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Tyagi.dishant

@Tyagi.dishant

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Hey! Your writing and concepts are very nice but surprisingly you don't finish what you started. Would like to like to hear from you soon.😊

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Tyagi.dishant
Hey! Your writing and concepts are very nice but surprisingly you don't finish what you started. Would like to like to hear from you soon.😊

hey thanks a lot for liking...i wanted to finish them but...i lost my rythm..nd now..i m not able to focus so...sorry...i dont think will cont dem ..but if some day i feel like will surely let u knw...thanks again

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

i just start reading ur works now... will read the rest also and then comment back
if possible continue it... i will sure get back

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Hello friends...wrote a poem on swaron...its Swayums POV...hope u like it

Khamoshi tere mere darmiyaan
Keh jaati hai sau sau baatein
Khanakti si fiza...chehakti si hawa
Kar jaati hai dhadakane bechain

Kuch to baat hai is ankahe rishte mai
Jo meri najar bandhe teri najar
Jo teri dhadkan thame hai meri dhadkan
Is dil ki khushi basi hai teri hasi me

Ek hassen khwaab si tum basi ho meri palko me
Ke ek jara Haath badhau aur chu lu tumhe
Ke palke kholu aur ho rubaru tu mere
Ke tere hothon pe apna naam chu lu me apne hothon se

In aati jaati saanso ki laiy pe
In tez dhadkano ki dhun pe
Ek duje ka haath thaame
Bhandhe ek duje ko najro ki dor se
Thirakti pyaar ke jahan me do jaan

Meri zindagi ki nai shuruvaat ho tum
Mere har subah har shaam ki wajah ho tum
Meri saanse badhi hai ab teri saanso se
Is zindagi ki pehchaan ho tum

hope you all like it...if like plz do share...and yesss...do leave your comments...bye take care
luv Himani

Edited by OceanicRockStar - 11 years ago

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

u seriously write amazinggly

thr r no words to xplain how much i lykd it

the poem was sweet n deep

do write more 🤗

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Himya!!!hindi me q likhi poem
Yeh ladkibhi na koi baat nahi mant

Edited by tejukor - 11 years ago

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

lame my foot!!

such a lovely poem!!

thanks for the pm,.

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

amazinggg one hims👏

keep writin moreee😊

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Ammie

@AJ.morgan

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Hy himi 😊
Firstly thnx alot for giving me link.to.ur gallery, 😃
I quickly went through the titles of stories and they alll sound so intresting that eager to start reading 😳
So i shall soon start reading ur write ups...i love reading abt swaron and i knw am gna love...

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 11 years ago

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Ammie

@AJ.morgan

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

New girl in the city

One of the best title i ve seen, my personal fav title, and it was enough to make me read the os, it was dedicated to to deep on her bday which was sweet and i m sure the best bday gift from u for her.

Comming to os i thought the concept was so new so fresh just like ur writing, first sharon POV which was like so beautifully decribed, i cud visualise a very artistic type of beautiful city through ur writing and sharon's eyes.
And than swayam the lover boy following her that was just so so so beautiful. Very very different OS and i loved it. I m so surprised like how did you manged to write a story which is so short yet so amazing and complete. The poem was even amazing, i must say u r a great poet as i read ur other poems too, they really really good. I loved it.

This OS felt like intectual kinda romatic story. It was really poetic and the flow of it was just to die for...himi i've. Became ur fan yaar...every writer has their best piece of work andthis only the second os of urs i read so far and i feel this piece of writting is the best. Love u keep on rocking and writting such good stories and poem. U are awesome.