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Posted: 12 years ago
I am warmed and all happy, really. I know there are troubles ahead, and Shashi is still very much alive... but today, I am very happy. I have all new respect for Arnav for handling this the way he did - a parent first, a husband next.. and the betrayed lover in him is yet to make an appearance.

Aryan, and his mother. Aryan, and his family. Aaj main bahut khushi hoon. Kal ka kal dekhenge :) Thanks, Masam!
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was so wished to read ' if only' , i had already read some 16 chapters before, if possible please pm me your blog link ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey can u pls giv me ur blog link??i read ur ff if only b4..my previous id hackd n i ws unavailable in IF..in btwn u remove ur ff..cn u pls send me ur blog link..i want 2 read ur ff..
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey masam..had no idea that u started the second part..i hav been commenting regularly on the blog
for the first part..
please send me the link to the second part of this fanfic..
thanks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Paradise. So apt for the sunshine that has finally brought these 3 together under the same roof. I have learnt to take, and accept the turns, twists, and the circumstances that life puts upon these 3 as it comes…and Im going to do the same now.
Aryan and Khushi meeting, so soulful, and yet heartwrenching. You made me feel like I was there. Perhaps not one of them, but with them both.
Arnav is still cold, and I dont blame him…and atleast he has warned Khushi and is accepting of the fact that his son still needs his mother. Though the 2 years he has spent….its something I cannot imagine, and same goes for what Khushi has gone through…Life has been cruel to them, and for the time being I can only hope that the union of these 3 in this chapter continues to grow until they get their forever together….Lets see what you have planned ahead!
As for Alizah, obviously not too fond of her. She knows only one side of the story, so at this point, her judgement is not too important. But maybe she will play a bigger role…her need to seperate Khushi from Arnav will perhaps go the other way around….
Oh and La, likes! <3

But this update totally, and wholeheartedly is owned by Aryan, Khushi and Arnav…. and YOU!

Keep it up Masam! You have weaved a beautiful tale!

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Posted: 12 years ago
I've learnt from my "sources" that Arnav and Khushi met in If Only.

But there are miles to go before i sleep... miles to go before i sleep...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

I've learnt from my "sources" that Arnav and Khushi met in If Only.

But there are miles to go before i sleep... miles to go before i sleep...



I was going through this thread to know it is 'safe' to read the story now or not. I guess I have to wait a little :P

P.S. emphasis on little. Are you listening masam?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lazyleaves



I was going through this thread to know it is 'safe' to read the story now or not. I guess I have to wait a little :P

P.S. emphasis on little. Are you listening masam?



I'm seeing- all of it, Zehra 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
For Chapter 7 (Trading Yesterday) :

I wanted everything to be about Aryan first, but not only about Aryan. Now the divorce papers are breaking my heart all over again - and neither of them can get themselves to sign first, isn't it? Then why? I understand where Arnav is coming from, but does he really think Khushi left to go to Shashi just like that ? If he loved her, how is he so imperceptive to what she would have gone through; I would have liked him to at least once acknowledge her sacrifice rather than assuming that she was having a ball while he had to raise a child alone. Khushi's question is valid, did he ever think of her as his wife, as a woman who is the love of his life - or has it always been "once a wh**e, always a wh**e" ? The last scene gives me a tiny ray of hope, but when it comes to this story, I really fear hoping, the heartbreak becomes much more painful when it comes.

La is brilliant, insightful, observant, perceptive - she saw through Alizah. I don't want that woman to be the mother figure for Aryan, god please no! I am very unsure of her intentions, but I sure don't trust her.

What is wrong with Khushi, is it some kind of illness? No, M, she cannot be doomed to a life so full of pain and suffering; there has to be more to it. There is something about your writing which makes us hope even in the depths of sorrow and abyss, just cannot help it, and that has to mean something.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter Seven:
Alizah is so disgusting... hate her... hate d fact dat Aryan relies on her for so much... 😡😡
Poor Aryan... m so worried abt him... God its too much M... how more d poor soul is gonna suffer... it simply breaks my heart... 😭😭😭
I knw Arnav has tried watever he could to save Aryan frm d misery nd Khushi has alos did d same... bt trust me d way dey r beahaving now will totally shatter Aryan... so sad... 😭😭
La is so smarty... i so hope Khushi sees wat Alizah is dng to her son before its too late... 😊
Arrgghhh.. Divorce... i think dat was only left to break der relation... it will be d final nail to it...
I want Khushi to fight for her son ... She failed last tym, bt she shouldn't fail dis tym or else she will lose evrythng... Only she can take out d misery out of all of der lives - be it Aryan , Arnav or her own life...
m i hoping too much...?? how much i wish dis story could hav a happy ending...

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