
Edited by haafizah1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Em the first one to comment nd really it was so amazing.. shukar hai khuda ka u ddnt drag .. u r a very gud writer GOD BLESS U nd updat soon:-) xoxoxo

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