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@-doe-eyes-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: TheThoughtCrime
I cried. True story. 😭

Sorry about that! :s But I'm kind of glad the emotions moved you that much, I guess it means I did something right :P

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Oh, and I love your username - I've only recently read '1984' and when I came across 'Thought Crime' it pinged in my head :P

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#582

You are a very intelligent writer,,,, the way your stories flow ,,,the constant shift between the past and present i am sure must be a meticulous task for you while writing but it never shows !

I really feel inadequate to express how much i enjoy your stories but i really do ... like now i really don't know what to comment but the fact is i love reading your works !

The parts where Arnav was associating her behavior back to her words from the diary left me feeling so choked up !!! Excellent Update !

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...pinky...

@...pinky...

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#583

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant! Please continue!!

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#584

amazing sotry!!

loved ittt

please update soon

is the shyam issue present in this one too?

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#585

Awesome update! NK is awesome! I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#586

arnie my man
finally he gets it and when he does its too late
or is it i wonder
i am sure that nk is right he cant still make up for it go and do it
after all you are arnav singh raizada
except thats what got him into this mess he was being ASR and not arnie
well i guess this time he does what nk suggested or else all shall be lost
it seems as if she is keeping to her resolution
though even payal can see that something is going on between them
shame she didnt get the right thing as of yet
hmmm maybe she will if not nk is there right
wow to think nk got whats going on between them and no one else has funny right
but thats the way it is i guess
wow he is seeing her everywhere and yet she aint there
and this is getting to him right
well lets hope for the best then

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#587

lovely update. u have a way of describing their innermost desires, expressions, feelings

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Iman

@ArShiDelena

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#588

Awesome...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#589

At last, I have finally managed to read the update.

In fact I reread all the 7 chapters simply to revel in the pleasure of your amazing skill with language and metaphor which you use so well to plumb the depths of each and every emotion that your characters experience,

Khushi comes out of all this with such grace, while NK proves to be a true friend to Arnav.

NK is amazing in that despite ASR's behaviour with him, he has recognised ASR's need for someone to guide him in his journey back to being the Arnav he once was.

What a powerful mirror Khushi's diary has proved to be for ASR, he is seeing himself for what he has become. What an avalanche of remorse a few simple words have unleased in him!

This, as all your other stories, DE, is absolutely brilliant.

Now please update and put Arnav and us out of our misery!😊