MN FF*Love and Hate*#3--Epilogue on pg 14 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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1.what's your view about this story?


It's a great story it shows how a person fallen in love despite he doesn't believe in emotional longing he even used the wrong way to get his desire but the love changed him,it shows though how much hatred you put for a person if he really love one or other day you will fall in love with him.

2.which character you liked best?


Mayank...Because change in behaviour was seen in him.How Nupur presence had actually changed him better person

3.your favourite scene?

Where Mayank was admitted in hospital and Nupur relizes she loves him

4.your favourite part of the story?

Where Mayank asked Nupur ,she could leave him if she want,he freed her from all boundries and Nupur confesses her love to him

5.how did you find my writing?

Excellent,awesome,great,Mindblwoing..
you writing enables the person to feel that emotion which you had potrayed in your writing..whether the emotion of happiness or misery..
You have the capability to make someone smile and cry...and sometimes you really made the reader speechless..that he/she fell short of words to explain the part ,he/she become so emotional that words are not enough to express their views.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Beautiful ending,Maria apu!!
Finally Shiv Bhushan accepted mayUr's relationship whole heartedly.
You've portrayed Mayank,Nupur and Shiv's emotions beautifully through your writings..
How love changed mayank from a lusty person to a responsible,lovable ,caring husband..
How Mayank's love for Nupur reduced the hate in Nupur's heart for Mayank and filled it with immense love for him..
Shiv as a father at first couldn't accept Mayank, the person who was responsible for his daughter's pain but finally he accepted him for his daughter's happiness.. He could feel that Mayank is the only person who can fill his Nupur's life with love..
Now the answers of your questions:-
1- My view of this story..it's a pure love story which started with lust and hatred but finished with just pure love..
2- My favorite character..of course Mayank.. Not just because I love*blush* him but the way his character changed from a lusty person to a lovable, admirable person just amazed me..
3- My favorite scene when Shiv forgave Mayank for his deeds..
4- my favorite part of the story is when Mayank told Nupur to leave him cause he only wanted Nupur's happiness and Nupur could never be happy with the person who gave her only pain.. How love changed Mayank..SIGH!! Really love can change anything..
5- How did I find your writing.. Please don't tell me to write about your writing skill cause my words are not enough to justify your writings.. How much I write but still it won't be enough to praise your writings..
Waiting for the epilogue...
Looove you*hugs*,muuuah!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

So u ended this FF
though we all know all good things must come to an end but still i gonna miss this ff so much..
anyway thank u so much for giving us sch a beautiful ending
so finally mayank was forgiven
i know shiv was to rude to mayank but it was natural
he loved nupur so much na so it was not easy for him to forgive Mayank easily...
but at the end Mayur love won the heart of shiv...
a very nice ff dear where love won over hatred an as well as lust..
very beautifully written the whole thing----------------

ok now coming to ur questions---

1.what's your view about this story?

Actually u said everything at the end of ur final update. U wrote so beautifully that I don't hink I can explain my one such a nice way..

U said na "If hate wounded you'Love heels that pain'If hate is envy, anger, revenge'Love is kind, Love gives Life, Love is a path of flowers. If Hatred makes a person blind Love gives it to light.."

Its so true'. At first Maynak was craving for NUPUR due to her outlook not accept her solely.. but later he couldn't but fall in love with nupur. Here love won over lust And so did nupur. She hated mayank but later she also fall in love with Mayank. Here love won over hatred .. so at the end we found love is so strong that it has power to change everything' Mayur love were pure and that's why finally they were with each other..

2.which character you liked best?

i loved both maynk and nupur. becoz fof Nupur maynk changed frm bad guy to a good, responsible and a nice person...and loved mayank bcoz he changed himself for Nupur nad Nupur only...

3.your favourite scene?

when mayank was in hospital and nupur was crying like made and confessed that how much she loves maynk and also when she defended mayank infron of her dad..

4.your favourite part of the story?

oyeee same question again... anyway all parts are my fav...:D

5.how did you find my writing?

obviously u r an awesome, wonderful writer. we got many different story frm u and loved them so mcuh👏👏

may ALLAH bless u dear

Keep writing..
Take care



Edited by Faria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Stunnin uptaad, I'll miss it<333
Edited by ..Amira.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Shefali,humayra,Faruuu🤗love u girls...ll reply to ur beautiful comments v soon🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Brilliant FF f yours Maria
it was brillioant FF
you've portrayed emotions really very well that i cold feel them
THis FF was my fav and will be fav.
i loved both Mayur here..the journey was hate to love was brilliant i enjoyed it a lot
plz come up with the new FF soon
will miss it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Superb ending of a brilliant Love
Loved the way yyou showed how Hate turned into love
Love each and every line of this FF
you're a brilliant,Amazing writer dear
Superb
hatts of to you
loved your work
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Fantabolous update
Beautiful ending dear one of your best FF
i Loved this FF throughout.
There are many scenes fav in this FF,Mayur confession,their realization,their consumation each and every scene
i loved this FF and i am gonna miss it badly
you are A Brilliant writer and My favourite writer
please do write another Mayur FF.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
reserved:
will gonna miss this FF badly.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
superb update dear
loved it
i want most romantic, sibllings and along with cute mayur moments dear
waiting for epiloge vow bhi linggg wala
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon

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