MY INDEX:Nostalgic Reminisce NOTE ON PG-17

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Reminds me of my first day at work and first experience in Bangalore.😆 Except I had no Swayam following me 😛😆

loved it

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paro1311

@paro1311

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

nice:) reminded me of my first day in bangalore:) and my insistence to stay in a pg instead of relatives :)

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Ajit sahu

@sw1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Thnx for the pm and it was awesome i just loved the poem.

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

hey My Rockstar🤗

I know there is a place reserved for me...this post is just a bookmark...

Only u could have done this for me..a life story which i guess every single girl who decided to go out of the secured zone of their houses to the harsh corporate world can relate to...

The small small things u have taken care of...be it golgappe,shopping,blue or dreams...yeah i am a dreamer...i dream a lot...

The journey from a small town to a big City ..from bunch of known faces to the sea of unknown faces can never be smooth..its strange..challenging yet beautiful...when u get few sweet people to hold ur hand...in thick and thin ...

Swayam's POV was just so beautiful and yes PURE...the purity that reflects in his POV comes from ur heart...because u my love possess the purest heart ...LOVED THIS VERSES...Ahaa..when love takes the form of words..it will sound something like this

Sooraj ki pehli kiran si roshan "WO"
Nadiya ki dhara si alhad "WO"
Pakshiyo khanakti chahak si"WO"
Os ki boondo si nirmal "WO"
Mandir ki jyoti si Pavan "WO"

bachcho ki massom shararat si"WO"

meri sanso me anjaan mahak si "WO"
meri ankho basi chamak si "WO"
mere kaano me gunji khanak si "WO"
meri dhadkan me anchuye ehsaas si "WO"
mere dil me basi chahat si "WO"
"WO" meri zindagi me aayi..khubsoorat khwab si'.

'' "WO"

He followed HER ...her little nuances ..her cute habits...her uniqueness...attracted him..this can NOT be the end...The new girl in the city has to meet HIM...i know u will do it for me...I wont be able to tell u ..how much I love u ..so won't even try

Luv
Ur Di

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Amazing update yaar
sharon in bangalore for her first job
she roaming in city nd enjoying to the fullest.
Even swayam in same nd i think he behind her
lovely

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Beautifully penned 😊

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Ria

@Ria_SwaRon

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Hey,

I had bookmarked ur works long back, even when I was not a member.. but still never got time to read it..

and nw since u pmed me, I thought to give a read to it...

and now, I am thinking k why didn't I read ur works earlier?🤢

Coming to the OS,

It was awesome. You very beautifully described feeling of a individual living independently keeping Dii in mind.

It was short, sweet and simple which I guess would relate to many people who have some goals in their life and some dreams in their eyes.

So, wonderful work I must say... :) :)😊 😳

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Megha

@megsy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

himmiii

i see a lottt of deepii in your writeup...i dont think she cud had gotten a better gift than this!!!

u r a beautiful writer baby... the poem you wrote is gorgeous!!!

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

nice work himani..
beautifully written work..
loved each n every descriptions ...
beautiful...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

awesomeee😃

loved ittt😊

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