ArHi FF -True Lies- Chapter 3

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nia252

@nia252

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

dat was surely different

khushi as a killer

interesting idea

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

ohkay...that was just *wow*

u never cease to surprise me!!!

cant wait for more...u have me hooked now!!!!!

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

hmm... well this is a different approach... i'm really not fond of such stories, but i am a 100% sure that you'll do justice to the story!

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

I want to hug you,Avi..you have already set the wheels in motion ...

Khushi , an assassin ( reminded me of, The Jackal ), victorious in silencing her target, and then blending into the exodus of people, ... She was placid (despite the victim receiving a caveat of his impending death) , and then things turning fortuitous...She seems to be proficient ...

Am impatient, now...and thanks heaps for the PM :))))

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

I... love it!👏

That's an amazing concept, Avi. Khushi is like the sort of deadly but hot spy/assassin you normally get in those thriller novels, but since it's Khushi Kumari Gupta, it's gonna be a hell lot better, right? 😉

Can't wait to see how this unfolds.. Will ASR be a target for her?

Hmmm.. Plausible, but is it probable? Dunno.

Right. I'm ranting.

Brilliant read, for a prologue. Update soon! 😆

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Assasin? Khushi Kumari Gupta?? Brilliant prologue...high intrigue value...

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

@dreamyshadows: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊

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Shay

@shay1990

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

RES!

Because Avi threatened us all

Edited*

So here i am as promised! I was actually going to copy and paste my email to you like Anissa (lol) but i can't seen to find it So I'll save that for chaptaaahhh waaan 😉

HAYYYEEE!!!

The intensity. The gripping moment. The disgustingly beautiful descriptions... You blow my mind Avinaash. You really do, How the hell do you expect me to give you negative feedback?! You tell me that now? *looks intently at Avi*

EXAAACTLLYY!

It's just not possible *folds arms defiantly*

The fact that you have managed to create something so different and so off the scale is beyond me. And you have done it so elegantly my little amazing darling you!

You just know Khushi is going to be BADASS in this! My kind of Khushi 😉
You don't want to mess with her... Assassin jo ban gayi woh.

So to end... My favourite part? Pure and simple, this line:

Appearances ruled the World.

Why? Because it's bang on! This line punched me in the face with it's realism. Fantastic Avi.. You are FANTASTIC! Because appearances DO rule the world. It's all a mask... It's all a lie. #RealTalk

So that's it from me. But one more thing though..

I love you ❤️

Edited by shay1990 - 12 years ago

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

this is very different but very good

khushi as an assassin and a reputable one it seems too

looking forward to more

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

As promised...

WHAT.WAS.THAT?

I cannot even form words good enough to express how much it is killing me not to know the entire story right this minute! I am not surprised curiosity killed the cat...I am afraid of being the first human though! LOL!

Where do I start? The description in the first quarter, you know something shady is about to go down! You just know it, you can feel it! And then you reveal the prey, and you understand that the phone call he just took will be his last, not because of his fear, or whatever he heard on the phone, but you can feel the sheer determination of his predator to hunt him down! And hunt him, she does!

Khushi - A assasin! Who looks like a middle-class Lucknowi girl! OMFG! I cannot wait for this! I hope you are updating twice a day! I really really do! Everything else be damned! LOL!

<3 u loads!