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cosmina

@cosmina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

''Arshix144''

...said all it was to said about your story!thank you both!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#612

oh what a surprise nafisa

that was an excellent update

nafisa, is all set to give us back and forth updates, I guess

lovely lovely update dear

waiting for tomorrow's update

iam happy to see u back in form

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varshapan

@varshapan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Yaya!! you updated...

and awww.. arnav is going all mushy. i loved the way you put their emotions into words. beautiful.

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

OMG

this is so beautifully written

how you portray Arnav's feelings, anguish, their evolution

I always loved Arnav for that, for the depth of his feelings and you are giving justice to the character

I am so so very happy that you are updating again and hope you will update again soon

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palakbitiya

@palakbitiya

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Hi there,

I really liked the details you have provided on the character's thought process. Please do continue...

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

nice update. I really like your writing style and how you weave and tell stories about a character through all of the other characters' observations. Arnav is falling apart, and Khushi is becoming very insecure. The two need a push to try and talk.

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

awesome update thanks for the pm

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

It was lovely to read an update on this story. I can't wait to read more!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Awesome update did a happy dance and then rember i sprained my ankle and it hurts loved the update heartbreaking emotional the emotions penned to the point we felt Arnav love and his feeling of not knowing how to let it out his feeling of missing her and wanting to see her and then se walks in like a breath of fresh air Anjali and Nk playing cupid so cute and then manorama cutting remark making her remember Asr cutting words about her aukaat breaking her little heart Arnav not understanding how to remove the memory awesome update thanks for the pm.

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Revathy Sugathan Nair

@revathysugathan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#620

Can' stay away from the forum esp this story dear. So as soon as I saw the message, my whole being lit up and I read the chapter 😆

Amazing update darling...the way their inner demons are being described...it's AWESOME 👏

When Arnav feels that twinge in his chest, I feel it too. And Khushi's reluctance in looking at him, I can feel that too. I could see how broken Arnav was feeling and how relieved he must have been to see her. And poor Khushi trying not to look at him and when Anjali tells her he is not well, she suddenly looks at him and is instantly worried. Oh there is no way in hell I can justify through my words what this update made me feel. GOD BLESS NANHEJI!!! 👍🏼🤗 and in some ways Mamiji too 😉

Am so happy that you updated this as I was fast becoming a hornbill ☺️

Can't wait to see what Arnav does to get Khushi to realise that he was not talking about her aukaat - he was just afraid to let her close. The poor guy deserves a break 🥺

Edited by revathysugathan - 11 years ago