virman ss Rishthein pg16 uploaded - Page 2

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Part 4b

Everyone looked at maanvi and they were shocked . She looked lifeless , her face was pale , and her lips were dry . She have dark eyebags Around her eyes , as well as been swollen , maanvi was staring at the ceiling

A drip was connected to her left arm .

Jeevika looked at maanvi and started crying , by looking at this state maanvi's cancer days came in her mind . Those painful days were not less for the whole family than this as well

Jeevika came towards maanvi and sat next to her to her and held her hand .

Every other member in the vadhera house were becoming teary eyed .

J: maanu sab kuch teekh ho jayega , tum pareshaan math hona , kuch bolo na

Maanvi did not respond she kept staring in the ceiling

Jeevika started becoming impatient , she couldn't see her sister in this state

J: maanu kuch bolo , kuch toh Kaho , meri Taraf dekho
Jeevika said this whilst caressing her cheek

But maanvi did not move an inch , she was in the same stiff position like she is a statue

Tears were dripping down from jeevika's eyes non stop

J : mannu bolo na , taras gayeen tumhari Baat sunke liye bolo na , pura din chapar chapar karthi hoon bolo na
Jeevika slightly shrugged maanvi's shoulders

But maanvi did not respond

Jeevika got up and went towards the nurse who was sorting out maanvi's injections

J: mannu kyun nahin bol rahii hai

Viren came towards her and dadajee
Jeevika beta maanvi ko abhi khosh aaya hai waqat lageka usko Bolne ke liye

Haan jeevika said viren and put his hand on her right shoulder

J: main nahin maanthi hoon koi tho Baat hai ke doctor nahin bataa raha mein jaarahi hoon


Jeevika pushed the door of the room maanvi was in , and went to the doctor's cabin
Viren also followed her

Maanvi entered the room ,
Doctor aap mujhe sach sach bataye mannu kyun nahin bol rahi hai

The doctor just looked down , viren also entered the cabin and was looking at jeevika pasteurising the poor doctor

Vr: doctor maaf kardo , meri biwi aap ke saath aisi Baat kar rahi hai
Jeevika chalo

Viren grabbed jeevika's hand and was about to take her away when the doctor said
Ruko

Viren and jeevika both turned around and faced the doctor

Vr: matlab

Doctor : darasal maanvi ko shock bhi lagaa hai

J : shock lekin kaise

D: Maine pehle aap sab ko bataya tha ke stress tha , iss liye , koi Baat ithni usse pareshaan kar rahi thi toh aapna khyal uss nahin rakha
Mental stress build up ho rahe hai

Jeevika started crying viren comforted her by hugging her

Vr: kya hum karsaktha hai maanvi ko teekh karne ke liye
Viren said this whilst holding jeevika

Doctor : sirf aap maanvi koh khush rake , baatein karne ki koshish Kare , aur Aaram bhi
Toh shayad woh teekh ho jaaye

Jeevika was shocked hearing the word shayad

J: shayad matlab

Doctor : mein guarantee nahin kar saktha hai lekin agar dhyan uska dene toh teekh hone ki umeed hai

Viren was shocked as well tears were dripping from his cheeks

jeevika hugged viren tightly and said only mannu

V: kuch nahin Hoga maanvi ko

They both thanked doctor for sharing the information and left the cabin , and seen everyone waiting outside maanvi room

Dadajee came towards viren and jeevika
Viren beta koi aur Baat hai

Viren and jeevika were both in the shock they did not speak for a couple of minutes

The entire vadhera family came and surrounded them , and were waiting for the answer of dadajee's question

Jeevika couldn't control her emotions anymore and bursted in tears
Vanshika came towards her and hugged her

Dadajee spoken bolo viren kya Baat hai jeevika beta kyun ithna ro rahi hai

Viren couldn't wait any further so he told them the conversation with the doctor
Everyone was shocked

Vr: ab Hume maanvi ko khush rakhna hai
Mein jaa raha hoon virat ko bataane ke liye woh intizaar kar raha hoga
Aap sab ghar jaaye Aaram Kare doctor ne Waise kaha ke aaj maanvi under observation hogi
Aur Waise bhi raat ho chuki hai

Vanshika : viren beta virat ko sach mat bataane maanvi ke bhaare mein woh bohat pareshaan hojayega

Viren maa sahi keh rahi hai said jeevika

Vr: koshish karoonga

They all their made way home except viren who went to the police station to see virat and inform him what happened


This is the end of this part
I hope you liked it
I hope you cried your buckets out
Only messing

Kya Kare yaar devdaas situation hai
But don't worry it will soon become happier

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Tum ne iss waqt ruk kar meri saas ruk di
Lol that tarun and sundar joke cracked me up lol plz cont soon!

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Tum ne iss waqt ruk kar meri saas ruk di


Lol that tarun and sundar joke cracked me up lol plz cont soon!

I will continue soon thanx for reading it 😃

It was really amazing nd i really cried:-P eb jaldi likho nd plzzz vrat ko sach pata hona chai dnt make viren hide ut

Ab agla part

Part 5a

Viren informed the police officer he wants to see virat so viren made his way to virat's cell , the police officer let viren in virat's cell as he is also virat's lawyer.

Virat was sitting on the floor with knees bended towards his stomach
When virat saw viren entering his cell he stood up quickly and came running towards him

Maanvi kaisi hai ? Maanvi ab teekh hai ? Uss ko huwa kya tha? Kya doctor ne kaha ?

Virat said this quickly , viren looked at his brother and seen the desperation of knowing his wife's condition . He was going to tell him the truth but looking at his stated to not tell the truth , as it will make virat even upset .

V: bolo na bhai kya huwa meri wife ko

Vr: ek minute saans bhi lelo . Maanvi teekh hai woh woh ussne ...
Apna khyaal nahin rakha Tha Subha se kuch khaya nahin tha

V: jhoot bol rahe ho bhai , koi aur Baat hai

Vr: kyun Tum mere vishwaash nahin karte hoon

V: aankhien bhand karke bhi karta hoon , lekin bhai aap se sachai chupaa nahin jaathi
Aap kabhi jhoot Bol bhi nain sakthai
Sach bataye

Vr: koi Baat nahin aive tension le rahe ho

Virat grabbed viren's hand and put it on top of his head
V: bhai meri kasam khake Kaho ke maanvi teekh hai bilkul teekh hai

Viren stared at the ground he couldn't lie further

V: bhai bolo na

Viren tried his beat to hide but it was too much weight , and then

He told he told what exactly happened to maanvi
The doctor's conversation

Virat was shocked

V: yeh sab meri wajah se qurbaani ki chakar mein maine maanvi ko naraash kardiya
Sahin keh rahi thi bohat bura hoon mein itni takleef usse DI hai

Tears were dropping from virat and viren's eyes

Vr: samalo khud ko maanvi teekh ho jaayegi

V: Maine iss liye maanvi ko yaha nahin aansoon diya kyun ke me jaantha tha yaha ki zindagi jail mein bohat katan hai
Mujhe kya maloom tha uss ke liye bahar ki life bhi katan hogi

Viren couldn't see his brother having a breakdown , virat would support him , but seeing his pain for maanvi was totally heartwrenching

Virat fell on the floor and started crying and screaming maanvi's name

Viren bend down and helped virat stand up , and wiped his tears

Vr: ek Mard hoke Rona accha nahin lageka
Mein tumhe waada karoonga ke maanvi ko teekh karaaenge , aur saath mein tumhe jail me chirwaaaye ge

Virat hugged viren tightly
V: bhai meri maanvi ka khyaal rakhna , aur meri Taraf se dehr sara pyaar dena

Viren let go of virat and made his way out of cell

Vr : virat samalo sab kuch teekh ho jaayega

Viren made his way to home , the house was quiet as everyone made their way to their respective rooms
Viren entered his room and seeing jeevika on the floor clutching maanvi's photo

Viren came towards jeevika and sat on the floor
Jeevika faced viren and hugged him

Viren ji mannu ke saath aisa kyun hotha hai pehle cancer aur ab Yai , ussne kya Kiya , kisko usne dukh diyaa hai

Viren cupped jeevika's face
Viren : jeevika maanvi teekh ho jayegi , jog acche insaan hothe hai unke saath aisa hotha hai , aur baad mein khushiyaan hothiyaan hai

Jeevika hugged viren

Jeevika tume HUD ko samalna parega warna virat ko aur maanvi ko kaun samelega

Viren ji aap virat ko Milne Gaye Thai , kaisa tha , aap ne sach bataya

Viren told his time with virat the conversation

Jeevika started crying loudly

Meri wajah se bhugat raha hai virat

Vr: jeevika sab kuch teekh hojayega
, tum sojaao
Subha hospital jaana hai

Viren wiped jeevika's tears and supported her for going to bed . He tucked her in her bed , and jeevika fell asleep
and went to sit
On the chair

Vr: ab main kisko samaaloon kya Karoo , ek Taraf bhai , ek Taraf pyaar , ek Taraf maa , ek Taraf bhari maa aur ek Taraf maanvi

Kya karoon

Viren placed his hands on his face and started crying


Next morning everyone were in the hospital , and entered maanvi's room

When they saw maanvi they burst into tears

Jeevika came towards maanvi

Maanvi was exactly like yesterday , the same old pale face ,
the same drip dangling from her arm
The only difference she was in a sitting position , and her eyes were facing the window direction

Mannu she caressed her hai , aaj nahin Baat karogi mujhse , tumhari Bhak Bhak ko bhi sune ke liye Tayaar hoon

Mannu bolo Naaa manuu , jeevika shrugged maanvi's shoulder

Originally posted by: yushna

It was really amazing nd i really cried:-P eb jaldi likho nd plzzz vrat ko sach pata hona chai dnt make viren hide ut

Thank you darling
Don't worry yaar I let virat found out 😉

Itt was fab again yar:-) u write really well.. nd thankyew for telling virat the truth u knw jb manvi behosh hoi toh i thought woh preg hai par ni.. make it melodramatic jaisi manvi ko sachai pata chal gai she tell viren dn jaisawal uspay humla karta hai. Full filmi. GOD BLESS U.

Omg i was crying while reading this this was so dam good

Part 5b

Maanvi did not respond

The doctor entered the room and did his final check up , before maanvi can be discharged ,
Once the doctor done the check up he said

Maanvi ka khyaal rakhna dhawaayian teekh time mein dena. Aur bed rest koi kaam kyun ke bohat kamzor ,

J: doctor mannu kahin bhi nahin jaasakhthi

Doctor : usko Aaram ki sakht zuroorat hain

Vr: maanvi ko jaana kahan hai

J: virat ko Milne ke liye

With hearing virat's name a tear dripped from maanvi's cheek

Doctor : meine maanvi ka check up karliya aap isko ghar me leh jaasakhthai

Viren and jeevika supported maanvi and took her home
Once they reached home maanvi was taken to her room and was tucked into bed by jeevika

It was nearly dinner time , so everyone made their way to the dining table except jeevika , as she was sitting by maanvi who was fast asleep.

Jeevika was caressing her hair , mein sachayi bataadoongi ke meine katal Kiya hai
Tume Waise virat milega phir tumhari tabiyat teekh ho jaayegi hai na
Mein mannu tune aise nahin dekhsakhthi
Lekin koi mera Yakeen karega
Suboot toh chahiye

Jeevika started to have flashbacks of the karan incident and before the incident , and remembered about the camera which maanvi was making movie off

Agar woh mil jayega toh virat rahaa ho jaayega

Jeevika wiped her tears and gave a smile to maanvi who was in her own world in her precious sleep .

Mannu tume bohat jald tumhara pyaar Milne waale hai

Once everyone had dinner , viren entered the room with jeevika and maanvi's food

Jeevika tume kuch khaana chahiye warna maanvi ka kaun khyaal rakega
Subha se bhooki ho

Viren ji mujhe aap se zuroori Baat karni
Meine aaj kabhi tume kuch maanga nahin tha lekin mein aaj aap se kuch maang rahin goon

Vr: baad mein patana pehle khaalo aur maanvi ko bhi kilaao

Viren ji lekin

Vr: baad me sunloonga I promise and viren cupped jeevika's face.

Maanvi's eyes opened and jeevika said

Mannu ab kuch kha lehthe hai

Jeevika put maanvi in a upright position and brought maanvi's plate next to her .

Dekho Tumhare favourite chawal rajma

Maanvi did not say anything

Tears dripped from jeevika's rosy cheeks ,
But she had to be brave
Viren was witnessing this the pain that jeevika was going through was unbearable

Jeevika got a spoon and fed maanvi , without realising fed the food

Meri pyaari mannu good girl ab khana khaliya toh jald baatein bhi karne Lena

Viren came near to jeevika and sat beside on the side of maanvi's bed

Jeevika khaalo and he picked the spoon and fed her

Viren ji kal court proceedings hai na , Aap Tayaar hai

Jeevika tayaari kya karoon case Laroon lekhin kya kahoon samaj nahin aatha

J: viren ji sachai hai ke Maine maara hai kal proof kardena

Viren was shocked

J: viren ji proof hai na camera joh maanvi ne record Kiya karan ke ghar me , virat toh free ho jaayega

Vr: camera , yeh toh police ne nahin leyaa tha
Tum sure ho

J: haan maanvi karan se saath haatha paae toh usne camera pekh diya

Viren looked at jeevika and grabbed jeevika's hand
Chale abhi camera Lene ke liya

J: abhi

Vr: haan


That's the end of this part I am going to change it a bit than what we seen
Enjoy
Take care
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