Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!*

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archa2810

@archa2810

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

finally arnav decided to make it up to khushi... awesome writing

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1987Trisha

@1987Trisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Oh God...after sooo long...

I just lovedd it...loveddd the way you have described each and every move..

plzzz plzzz update tomorrow😭😭

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Such a beautiful update. Completely felt Arnav's pain and then Khushi's sense of inferiority and sorrow.

I really hope Arnav is able to convey his feelings.

thanks a lot for his update and waiting for your next one.

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#604

at last.. thanks for the pm. Muddled,yes but then so are the hero and heroine.I liked it.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Could not believe my eyes! Maybe there is hope for Mohabbat door jane . . . This was such a gripping angst filled read that, I could not stop reading. You have an amazing way with words. Whatever you are studying, I hope it has to do with English because you are really gifted with this. So many words to describe what he was going through from his point of view and what the others could see happening to him. Love his hurt and acknowledgement of the fact that he was not the victim here, he needs to go out and fix what he has done to her. Love it!

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Mani

@DirtyDancing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

Finally u continued this one...
Loved the update.
Will be inactive for a while.
... Examtime...

Edited by sarun22 - 11 years ago

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IPKKNDTheWorld

@IPKKNDTheWorld

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#607

Finally, you are BACK.

And, what a re-entry.I totally loved this update.You weave the characters' emotions into words very delicately, so that it seems that we are living inside their heads.😊

Thnx for the PM.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#608

High in emotions.

What an intense chapter.

Very well written.

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#609

Omg! U updated finally. I almost lost hope. Awesome update. Arnav is burning in his own hell. I so hate to see this calm Khushi. It's very disturbing. I hope Arnav will win her back.

Thanks for the pm.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#610

Nafisa 🤗 I am so glad to see you back with an update for this very special SS!

I might sound like a broken record here but what the heck, noone portrays feelings as wonderfully as you do! It is simply perfection! The way you show Arnav's remorse makes me feel it all, Alot of people have neglected all the attitude, taunts, insults and hurt he caused Khushi earlier but you have brought all of that to light in a spectacular fashion.

Khushi's diary entry has had a massive impact on Arnav. And the silver lining in this update is Arnav's resolve to not give up. His realization that Khushi mattered beyond his level of comprehension. The way you orchestrated their meeting with him frozen and her avoiding eye contact was simply beautiful. I Love the Khushi you are portraying for us here, she still can't help but be concerned for the laad governor. Khushi's internal monologues were such a contrast to Arnav's. Arnav is drowning in guilt with Khushi being completely oblivious. The site of a dejected Khushi after Manorama's taunts and inturn Arnav's pain because of witnessing a dejected Khushi was yet again portrayed with perfection. I am at a loss for words and cannot wait to see what transpires next! All the very best for your final exam N!

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago