Arhi SS|New Year's Resolutions|LastPart- B&C p130 *complete!*

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#251

awesome update asr denying that she gets to him was so cute the man was fighting his feeling in every step trying to find a weaken spot loved the update akash wait for his temperamental brother to explode because of his act was thrown of because he was quite and accepting awesome update beautifully done thanks for the pm

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#252

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p.s - It's very well written. I'm kind of sleepy...so I'd form a nice comment later 😃

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#253

wow that's some denial!great update!

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shai95

@shai95

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

This is Amazing ! I came across this today and found it fantastic ! The words you use Goodness ! I have to open a dictionary after almost every 2-3 lines ! And the emotions you portray with so much ease ! Hats off to you !
Continue soon ! Please PM me if u update this !

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maazia

@maazia

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Nice update. A very clear insight into Arnav's thought process.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Oh, this was lovely, Nafisa. Yes, I am back in town :)

May I say I liked Aakash more than Arnav in this update? *Please don't kill me*

Arnav's internal monologue was fun..how hard he tries to convince himself that his indifference is not just a facade, that he does not care. Come to think of it, Arnav is a funny man. Screwed up and funny. And lovely and difficult and beautiful and wonderful, of course :P

I admire this shrewd and observant Aakash, scared to his brother yet full of gratitude. And stuck in the most unbelievable preposterous situation one can imagine. Oh dear.

So, how long will our Arnavji manage without catching a glimpse of his Khushi? Oh this is going to be such fun! Gimme more, Nafisa. Lovely update!

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

hey hun

sorry for being late again..

awesome, awesome part ⭐️👏

just loved it 😃😃

akash was hilarious 🤣... i loved his part 😃. i burst out laughing when arnav caught him half-asleep 😆.. it brought back all those good memories . also, i especially enjoyed reading about his admiration n respect for arnav 👍🏼. that was real sweet n touching 😳.

i liked how calm arnav was after the meeting with khushi. like u mentioned, he was raging mad before and i was worried poor akash would still have to face him. it was nice to see him so casual. i loved when he remembered he had forgotten to bring a pants for akash n that he was fighting not to laugh at him 😆.

my fav part of this chapter has to be arnav's denial 👍🏼. hats off swt, it was brilliantly described 👏👏. i just loved it n i must admit i didnt expect him to react like this but nevertheless it was a pleasant surprise 😊.

i thought he would be a little soft with khushi and honestly i didnt want that because it would have been too soon.

loved how he was trying to convince and assure himself of his behaviour. he was so confident he would see her again because he told her he would. so sure that they will be back to square one.

it was too amazing hun ⭐️⭐️

looking forward to the next part

thanks for the pm

take care 🤗