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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: fffan123
Brilliant. Waiting to read next part soon.

Thank you :) I'll try to update as soon as I can!

Originally posted by: varshapan
wow.. so it was nk who could see through asr and get to arnav and help him find answers to his despair...

very sweet chapter..

Thank you! I'm super glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: summaiyasayed
nice one

updt soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

Nafi !!! I super loved this updates. The timing, the scenes, and most importantly, the sequence. Just brilliant.

A groveling, troubled Arnav seeking for a way to apologise, to make up for his wrongs - hell yeah!

Loved NK in this update, "Is there someone upset with you?". He knew just what to to say. And then the hiccups scene. No matter where they stand, they seem to permanently occupy each other's subconscious. They are never out of the other's mind. Their thoughts. This situation is just so quintessentially ArHi... sigh.

That Khushi has been blaming herself without so much as lifting a finger at him is gnawing at his insides, isn't it? I guess thats what it takes to awaken the Arnav in the ASR. I loved how soon this update came after the previous one. Surprise me again, please ? :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: clover
I hope arnav comes up with something good.😊

Lets see :) Thank you for reading!

Originally posted by: katunkka
Oh sweet nk. arnav should give him more credit.

Yup, he really should - but ASR is judgemental nah? :P Lets get Arnav out of him first :P

Thank you for reading!

Originally posted by: mandy15
awesome dear:)

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
nafisa, another mind blowing update dear
wonderful - iam loving it

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it :D

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: damonzlady
Loved loved NK in this update! Hopefully
he will prove to be the push Arnav needs
to make it up to Khushi!
Also loved the way you've shown Arnav's
regret!

Thank you so much!! So glad you loved NK - yup, he's the only one stubborn enough and immune to the ASR-ness enough to push him into action :P Really glad you liked the depiction of his regret! Thanks so much for reading and sharing your views!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: essess
I dont know what it is but your writing is GREAT! and powerful and sooo full of the emotions that had made me love the serial and now make me love your story. This one is soo especially poignant-- love it! Thanks for writing!

Oh! and God I hope they get together soon, the pain i feel while reading this is horrible!

Aww oh my gosh, thank you so much!! I'm much flattered and happy that you thought so :D I loved the fever-pitch emotions of the show, and that's what I tried to bring into my writing and you're saying you like that is just the biggest reward I could ask for! Thank you sooo much!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: aquagal
Loved this NK...
He has such a deep insight..
You brought out all the emotions so correctly..
NK & Payal are the two people who have understood their siblings..
NK has shown Arnav the way without being too intrusive..

@bold - so glad you noticed that :D Yup, NK realised that indiscreetly poking his nose into Arnav's business wouldn't get him anywhere, so he did it in a way that Arnav would be able to live with too :P I'm really glad you're liking NK and Payal - they're very important to the story so yay! And also happy you liked the emotions depicted here :) Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: shree10
wow! Finally you gave me what I was desperately looking forward to! It was beautiful chapter.

Some line really touched my heart and I wish we could see this pain reflected in Arnav instead of that farce of an apology on the show! I have always been partial towards Khushi even if I may not have approved of some of her actions.

Thanks again for such a long update. It almost surpaased teh length of last 2 updates together. Hope you get well sooon and post a new update here.

YAAAY! I'm especially happy that you liked this chapter because...well you know :P Thank you so much for staying with me, and I hope the wait was worth it! The redemption has finally begun :) I understand what you mean - Arnav's redemption in the show was lacking, and that's a euphemism. Hope I can live up to your expectations though! Thank you for reading :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: archa2810
beautiful... Nk has guided arnav in the right direction

Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: 5armad
i am really excited that there are 3 new parts to catch up on. awesome! looking forward to a great read!

I really hope you'll enjoy them! Let me know what you thought :)

Originally posted by: sumond
I read all chapters in one go. You are a gifted writer, keep up the good work.

Thank you so much! That's really sweet of you to say :) So happy you thought so!

Originally posted by: kamtokdin
There is always more to NK than meet the eyes

That there is :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: toblerone
oh wow, i missed so many updates!! but hey, i could read them all in one go now 😛
very nice updates!! i guess the last chapter was my favourite one, with arnav realising his mistakes and feeling utterly bad for his deeds, and nk of all people trying to cheer him up and supporting him..

can't wait to find out what arnav is going to do next 😊

Hey! Hope you liked all the updates :D Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you're liking the story so far :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: SS88
Oh poor Khushi. Imagine that, all-day-long hiccups. I'd probably go mad. I always like NK for his deep perceptive nature. And here , you've shown Payal as she was- the woman who knew Khuhsi inside out.Don't know how the CVs forgot that. Waiting for part B.

Lol - the hiccups couldn't be helped ; not when Arnav was busy remembering her the whole time :P And oh, I'm so glad you liked both NK and Payal! I loved the characters as they were initially penned by the CVs and I'm so glad you liked them here! Thank you so much :)