ArHi FF -True Lies- Chapter 3

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mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

That was something.. Interesting.. Me loved it... <3

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norolim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Aanchal15

I want to hug you,Avi..you have already set the wheels in motion ...

Khushi , an assassin ( reminded me of, The Jackal ), victorious in silencing her target, and then blending into the exodus of people, ... She was placid (despite the victim receiving a caveat of his impending death) , and then things turning fortuitous...She seems to be proficient ...

Am impatient, now...and thanks heaps for the PM :))))

Omg! Hugs to you too! I had no idea that you knew about The Jackal! It was an absolutely amazing movie!

I just ADORE your characterization of my Khushi. ^_^ She's lethal, but charming. Read on hon ;)

thank you for the wondeful comment as usual :)

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norolim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: maverickmartin
I... love it!👏
That's an amazing concept, Avi. Khushi is like the sort of deadly but hot spy/assassin you normally get in those thriller novels, but since it's Khushi Kumari Gupta, it's gonna be a hell lot better, right? 😉

Can't wait to see how this unfolds.. Will ASR be a target for her?

Hmmm.. Plausible, but is it probable? Dunno.

Right. I'm ranting.

Brilliant read, for a prologue. Update soon! 😆

lol, thank you! I'm glad you liked it :) Yes, I love this concept ad well, and I also happen to be in love with K's avatar ^_^. Abhi its just the prologue, and you're already jumping to conclusions? Lol!

thank you! Wait to find out more ;)

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rozina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Woah!!!!! I didn't see that coming, your FF is already so different from other stuff I've read. Seems very interesting and I can't wait to read more. Fabulous prologue!

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norolim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: rozinab
Woah!!!!! I didn't see that coming, your FF is already so different from other stuff I've read. Seems very interesting and I can't wait to read more. Fabulous prologue!

thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the story :)

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amritab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

great premise - looking forward to the story!

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Anon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Page ten I'm on. 10.

And your update was on page seven.

That's three pages past. I'm so disappointed in myself

I shall be more efficient next time ^_^

- - Copy & Pasting the e-mail cah I'm amazing? 😎 - -

You are absolutely, mind-puggingly AMAZING.

And I've got to say - you really, really shouldn't have sent me the Prologue, because now I want to read the rest of it!!! :( It was intriguing, mysterious - who is the guy she wanted to kill? And why him? Why is she a killer?!

SO MANY BLOODY QUESTIONS >.<

Gahh. You're brilliant, you are.

Thanks for deeming me worthy enough to read this first! :') LOL

I love you :*

Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 12 years ago

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niharika111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

That was mind blowing..impeccable writing, out of the box concept and perfectly executed...looking forward to reading more of it...it has such morbid intensity and is layered with such an impending sense of doom...very hard-hitting and bloody sinister! I am loving it...

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norolim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: niharika111
That was mind blowing..impeccable writing, out of the box concept and perfectly executed...looking forward to reading more of it...it has such morbid intensity and is layered with such an impending sense of doom...very hard-hitting and bloody sinister! I am loving it...

I am blushing! Thank you so very much! Your words mean the world, and I hope you stick with me and my sis throughout the story :)