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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: revathysugathan
Sweetheart I loved it...The explanation of what we see on Arnav's face, and how NK knows Arnav's feelings.

But the best part was the way NK saw the crestfallen expression of Arnav's face & the realization that the one who needs love the most is ARNAV himself.

Thank you sooo much for such a beautiful update - my heart's bleeding for Arnav and Khushi 💔

Waiting for more dear - please make it soon ❤️

Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it - especially NK's character development and insight, because he's going to be a major part of the coming chapters :) Thanks so very much for reading, I'm thrilled you enjoyed the updates!

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Loved the update! Looking forward to the next chapter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: dumas
She was everywhere...and yet nowhere at all.amazing update loved it loved how you described both wanting to see each other no craving to see each other yet avoiding arnav wanting her to be their loving the two and khushi staying away because she does not want to cause trouble to her sister new family loved nk take on asr and khushi loved the update beautifully doesn't thanks for the pm

Thank you! So glad you liked the update and all of its elements!! Thanks for reading - and for this lovely picture :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
Amazing updateLoved it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: snoopy84
great update

Thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: RebeccaDaphne
Hooray you updated, thank you so much! Can't wait to see what happens...though I kinda hoped NK would make him jealous, I'm intrigued to find out what Arnav will do next!
Please update soon!

Thank you for reading! :) There will be more jealousy moments in the future, I can assure you :P (Personal fan of jealous Arnav :P ) And what Arnav does next...well I can't give that away, but you'll find out more in the next chapter :) Thanks again!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: samarablog
Hey,
Don't know your name, lets say Friend, this is such an intense update..the Heartbreak..u are explaining each and every possible emotion for Arnav, Khushi and even NK and Payal. I am soo fascinated reading it, its breaking my heart; let me tell you. Gonna re-read it just to feel more...
its heartbreaking :)

Hi :D My name's Nafisa, but a lot of people round here call me Nafi as well :) I'm so, so happy to hear you enjoyed the intensity of the update, and all of the intertwining emotions of all the different characters - I'm seriously thrilled you liked this, thank you so much! :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: segad
Love NK what a great brother/friend to have!

the hiccups thing was unexpected but entertaining. Arnav's self flagellation is getting him nowhere. maybe he should take up Nk's suggestion and make it right

Lol, I absolutely adore NK myself, and I loved the support he was to Khushi and Arnav in the show, so I'm really glad you like him here :)

And lol, yup the hiccups - the chapter was getting very intense so I thought a light-hearted interval would help...and then of course there was the superstition that if someone hiccups it means someone is remembering them. And Arnav is basically thinking of nothing but her, and Khushi gives away she's thinking about him at the end too :P

Arnav is in self-pity mode right now, especially since he knows of Khushi's decisions through her diary - she didn't get angry or blame him, so it's like she's just rejected him from her life without giving him a say about it. But not to worry, he'll be back in action soon :P

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: Rhysenn
Arnav has fallen hard into the pits of love. Seriously, amazing update!

Yup, that he has, and it's about time he accepts it :P Thank you so much for reading - I'm seriously glad you liked this!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: soppy
She was everywhere...and yet nowhere at all.your writing is so strong the reader cant help but feel every emotion!...the chapter was just perfect!
i wish you could update more often!...but i guess good things come to those who wait.
again it was perfect.

Thank you so much! I'm really happy you experienced the emotions I tried to incorporate into this update :)

Sigh, I wish I could update more often...actually I've been more regular recently than I've been for a long time, but I'll try to do better :) Thank you for your patience, and for reading and commenting!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: LittlePrincess8
a nice emotional one...Arnav is hurting bad ...sorry to say but he deserves it...and Khushi is as usual ...lets see how Arnav will "make up"

Yes, he definitely deserves it...but yup, he'll make up for it, we just have to wait and see how :) Thank you so much for reading - I'm glad you liked it!