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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
it was damn awesome.. first rey n gang.. then ReYam n TaaRey.. everything.. jjust awesome!!! loved it to the core... n plz update the next part sooon..!! waiting eagerly!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
its amazing👏
loved it😳
plz plz plz update soon 😊
n thanx 4 d pm😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
wow man
i hav read all prt of ur stry
n i am just luving it vry much
thansk for writing it n plzzz do PM me
nxt time n put nxt prt soon
plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
😛Awesome!!!!! loved it!!! Update soon.. pm me!!! 😉
Edited by Curvmars - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Kaise laga? Did u ask kaise laga? Far more better than current track of D3, would have loved if we would have got something lyf this in D3. Continue soon and plz pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Its really good...waiting for your update and do pm me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Hey guys!!! I am back to update my ff.😊 Sorry could not do it earlier as my college people were sucking every drop of blood present in my body.😭😭 Since I study in Amity University, it was hosting the Channel V Nokia Indiafest which kept me very very busy. Sorry again guys...😔😭

Now coming back to the ff, Chapter 3 will solely concentrate on the BB match. I know that it would also happen in the current d3 track, but this update is purely my imagination as to how the BB match would take place. All rotten eggs, tomatoes, praises and criticism are welcome

OK, so here it is

P.S: Plz plz plz plz comment. All the comments are very valuable to me 😊😊😊.



Chapter 3: The D-Day (part a)

It is finally the day of the match. The whole college had a very tense but excited environment. After all, an important match was going to take place... a match, which would determine the future and scope of dance in the college. The stakes were high, as well as the spirit and enthusiasm in the air. They all knew that the opponent team was strong. They had to be, after all, they were the 5 ' times inter college BB champions. The St. Louis team was at first shocked at seeing their skill, strength and technique from the video footage shown by Swayam, for the purpose of strategy making. They all thought that it would be tough, but they all knew that it was not impossible to beat them. They also knew that they had to win at any cost, because it would not only mean a victory for the team, but also an ultimate victory of dance... both as a hobby and as a career option, as they will receive their old RH back!!👏👏

Inside the boy's locker room:

All the boys are in the room. 🤢Vicky biting his nails, Bharat playing with his fingers, Nil and Amar with their heads in their hands, and Rey and Swayam leaning against the lockers with their hands folded. Nervousness was evident on their faces, but Rey was feeling an extra amount of pressure. After all, he was the one who struck a deal with their AVP regarding the returning back of the RH to them.🤢🤢 But he also felt a little lonely as Taani was not there when he needed her the most.😔😔

Rey (thinking): Aaj bahut bada din hai hum sab ke liye, lekin bas tumhara saath nahi hai. 😭Please ek baar mujhse baat karo, mujhe all the best wish karo, tab main game easily jeet jaaunga. (looking up) Hey Taani ke Krishna ji, please use ek baar vo mujhse mil le, tabhi mujhe relief milegi aur mera confidence bhi boost hoga.🤔😊

His thought process was disturbed by a series of shouts outside the locker room. All the members looked at each other, puzzled.😕😕 Only when they concentrated a bit, it became evident that all the students were continuously "St. Louis", "St. Louis". This made their hearts beat more loudly.😲 Swayam straightened himself and looked at all of them.

Swayam: OK Guys!!! This is it!! Ab chahe kuch bi ho jaaye, hum himmat nahi haarenge. We will play as a team and most importantly WIN as a team.👍🏼😳

Rey: He is right. Ab ye game sirf ek game nahi hai. Par ek aakri zariya dance jisse hum dance ko college mein vaapis la sakte hai. St. Louis ko pehle jaisa cool and happening college bana sakte hai!!😔😳

Everyone look at Rey and nod in agreement.👏


Vicky: Lets kill it guys!!👍🏼

Everyone cheer him and come together for a group hug.👏👏

Vicky: St. Louis ke liye

Bharat: Dil ke liye ❤️

Amar: Dosti ke liye!!😊

Reyam and Nil: Dance ke liye!!😊😊

All (Shouting): FOR DIL, DOSTII AND DANCE!!!👏👏

Rey opens the door of the locker room sand indicates Swayam to lead the team. Swayam agrees and one by one, all of them walk in a manner reflecting confidence. As soon as they reach the assembly hall, they are greeted by the loud cheers of the students of the college.👏 They all start shouting the names of the boys on top of their voices.👏 This boosted the morale and confidence of the boys.😊😊 Rey was very happy that all the students were cheering for them but his eyes searched for Taani. He then saw her standing with the rest of the girls.😊 Taani also saw him.😊
(LLHH, TR BG)

Taani and the other girls walk towards the boys.

Girls: All the best!!!👍🏼

Boys: Thanks!!

Taani (Hugging Swayam tightly): All the best bhai!!! Jeetke aana...😃😃😳

Swayam (Chuckling lightly): Haan sure!!😆😊

Taani turns towards Rey. Rey looks at her hopefully. She is about to hug him when she stops herself from doing so. Taani looks at him and remembers the promise she made to herslf of maintaining only a professional relation with him.😔 She shakes her head and leaves from there.

Rey looks at her in a hurt manner coz she ignored him and did not wish him.😭😭 He did not say anything as he wanted to focus on the game. He then saw the VP approaching.

VP: All the very best to all of you👍🏼

All: Thank you sir.😊

They soon walk towards the court. Rey turned around one last time to catch a glimpse of Taani. 🤔He then saw her standing her with the rest of the girls. She looked left and right and with a smile, silently mouthed "All the Best".😳☺️👍🏼 Rey breathed a sigh of relief and smiled hard.😃😃 He turned around, looked up and thought

Rey (thinking): Thank you Krishna ji, meri wish fulfil karne ke liye.😳😳

He then walked towards the court. Taani also fervently prayed that they win the match and everything becomes normal once again...


PART B IN NEXT POST!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ COMMENT!!!!😊😊😊

Edited by dvishwa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
oww hw sweet ...nic update...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
plz do continue...
awesome...❤️👍🏼
n thnx for the PM n do PM wen update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
It was fantastic, love the boys bonding and Rey only want his Taani to wish him was so cute now he will definitely concentrate and win the game. Plz continue

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