virman ss Rishthein pg16 uploaded - Page 3

Originally posted by: yushna

Itt was fab again yar:-) u write really well.. nd thankyew for telling virat the truth u knw jb manvi behosh hoi toh i thought woh preg hai par ni.. make it melodramatic jaisi manvi ko sachai pata chal gai she tell viren dn jaisawal uspay humla karta hai. Full filmi. GOD BLESS U.

Thank you for your comments yaar I really appreciate it sweetie

Meine bhi pehle socha tha pregnant karaadoon
Lekin uske liye hot romance likhna parega

Ab virman ke saath besharmi karni hai tab pregnant banaadooongi

Fikr mat karna yaar

Ab raat din virman ke khyaalo mein bohat idea sar me jam hogaya

Zuroor dekhna chobees ghante 24 hours haafizah ki story besharmi
Virman ke liye 😆 😳

Romance toh howa wa hai haafiza , lolll kardo preg:-P:-P story interesting hojaye gi. Hafizah yar one request jevika apna crime admit na karay virat ko jail mai hi rakhna plzz jb tk jaiswal ka sach samnay ni ata.. plzzz nd agai yar the update was really gud nd interesting, manvi ki pain yar too gud, u ryt very gud:-) update soonnn luv yushna:-)

Part 6a

Chalo lets start , it is going to be fast paced , as I am getting tired of making audience cry

Viren and jeevika made their way in karan's house.the flashblacks started playing in jeevika's mind like a film been replayed again and again.
Jeevika was getting nervous and held viren's hand for comfort tightly . Viren rubbed her hand slightly to show he is their for her.

Jeevika and viren started to search the house untill they found the camera , which was by the curtain .

Viren and jeevika were instead of watching the video there , they made the decision to watch it at home , incase they get caught .

Jeevika and viren made their way home , and went upstairs bedroom .

Suddenly , viren's phone start ringing

Vr: raat ke do baje phone kun kar rahe hain

He picked his phone and was shocked

Viren peechana hamari dosti bohat acchi hai , iss liye socha tunhara haal poochloon

Vr: kaun ho tum ?

Me jaiswal

Vr:suna hai tum chutiyaa ke liye bahar aaye ho , chutiyaan ke baad jail jaaego

Js: hahaha dekho kaun Bol raha hai jis ka Khud bhai jail me hai , ab biwi bhi join karegi
Devar aur bhabhi saath me chaki peesenge

Viren was getting really angry

Vr: agar tum mere saamne hothe toh ek zor sa thappar tum khaego , samajo tum , aur Waise bhi tume kissne kaha hai ke meri biwi jail jaayegi

Js: asli karan ka katal woh hi hain na , meina dekha hai na , matlab suna Hai

Viren was in deep thought how does he know ? Has he got something to do with murder ?
Before he could get the answers of the questions , jaiswal ended the conversation

Next day

It was the day of the court proceedings , viren was really worried whether he will free his brother , and find a solution to free jeevika before been exposed .
He was sitting on the chair with all the law books on the table , and hands on his forehead

But , after a couple of minutes he realised the camera on the table.
he didn't see the camera yesterday night as he was really knackered

And what he saw in the camera was completely shocked ,
A big smile appeared on his cheeks

Viren paused the camera and went to find inder chachu and show him what he has seen

Inder chachu entered the room

Ic: viren kya Baath hai kuch milaa

Vr: bohat kuch mila yeh camera nahin chutkara hai

Ic: matlab

Vr: Khud dekho

Viren showed the camera

this is intersting ...do pm me :)

Wohooo so fast dtzzz great..:-) i toh too much enjoyed it:-) just show the camera rocording infront of everone in court takay virat bhi dekhay ky us raat uski biwi ky sath howa kia tha

Part 6b

Sorry for the short update but don't worry I will compensate

Viren and inder both were happy when watching the video

Ic: viren mein jaaraha hoon police station gun ke fingerprints laana ke liye

Vr: haan chachu , mujhe pehle shak tha jaiswal katal tha

After they got all the evidence , they made the way to court , maanvi was at home resting , and jeevika did not want to go to the court and leave maanvi behind . However , she had to go so she can confess her sins , and let virat free .

The car was quite jeevika did not know what to say , neither viren . Inder chachu was driving to the court , and once they reached there , the silence broke .

J: mein sachai batane ke liye Tayaar hoon

Viren was shocked

Vr: nahin , kuch nahin bolegi kyun ke tumne katal kiya nahin , chup ro higee

J: lekin viren ji aap aisa kaisa ke sakhthe hai , camera me saaf dikhtha hai ke Maine karan par goli chilaayi

Vr: tum aise Yakeen me kaise. Ke sakhthi ho , tum ne dekha hai camera mein , camera mein tumne. Shot Kiya bhi nahin , jaiswal ne Kiya

J: kya jeevika was shocked

Vr: jab karan ne maanvi ke haath se camera cheena that , toh camera ka angle darwaza par tha , aur wahan dikha jaiswal enter kartha hai , aur karan par goli chilaayi

Jeevika smiled
Toh is ka matlab hum Bach jaayenge

Vr: tab Bach jaayenge jab court me jaayenge chalo

They entered the court , and all the witnesses were sitting down , inder chachu , and viren sat in their positions at the front desk , where lawyers sit

Jeevika sat behind , praying to god everything will get alright ,

After a couple of minutes of silence virat entered searching for one and only his wife maanvi
But to his regret she wasn't there

He looked at jeevika , and gave a signal to where is maanvi ? but she looked down she felt guilty even though she never killed , the pain was killing her that if she went first then maanvi wouldn't be like that

A tear dripped from virat's eyes , he was waiting for soo long to see maanvi , but unfortunately they couldn't meet due to circumstances .

The judge entered and everyone stood up ,

Judge : case theen sau theen ki kariwaa shuru ho jaaye

The prosecutor ( lol I think that's what they call it , the one against viren ,If not then let it be )

Stood up and shared his view

Your honour aaj yeh case paani ke jaise saaf hai, mulzim virat ne kabool Kiya ke usne katal Kiya hai , gun ke upar bhi uske fingerprints bhi hai

Vr: I object your honour , darasal mere mooakhtha ne joh Baat ki uss ko mein nahin maantha
Aaj iss case me joh raaz khulenge woh aap sab khairan honge

Pc: kya keh rahe hai viren sahab , joh Baat keni hai sab ke saamne Kaho

Vr: woh toh me waise bhi karoonga ,
Asli katal virat vadhera nahin hamere saamne

Jaiswal was also in the crowd and was getting worried

Woh katal jaiswal ne Kiya hai

Everyone. Turned and faced jaiswal, the police inspector held jaiswal and took him to the front , everyone was staring

Viren was giving jaiswal dagger looks

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finallly i want to see virat go and see manvi and they meet eachother ...they shud never be separate ...they are incomplete without each other..

great update 👍🏼

Wowww your story is really fab.. show da video to virat as well nd plzz aj hi update kardo next bhi cant wait

Waiting for virman re union

Part 7a

Due to demands have updated next part , mein koshish karthi hoon ke jitne update kar sakhthi hoon me Karoongi

Thanks for all compliments love you yaars

I appreciate all you views and ideas

Love you darlings

Back to story

Everyone waited for jaiswal to say that what ever he will say will be truth

Pc: mr viren vadhera aap ke paas kya evidence hai ke jaiswal ne karan ko katal Kiya hai , kahin aap iss liye nahin ke rahe ho aapne bhai ko chutkara dene ke liye

Vr: mr mahesh chopra yeh case koi personal waja se me nahin leh raha
Your honour mujhe aapse guzaarish hai ke me ek video aap sab ko dikhaaoon , jisko Dekh kar mere mooakhtha ke sawaalo ka jawab bhi mil jaayega

Judge : haan aap ko permission hai

Viren went to the front of desk , put the video up , and a computer expert supported viren to put the projector up .

Virat was looking at viren , inder and jeevika for answers , what video was itv? What was it showing ?

The video was put on the screen and the light went off for better view

it all started from jeevika entering karan's house

K: bhabhi aap yaha kuch chahiye

J: karan bole matt bano, tumara vadhera house ki aasli wajah kya hai

K: kya keh rahi hoon bhabhi aap apni behn ki baatein me aagayi , mera ghar se Ristha

Karan came towards jeevika

J: karan dooor raho mujhse , ab yeh tumara jhoot ka nikaab utar Gaya

Karan started laughing

K: bohat samajdar ho , jaane chahati ho
Mein iss liye aaon vadhera khandan ko Barbad karne ke liye
Aur tumhari pyaari se behn ke saath thora time spend karne ke liye

When virat heard that he was getting angry , he was clutching his fists tightly . How dare he thinks about HIS wife

J: tume sharm nahin aathi ke maanvi ke bare me aise baat karne ke liye

K: kya karoon Baat toh aisi vadhera's ki bahue toh atomic bomb hai

J : chee sharm tume nahin aathi , bohat ghire huwe insaan ho tum

Viren and virat were looking at karan with anger

Karan started laughing and grabbed jeevika's hand

Maanvi's bangles made sound , karan turned around and spotted maanvi , he came towards her , and grabbed her hand

K: accha aaj meri toh lottery nikal gayi , and The camera screen went off

And then it came on but from a different angle . But it showed the incident , but it was a bit far .

M: choro mujhe karan , karan was holding maanvi's hand


Virat hit his arm on the bar , his anger was fuming seeing karan mishandling his wife , blood started to come out but , he. Didn't care

Jeevika was looking at the video and tears were falling , the devastating , horrific incident was been played back In her mind .


Back to the video

J: maanvi ko choro , jeevika grabbed karan's hand and pulled it to the side .

Karan moved his hand and stepped back

K: tumne toh meri zindagi aazab kardi maanvi , meri manzil tab puraa hogi jab tum marjaaogi

Karan took out a gun from his left pocket , jeevika and maanvi were shocked

Karan pulled maanvi's right arm vigerously
and put the gun on her head

Virat was shocked he kicked the. Witness box hardly, viren looked at him , and gave a signal to calm down

J: karan maanvi ko choro , jeevika was getting angry .

K: nahin , uraadoongi saali ko , and started laughing , maanvi was trying to push him away ,

Jeevika came forward and tried grabbing the gun , then maanvi was supporting her .

And then the camera showed the door opening and entered jaiswal

Seeing himself on the screen jaiswal was sweating

He took a gun out of his pocket , and positioned it on karan

After the hard struggle , jeevika finally got the gun , but then karan grabbed maanvi's neck and tried to strangle her


Virat was shocked , tears were dropping from his eyes , he was not only angry with karan , but also himself because he was not there to protect his wife , he was fighting for her life , as well as for her sister.

Jeevika had the gun in her hand ,

J: karan maanvi ko choro

K: nahin choruunga kya karogi tum
Goli chilaaogi

J: karan me time aakhiri Baar ke rahi ho

Jaisal shot the gun and he hit karan , and jeevika also shot the gun , and karan fell on the floor

The video went off


end of this part next part will end drama hopefully
Dekhna maat buliye haafizah ki kahani
Meri zubani

Tell me if you liked it , don't throw chappals and tomatoes
haven't got a waterproof jacket


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