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Posted: 12 years ago
If in Trading Yesterday, I was questioning Arnav and how he seems to be so aloof in understanding Khushi's sacrifice, Every Heart has a Beat has definitely opened his eyes, has given him a reason to really dig deep inside and ask for whom his heart beats for.

Thank you for portraying this LA. She is the voice!
and a catalyst to bring them together. I cannot imagine what Khushi has suffered through, raped by her own father, and then the rest...Me having a lump in my throat just reading that bit is an understatement Masam! I was actually tearing up...

Khushi's illness in the last chapter really had me worried. She has suffered just way too much, and she voiced that out in this chapter, thank god!! The suffering needs to end...and I hope that Arnav brings back the sunshine in her life just by being there with her...no more running away, and no more communication gaps, and no more Alizah! :P She is a nutcase, freak yes!

A short one for now, but I will most probably drop by your blog soon :) Thank you for writing IF ONLY...and then, there is STB...how do you handle these two peices of writing, completely different genres, and the emotions you weave...beautiful and captivating! Keep it up :)

- Dee :)


Edited by nyxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
For Chapter 8: Every heart, has a beat

M, you've titled it chapter 7, you need to change that, this is chapter 8 :)

And what a chapter it was! So many things. I am glad Khushi has finally spoken her heart out, done something that pleases or at least relieves her for once in her life, told Arnav what he means to her. They have both been truly honest after a long, long time. And that is a start. What that leads to is a different question altogether, but as of now I am satisfied that Khushi has at least demanded a share of happiness and life for herself. And Arnav is many things good and bad, but he admitted he was being a coward by letting her being the first one to sign the papers, and that again, is a big step.

Alizah, I want to hate her, but somewhere I do understand her...after Khushi left her life revolved around Arnav and Aryan for so many years, and now she is terrified to think she won't be required any longer. And she is young, all she wants is love and to be indispensable to someone; Aryan and Arnav are the only people she has and now Khushi might take them from her after disappearing for so long. How can I blame her if she wants to do everything in her power to keep Arnav and Aryan with her, or if she feels Khushi has no right over them? I do not like her, but I cannot hate her for what she is doing.

I have come to love Lavanya. She is kickass, and she is so beautifully and smartly sketched, M - brilliant. My favorite until now was Tina, and now theres a new addition to the list - La. Love her.

Khushi, that poor darling. Seriously M, is she doomed to a lifetime of suffering? That can't be, there is a God and he needs to set things right. I really hope Arnav's anger is just his usual reflex, because if this time he cannot see her pain and her sacrifice, he is the biggest idiot.

I repeat, I love Lavanya :D Lovely update, M!
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vgedin

For Chapter 8: Every heart, has a beat


M, you've titled it chapter 7, you need to change that, this is chapter 8 :)

And what a chapter it was! So many things. I am glad Khushi has finally spoken her heart out, done something that pleases or at least relieves her for once in her life, told Arnav what he means to her. They have both been truly honest after a long, long time. And that is a start. What that leads to is a different question altogether, but as of now I am satisfied that Khushi has at least demanded a share of happiness and life for herself. And Arnav is many things good and bad, but he admitted he was being a coward by letting her being the first one to sign the papers, and that again, is a big step.

Alizah, I want to hate her, but somewhere I do understand her...after Khushi left her life revolved around Arnav and Aryan for so many years, and now she is terrified to think she won't be required any longer. And she is young, all she wants is love and to be indispensable to someone; Aryan and Arnav are the only people she has and now Khushi might take them from her after disappearing for so long. How can I blame her if she wants to do everything in her power to keep Arnav and Aryan with her, or if she feels Khushi has no right over them? I do not like her, but I cannot hate her for what she is doing.

I have come to love Lavanya. She is kickass, and she is so beautifully and smartly sketched, M - brilliant. My favorite until now was Tina, and now theres a new addition to the list - La. Love her.

Khushi, that poor darling. Seriously M, is she doomed to a lifetime of suffering? That can't be, there is a God and he needs to set things right. I really hope Arnav's anger is just his usual reflex, because if this time he cannot see her pain and her sacrifice, he is the biggest idiot.

I repeat, I love Lavanya :D Lovely update, M!



Titled it wrong! 😆 Thank you V, you can imagine now how 'aloof' I am these days. *shakes head*
And thank you once again 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey masam dear plz send me the blog link
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey masam send me the link to your blog. i havent reaid anything after chapter 16 :(

😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey *waves awkwardly*

Okay so before you start hitting & kicking me, hear my tragic story. I know that's the third time I'm telling you my idiotic story but I can't help it.

So the point is that I have my major exam (you know which one) in like 2 months & I have shitload of syllabus to revise so I'm completely immersed in my books right now, so much that I have very little time to read something on IF & as you know I read hundreds of FFs on IF so it's a bit tough to catch up on all the stories. And then there is 'If Only' which I read only when I have a clear mind (which is not saturated with physics, chemistry & biology). So at the moment I'm not in a state to read If Only. I'm taking a break (who am I kidding, I was already on a break) I'll come back to this story after 2.5 months with a fresh mind & start reading it from chapter 39 because there is no way that I'm leaving this story midway.

Also if you refuse to provide me the blog links after my grand return I'll pester you like these newbies & I'm gonna scrap & PM you on daily basis :P

That's all for today. Thank you.

Take care! And I love you M 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

Hey *waves awkwardly*


Okay so before you start hitting & kicking me, hear my tragic story. I know that's the third time I'm telling you my idiotic story but I can't help it.

So the point is that I have my major exam (you know which one) in like 2 months & I have shitload of syllabus to revise so I'm completely immersed in my books right now, so much that I have very little time to read something on IF & as you know I read hundreds of FFs on IF so it's a bit tough to catch up on all the stories. And then there is 'If Only' which I read only when I have a clear mind (which is not saturated with physics, chemistry & biology). So at the moment I'm not in a state to read If Only. I'm taking a break (who am I kidding, I was already on a break) I'll come back to this story after 2.5 months with a fresh mind & start reading it from chapter 39 because there is no way that I'm leaving this story midway.

Also if you refuse to provide me the blog links after my grand return I'll pester you like these newbies & I'm gonna scrap & PM you on daily basis :P

That's all for today. Thank you.

Take care! And I love you M 🤗




No problem honey, take care and good luck!
Make me proud 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Best of luck A :)

Even I'm on a break from this story but i do come on this thread once in a while to show M that i still care :)
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey can u pls send me the link of blog.
I m requesting u.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear writer! hii! 😊

I just saw this FF and I wanted to read it but I guess im too late here! 😕 Its all removed!

If Only is one of my favrt. movies.. and I'd love to read thos story of yours! are there any chances..
Please!

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