The confession - my version

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys... I am starting a new ff on taarey... it might seem a little too... what to say, repetitive from 13th dec's episode, but it will have a different path... I need some help on suggesting a good title for it... mainly it is based on the Rasiya/Tujhko jo paya promo and goes to the BB match. I will try and keep it different from the main d3 story. All rotten eggs and tomatoes are welcome, and plz may I have honest opinion, even if it is the worst of the criticism.


So without further ado... here is the PROLOGUE...


"Har koi mujhe right ke liye responsible samjhta hai... sirf tum hi mujhe wrong kyon samajhti ho??" A tearful Rey asks Taani.

Taani looks at Rey. She can see how broken he was. Reyaansh Singhania, the champion in every aspect, and moreover her Prince Charming, was looking at her tearfully. He might have been quiet, but his eyes were asking a thousand questions to her... begging her to be with him...

Taani: Aisa nahi hai Rey. Aap hamesha mere liye right rahe. Aap kabhi bhi mere liye wrong nahi ho sakte.

Rey: Phir kyon... kyon... kyon Taani kyon???

He touches his head with that of Taani's and stays still... Taani was visibly upset... she could not see her prince charming like this. She so wanted to say loudly that she is with him forever when she suddenly recalls the day when Rey rejected her love. This makes her slightly angry. She makes an excuse regarding work and rushes out of the rehearsal hall, leaving Rey in the same state. For a few minutes, he stood still like a statue but he gathers himself and goes home.

Howz it guys, plz plz plz plz give me ur approval to continue...🤔

for PMs, do add me to ur buddy list!!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sure u shud continue its a grt concept even i ws thinking ki rey ne taani ko kitna hurt kiya ha aur aab agar vo taani se pyaar karta hai aur confess karta hai toh taani vo rejection din ko yaad kar ke hurt to hogi na... Use bhi bhaav khana chahiye rey ko use manana chahiye n den our taarey shud remain shining always... Do update fst ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start plz continue am eagerly waiting to read what will happen next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh! Rey hurt. I cant see it. But have full faith in u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc..vry eager 2 knw wat happens ahead...do update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept.
Rey ne Taani ko bahot hurt and ignore kiya hai so uska bhi right hai use ignore karne ka.
so pls. continue soon and do pm me.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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So guys... presenting Chapter 1: FLASHBACK...😊😊

At their respective homes

Both of them are sitting besides the window, recalling the day's events. And both of them go into flashback mode...

Taani's flashback:

Taani recalls how she first met Rey, how she lied to him and became Team Weakling's 6th dancer, how he kept the secret well and helped her train to match the dancing levels of the team. Also during the dance camp, how he protected her against Shivam, his tears when he sang during the bonfire😭, when he took her hand and led away from Shivam☺️, the way he caught her when she fell down as the bus moved☺️. Also during the food fight, when he helped her cleanup (Washroom scene)😳😳

On recalling such memories, Taani felt something prick her eye. She blinked and a tear escaped.😭😭

Taani: Meri vajah se aap itne problems face karte ho... Jab se main aayi hun, Aapko dukh aur musibaton ke sivay kuch nahi diya hai... Ab main aapko is haal mein nahi dekh sakti hun. I promise, aaj ke baad apko kaam ke alava kisi bhi cheez ke liye bother nahi karungi...😭😭😭

Rey's flashback:

Rey recalls how he first met Taani in the boy's locker room, he she mockingly fainted in his arms when he agreed to train her😉😉, how his blood boiled when he saw Taani's eyed filled with tears after the Rey-Taani article went viral on the college's discussion forum😡😡, how she gently tended to his wounds after the fight.😊😊

On top of that, how could he forget before the faceoff when he asked her to leave and she shouted "Nahi Sunna". (Smiles slightly)😳😊. The recent memory being the dance camp when , when she shouted at Shivam 'Nahi hun main tumhari girlfriend', the other being " Ye jo koi bhi ho, par sach ye hai ki aaj se aur abhi se tum mere life mein kuch nahi ho". He could still recall the victory smirk he gave to Shivam.😎😉

Rey: Tum itni special kyon ho taani??😔 Jab bhi tum mere saath hoti ho, to lagta hai ki bas, ab main kisi bhi situation ko bina dare face kar sakta hun. Tumhari ek smile ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hun.😊 Jab tumne kaha ki main tumhare liye kabhi wrong nahi ho sakta hun, to laga ki bas, ab chahe kuch bhi ho, koi saath de ya na de, jab tak tum saath ho, main har fight jeet sakta hun.😊 Agar ise pyaar kehte hai, to main tumse bahut pyaar karta hun.❤️ Itna, ki main tumhare liye khushi khsuhi apni jaan de dun.❤️ Aur ye main tumse confess karke rahunga.😳 Ye reayaansh Singhania ka promise hai. (In a determined manner).😳

So... Kaisa laga??? plz comment and tell ur views...😊

Edited by Divya_D3_Taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww Taarey recalling all the moments the spend together, that was beautiful. Hope Rey confess his feelings to Taani soon that way she wouldn't ignore him. you're doing a awesome job continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi welcum to the foruuum😃 and wow it was such a lovely update of their feelings!! loved it:) update soon:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey... This is Awesome.. Actually I was waiting for a os/ss/ff after thursday's epi.. So heres it and its awesome.. Loved the prolouge as well as chap 1.. u have to have to n have to contibue ASAP and pm me please? I can't afford to miss this!

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